[Midnight] Dark Tower's Shadow (Updated 12/10)

handforged said:
This keeps getting better and better! Sir Durgen shall prove to be an interesting ally, I'm sure.

Right before the Esben adventure I put a post on the Midnight Yahoo group and out among my friends for Esben NPC's and Durgen was sent to me by my buddy, Pete. I have to thank him, Durgen is fantastic...wait 'till you read his whole story. Tis a doozy.

Truth is the three main tower wardens were the only Esbens I made up. Vildar was in the book and the other children were sent to me by people in the Yahoo group and my buddies. It was a nice way to get NPC's because suddenly the Esben children became a very twisted and very ecclectic group and everyone named had a tragic, wild and desperate story lurking behind them.

Thanks for reading and to everyone who contributed, thanks for participating. You've all made Port Esben a richer and more frightening place.
 

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The Ballad of Karhoun Esben

The Great Manticore Hunt, Part I

I am Karhoun Esben and I am a hunter of the Shadow’s minions, a good man, a proud Northman.

I had never been so proud. In all of my life I have never fought alongside my fellow Northmen, always alongside Orcs or Goblins. These are good men, soldiers and sailors, all looking to me because I am the hunter.

Including Durgen and Odannin, his second in command, we had sixty men, 20 spears, 20 swords and 20 bows. Our blessing is the Channeler, Elowan, who seems a beardless boy, a treasure Durgen has kept as a secret on his flagship for these past years.

We held council, drawing in the gorge's sand, a place they suggested when I mentioned that we’d need somewhere confining, somewhere he couldn’t fly away once the trap was sprung. The council was made of the finest Northmen I have ever fought met. Sir Durgen, my mute brother, the madman usurper who leads these noble insurgents. Odannin, my brother’s second in command and my brother's voice, translating my brother’s sign into words, his cleft-scarred skull holds its fair share of war-wisdom. Cole, leader of the archers and Elowan, the beardless Channeler.

To the south and west were cliff walls with nothing but rock and the occasional weed clinging fern. North were waterfalls, making tremendous noise and putting mist everywhere. At the bottom of the falls was a shallow pool and under the falls was a shallow cave. East were woods, where we entered the gorge down a perilous slope.

They looked to me with my Theros Obsidia training, using the Shadow’s training in treachery and cunning against one of the Shadow’s minions. This fight was going to be filthy, using every dirty little trick I knew.

The waterfall would deaden its hearing, which was good, the beast had amazing senses. Next I would deaden its smell. They had brought bodies with them, so they could claim they were trophies, dead insurgents. We would put the corpses to different use.

The Manticore loves nothing more than eating. We would roast him a feast. We will gorge the monster and when its belly is fat and it feels like napping, fat and lazy, we will strike with arrows and steel.

We hid archers in the woods and behind the waterfall. Spearmen were in a pit under the pile of bodies that I would cook. Some men would act as new travel companions and help me cook him dinner. We would tell the Manticore that Unaros had summoned him but he was praying behind the waterfall, in the shadows.

Sir Durgen’s unconscious squire, Kylie, would be hidden in the cave with half of the archers, bound and gagged in case the creature can sense the shadow’s taint, if any such thing can be smelled. The other half of the arches would be hidden in the woods, another pit. Cole thought the waterfall might do harm to the archer’s bowstrings but it was a chance we had to take.

Elowan will be alone on top of the cliff, ready to rain magicks down and keep the creature from flying away. He tried to explain his spell to me but I have no mind for it. If it would bind the Manticore’s wings it was fine enough for me. Durgen would have no battleplan hinged on magicks and so we tied five barbed spears with ropes, hoping to keep the creature anchored if need be. Durgen apologizes that he cannot spare men to guard Elowan while he hides above us on top of the cliff.

If it gets away it would destroy our boats on the distant shore and hunt us to the last…if we were lucky. If we were unlucky it would flee and tell of our treachery. My hope was that it would be too vain to flee, or too hungry for more man-flesh. No, my hope is that it won’t get away, that we will kill the bastard.

We would wait for Elowan to cast the Web upon its wings and then we would attack.

Then it was a flurry of activity as Northmen dug pits for hiding, piled the Manticore’s meal and made sure they were hidden from the air. I had never even considered killing this beast when I met it last. It was far beyond my meager sword’s mortal reach. I thought to myself: This is no angry Oruk who has stolen your sword. This is a monster, bred by Izrador himself to hunt and kill men.

