I think I see what happened. the Word document and the latest posted version *are* the same, right?
I had only checked the "History of the House Kelvin" section, where you introduce both Erekh and the house Kelvin... but you don't actually say the two are related! That has to wait until a single mention under "History of Mor's End" which says "...his tribe, the Kelvins..." Guess I just assumed nothing significant had changed. Sorry about the confusion.
I do think you should at least mention explicitely that Erekh is from the clan Kelvin under the "House Kelvin" section!
I had only checked the "History of the House Kelvin" section, where you introduce both Erekh and the house Kelvin... but you don't actually say the two are related! That has to wait until a single mention under "History of Mor's End" which says "...his tribe, the Kelvins..." Guess I just assumed nothing significant had changed. Sorry about the confusion.
I do think you should at least mention explicitely that Erekh is from the clan Kelvin under the "House Kelvin" section!