I am the only one the Manticore has met and so I will be the one who talks to it while it eats. I shuddered to think that I would be matching wits with this beast. I know the wilds and bladework but this game is new. If I lose I die. Ancestors please watch my tongue.

In frustration and nerves I cleaved a dead tree next to the pool with my newly won Vardatch. We used the wood to begin the cooking fire. Durgen throws in the Manticore spike, freely given to Unaros when we were in Whitecliff. It fizzles as it burns. The Manticore has been summoned. We have no idea when it will arrive.

The bodies begin to cook and after the hair is burned off the smell is not bad. I am ashamed to admit that my mouth watered. Perhaps I am weak.

The wait was agony. The late afternoon’s sun went down and shadows grew. Naturally, it would appear at night. The cooking fire casted a terrible glow over the falls, making everything appear ominous.

I prayed to Ull for the hunt and offered a prayer to Tyr, who put his hand in the Fenris Wolf’s mouth.

A flap of wings was heard overhead. It circled once and circled again. Then it flew away.

After minutes that felt like days it landed, red fur glowing in the firelight, bearded face wider and more ferocious than any face should be. Its wings folded neatly behind its back and it perched on a bed of rock across from the fire.

The Manticore asked, “Did your Legate summon me, Esben-spawn?”

I bowed, “My father sends his regards from Port Esben, great Manticore.”

Its eyes narrowed and without another word it flew away again. Thinking back, mention of my father would arouse my suspicion too. After a few minutes it landed again, claws flexing, scraping the rock.

Again, I bowed, “Unaros is praying in that cave, Lord Manticore.”

“Then summon him to me. I have no time to waste on young, ambitious Legates.”

I nodded and motioned to the fire, “He ordered that I not interrupt his meditations but I am to feast you if you are kind enough to wait.”

A deep purr came from its lion-ish body, bat wings folded on its red furred back.

I brought the Manticore the first of its man-flesh. It smelled the body carefully, thinking of my father’s penchant for poisons, no doubt. Then, it tore into the body, claws flexed, teeth rending. Blood and organs spilled out onto the rock. In three gulps and the twig-like snaps of uncounted bones it was done. It had swallowed a man in the time it takes me to draw a bow and fire it.

It wiped its mouth with the back of its paw and purred again, “More, Esben-spawn, bring me more.”

I did, I brought the beast five more roasted bodies and it ate each one.

No spell, no magicks came down to bind its wings.

While it digested its five man meal, the Manticore and I made pleasant conversation.
 

you're kidding me right?

right?

you're just going to stop there?

what about my nerves man?

I mean what gives, how I am supposed to sleep at night?

I NEED MORE!
 

handforged said:
you're kidding me right?

right?

you're just going to stop there?

what about my nerves man?

I mean what gives, how I am supposed to sleep at night?

I NEED MORE!

My job as a writer is done.

I will try to get on it and post another tonight or tomorrow and complete the hunt.
 


The Ballad of Karhoun Esben

The Great Manticore Hunt Part II

If someone had told me that it was my fate to die while making polite conversation with the Manticore I wouldn’t have believed them. But there I was, waiting for the Manticore to see through my ruse, to discover a lie. If it weren’t for the fact that the beast likes to hear itself talk I would no doubt have been long dead already.

“…and the Oruk are just Orcs. They took the toughest and finest of the Orcs after the battle of the Second Age and bred them for strength in the breeding pits of the north. Oruks will never admit it but they are just Orcs, a mite taller, a bit tougher but only Orcs for that.”

It picked its teeth with one of its black claws, glinting in the firelight, smell of cooked man still lingering on the air.

“Do you know any Channelers who would be watching your party? Was a Channeler traveling with you?”

I lied, “No, Lord Manticore, none.”

“Lord Manticore, I do like that. Nice,” he purred but then his tone changed, grew more dangerous, “Are you sure, Esben?” He took out Elowan's, the Channeler’s Lorebook, tossed it onto the ground. I thought about Durgen, refusing to spare men to guard the Channeler.

I began to stammer out a reply, another lie to pile onto the other lies I’ve told but the words never came out. Its claws ripped past my chainmail into my chest, twirling me like a child’s toy. That its bite missed my neck was pure chance. I landed in the shallows of the pool, hitting the rocks, bleeding for the Manticore's claws.

I could hear the roaring of the falls, the cackling of the fire, the beating of the Manticore’s wings and Durgen let loose an inhuman battle-cry. His wordless roar called our Northmen to battle. Durgen ran across the shallows in front of me, drawing the beast’s tail spikes. His chest was a bloody mess as spikes made a pincushion of his armor. Despite his wounds he threw his spear. The barbed spear chased the Manticore through the air, rope tied to a tree in order to keep it from flying away.

The spear missed.

Arches erupted from the forest in formation and swords and spearsmen filed out of nearby pits. Durgen yanked on the rope meant to anchor the Manticore to the earth, returning the spear to his hand while I regained my footing. Again he let the spear fly and again he missed.

In fear and panic I wondered if he was missing on purpose, secretly in league with the monster.

The Manticore was in the air, letting spikes fly from his tail at our soldiers, hovering beneath where our Channeler was supposed to cast magicks upon the beast, tying its wings together.

All of the roped spears missed and now it hovered out of the rope’s range.

Cole’s archers let loose two volleys of arrows that wreaked havoc on the beast and Odannin and the other spears left their marks in the monster’s flesh.

Spikes had taken their toll on our men, a few had died or had fallen to his claws before he took flight.

As it hovered, in fury, I threw my Vardatch at it. The Orcish Cleaver was not meant for such use. My furious throw had no effect on anything but the cliff wall.

It turned and flew out of the gorge.

It is gone. We failed and now we will die.

Durgen began signing to Odannin who helped rally them men, “To the boats, it will make for our boats! To the ships, men!”

While the men made for the ships I grabbed Odannin and begged for men, “We can still hunt it. There are almost two dozen holes in the creature. It bleeds. I can track it.”

Cole volunteered himself and nine of his arches who can be rather quiet in the woods. I will track this bastard across the Pellurian if need be. We climbed the side of the gorge, up the cliff-face. Two men fell and we left them behind, not able to see if they were well or wait for them to climb again.

By torchlight I found blood on a rock, where it had stopped to lick its wounds. Now we were hunting the hunter.

We came over a hillock that gave a good view of the boats, where I expected to see carnage or a battlefield or the smashed remains of the boats. Neither were apparent. Durgen had arranged the men in a circle perimeter, shooting fire arrows into the night in search of the beast. I caught the creature flying a cautious perimeter, seeking a weak spot in Durgen’s defenses.

Torches extinguished we grew quiet and followed, waiting for the beast to strike.

Out of a copse of trees it took an archer out of Durgen’s perimeter but the other men drove it away. The death was swift and quieter than I would have liked. The Northman barely had time to scream.

It didn’t know we were here. We grew quiet and followed it to the tree where it hid and perched. We crept towards it, bowstrings notched with arrows, barely breathing. Like a thunderclap a twig broke under an archer’s foot. Spikes flew out of the night, going by my head like arrows.
Two more men fell to the Manticore’s spikes. Then it closed, flying low over my head in the midst of all of us. I cleaved it best I could, driving my hand and a half sword deep into its flank. Cole took his arrow and jumped on top its back, taking blood.

The Manticore’s words to Cole chilled me, “You want to ride the Manticore, little man?”

It flew away, giving us time to swing again, hoping not to hit Cole.

Cole corpse was dropped from a great height, broken, rended, half-eaten. But I knew where it had been, Cole’s body told me. Using that information, using slow outward spirals I caught its trail again. It was making its way back to the falls, our original ambush point.

It is bleeding heavily but so am I. We are both weakened. I can’t fall yet, the hunt’s not over. It has to rest, pull out arrows, lick gashes. My steel hit bone twice, I know. Quietly, I made my way down the falls to the pools below. We sent one man back to Durgen, back to the main body of men to explain our position.

I spotted the monster sipping water in a pool a step above where the beast and I initially chatted above the last of the falls. Careful not to kick rocks into the pool below, we made our way down. Stags drink the same way. I would give my Vardatch to be able to be in the cool water…thirsty…tired…bleeding. Time to finish this or good Dornish men will have died for nothing.

One of the tethered spears Durgen missed with was below, not twenty feet from the Manticore. Checked the barb head, coiled the rope and steeled myself. When I picked the spear up and he looked up at me, growling. The spear flew through the air, as it should have the first time, and found its target, buried deep in the Manticore’s side. It’s red fur was matted with even more of the monster’s own blood.

I gripped the rope and tugged. It pulled against me, trying to take me into the deep water, where I would have no footing. For a moment the rope went taut and I was sure its strength would overcome me. My feet dragged along the pool’s rocky bottom and I could hear its claws digging into rock.

Noises were coming out of my mouth that I had no idea were possible, horrible primal screams. With the last of my will I pulled and Lord Manticore fell. It came down hard on its own weight and there was a snap as one of its wings broke in the fall.

Die, you dark spawned fiend…you can’t fly away this time…DIE.

It layed there in a pile, only its tail swishing back and forth. I dove for cover beneath the water, fired spikes splashing alongside me, a few hitting my chest.

I dragged it to me. Where is my sword? The water was so fresh and cold. It would be so nice to just float for a while, heal. Come here, bastard. Come here, monster. You cut like anyone else. I felt my arm working, my dagger seemed to hit the beast independent of my arm. Then I heard it snarl and its paw splashed out of the water towards my bloody torso, claws bared.

Valkeries, please bring me mead aplenty. Take me to the Hall of my Ancestors. I’ve earned a place with them.


The Manticore Hunt Part III

Only a few words pierced the darkness, odd pieces of the night’s events:

“There he is. Over there.”

“Ancestors alive, he did it.”

“Careful, the spike’s in his lung.”

Odannin held me while they peeled my mail and clothes off of me and slapped mud on my wounds to stop the bleeding, “You’ve bled into this pool more than any man has a right to, Karhoun.”

My chest was burning but it was a distant feeling, as if this all were happening to someone else and I was doomed to only watch it happen to this poor fool named Karhoun Esben.

Elaylee, is this what it feels like when you are in your tree, all darkness and comfort?

I awoke on a swinging hammock, the smell of salt water and the sound of gulls in the distance. I heard a Northman say, “Get them, he stirs.”

Odannin came to see me, brought me a bowl of stew and a wooden vial. The stew was warm. I could’ve eaten Orc meat to stop this hunger. I shoveled in spoonfuls and said, “Did we get it?” I sniffed the vial, still wondering if it was poison, if Durgen was as noble as he claimed. Deciding that if he wanted me dead he would have let me bleed to death under the falls, I drank.

Odannin grinned, “They say you pulled it off of the cliff, played tug-o-war with the beast.”

I nodded, slurping stew and belching.

“The men put a few more arrows into it after it swiped you down but it had passed out from blood loss. Then we all arrived.”

I rubbed mouldy bread into the stew, soaking up the last remnants, “Is Durgen alright?”

The first mate nodded his scarred head, “He is angry about missing those first two throws but he’ll live.”

“Tell him the spear was where it needed to be in the end,” I responded. “How many?”

“Alive or dead?”

“Dead.”

“Fifteen.”

They gave me one of its claws, a Claw of the Manticore, informing me that to be caught with such a trophy is a death sentence but that I’d earned it. When I asked about what would be done with its body I was informed that it had already been broken down into parts, and would be sent all over Eredane, mostly to the Elves of the Erethor, to act as components for magic items, Covenant Items that would aid in our war against the Shadow.

Durgen came and signed, Odannin speaking his words. When I asked Durgen to write he looked ashamed, and told me that he couldn’t make runes, never had learned.

Durgen informed me of our alibi. He told me how Kylie had been killed in the cave and would be reported as having taken an insurgent arrow the throat, which was no lie. They would say that they met a ship with a Dire Lion aboard, as some insurgents have pacts with such creatures. They had never seen such a beast on board a ship but the lie was the only way to explain the scars the Manticore had dealt out.

They would head back to Port Esben and most likely word will have reached that the Bluff has accepted our overtures of peace and it will be safe for me to return to Unaros’s side again. Esben Pride will take me to the Bluff once that word is received.

On the way home I was ordered to heal and rest. I had more time to myself than I ever had in my life, as the crew was ordered to allow me to sleep. The time alone was sobering.

I thanked my ancestors and the Gods of my people, the true Gods of the North.

I thought about the very real possibility that perhaps Durgen missed his spear throws purposefully.

I wondered how much Manticore blood mingled with mine in the pool below those falls.

I realized how much I truly love killing the Shadow’s minions.

I understood that I still serve Unaros.

I hated to admit that I want to see Elayle, the Lady of the Black Oak.

I discovered that somehow, through all of this madness, I still have hope.
 

You know, it's a REALLY good thing you posted parts two and three together. Otherwise, it would have gotten ugly around here. :)

Seriously, though, that is a heck of an update. And one hell of a fight.

Keep it coming, that was awesome!
 

Yeah, I think I had taken the cliffhanger as far as it was going to go. It was tired.

This catches the StoryHour up with the game. We havne't played for 3 weeks due to my summer trips and such. Next week we game again.

I am going to write three epilogues, one from Durgen's point of view, because he is SUCH a kick ass NPC, made up by my buddy, Pete. I had to let his story outta the bag.

And I want to show the ripples the death of a creature like this sends throughout the Midnight world.

The Epilogues should be from the POV's of: Sir Durgen the Silent, The Lord of the Breeding Pits, The Sphinx, and The Chimera.

Should be fun.

Thanks for reading.
 

Story Post #18

Epilogue #1 – Durgen the Silent

Durgen sat in his cabin, his crew knew their duties. He hoped that there would be no battles with the many terrors of the Pellurian Sea. The men were all tired, never having combatted a Shadow Minion of this magnitude. He thought about leaving the Esben world, just taking off and joining the Pirate Princes. Damn the wardenship, damn the Sea Tower and most of all damn the Esben family.

Fool thoughts, thoughts for a boy who still believes in fairy tales.

No, he would return to port.

Durgen took out his dagger and sharpened it. It was the dagger he had used to cut out his own tongue. Few knew it was of Elven make, curved slightly with intricate braidwork on the handle. He thought about the dagger and how he had first used it.

Durgen had distinguished himself as a good soldier, manning his father’s finest ships and meeting success after success. The former Warden of the Sea Tower, Kell the Reaver had been embarrassed by his young Squire’s many successes. It was coming time for Durgen to be knighted and his induction into the order would mark him as a competitor for Kell’s highly sought after position. Back before his tongue had come out he was called Durgen the Brave.

None knew that Durgen Esben was haunted by dreams of a woman with long reddish brown hair the color of brass and eyes entirely black. She was as beautiful as a rolling thundercloud and when he awoke he was always saying her name. In time he found out the name on his lips was that of the Witch-Queen of Erethor. That father could know of these dreams was the only thing in all of Eredane that frightened him. Indeed, his father was the only person he had ever met who struck fear in his heart.

Kell and Durgen orchestrated a brutal ambush at sea, using the morning’s mist and an oracular Sea Hag.

During the vicious battle at sea an Elf died in Durgen’s arms. The Elf, with black eyes like the woman in Durgen’s dreams, stared at his killer, Durgen Esben. When the he died he placed a dagger in Durgen’s hands and whispered his last words, “Why do you kill us when you have seen the Queen’s beauty for yourself?” At that point Durgen had been dreaming of the Witch-Queen every night for a year and a day.

The battle was decisively won, with the combined battle-wisdom of Vildar’s most battle-wise sons, Kell the Reaver and Durgen the Brave. As they divided the spoils, Kell clapped his younger brother on the shoulder and Durgen responded quickly, plunging his newfound Elven dagger into his black-hearted brother’s throat.

Then Durgen spoke to his men and released his final words, “If you would overthrow the tyranny of my father and the spiteful Demon he serves from the North then kill for me now. Slit the throat of anyone here who serves the Shadow willingly and serve me, Durgen the Usurper!”

He had expected to be killed, cut down but men responded. One hundred men were left when the slaughter was done. Years later less than sixty remained and he counts himself lucky to have that many.

He cut out his own tongue, scared that his words might one day betray him or more importantly, betray Her. The deeds done during the ritual Durgen was put through in order to be anointed a full knight in his father’s order still woke him at night. But he told himself, every night he awoke covered in sweat and guilt, “Those were the vile deeds I had to do in order to accomplish any good in this broken world.”

Durgen thought of his brother, Karhoun the Knife. Karhoun had earned his moniker when he offered his knife to Vildar as his only weapon. Later Karhoun engaged in a bloody battle with the Oruks who held his weapons and used the dagger father had poisoned to kill his enemies. Karhoun earned the name yet again by taking his dagger to the Manticore in a desperate attempt to wound the beast. None of the Esbens would ever hear of that battle, though.

Durgen thought of the terrible road that the fates had set head for Karhoun and him. Durgen thought of the blood, the strife and pain and did something he only did in private; Durgen the Silent smiled.
 

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