Now this Sucks

[ninja_master]

Please tell me what you think of this because on one hand it kinda was a stupid decision, but I ended up being a really good thing so here's what happened well the group was trying to get into this tower that was protected by a force feild all the around it like a bubble but they were told of a hidden entrence under it so they went in and it was an old school dungeon and they were about half way through when they came to a room. The room was filled with junk and ruble, there was a tunnel dug across the back of the room and the tunnel kept going in bolth ways the ninja necromancer and psychic wanted to go down the tunnel and the samurai wanted to search the room the rest of the group left down the tunnel but the samurai searched the room. As the group got a little ways down the tunnel the samurai found a secret door and he went in. The group got to the end of the tunnel and found two owl bears and started fighting them as they did, the samurai found a way down to a lower level he went down and found a room with two force feilds that seperated the room into three sections and he would have to lower bolth force feilds to get to the hall on the other side of the room in each section there was a lever so he pulls the first lever and the first force feild drops he walks in and has a bad feeling about this but pulls the next lever anyway the first force feild pops back up and these sprinklers come out of the ceiling and start spraying acid. The samurai starts to panick and pushes the lever back up but nothing happens he take 4 points of damage so he stars looking for another way out but there wasn't 4 more points he starts to search the walls for any way out as he takes 4 more points of damage. But as he was looking around he found a secret lever up near the ceiling, but about this time the level of acid has gotten a little above knee high and he takes 11 points of damage because he is walking through acid so he pulls the lever and the second force wall droped and the sprinklers stoped the acid washed out the samurai relived walked down the hall and found a door that he didn't have the key too so he just sat there and rested. Well in a little bit the rest of the party got down the the room with the force walls and they sent the ninja in so he pulled the lever and the acid started spraying but the rest of the party pulled the first lever so it droped the first force wall and the acid stoped well this goes on for the next few mins and finaly the samurai walked back and pulled the threrd lever and droped the second force feild so the group could get past and then they opend the door with the key they got before and continued on with the game please let me know what you think with that thank you.

 

[Nifft]

I think it needs paragraphs and punctuation.

With those key elements in place, I may be able to read more.

Cheers, -- N

 

[Ferret]

Besides the lack of paragraphs and commas, seems like it all went ok. I dunno if two owlbears would fit under ground though. Not sure if that really matters.

 

[Whizbang Dustyboots]

I will pay you $1 million if you go back and add paragraphs and punctuations. As it is, I can't make heads nor tails of that stream of consciousness thang.

 

[IamTheTest]

I did it for the million.

Please tell me what you think of this. On one hand it was a stupid decision, but it ended up being a really good thing.

Here's what happened, the group was trying to get into a tower that was protected by a force field all the around it like a bubble. However, they were told of a hidden entrance under it. So they went in and it was an old school dungeon. About half way through they came to a room. The room was filled with junk, rubble, and a tunnel dug across the back of the room. The tunnel kept going in two directions. The group’s ninja necromancer and psychic wanted to go down the tunnel and the samurai wanted to search the room.

As the group got a little ways down the tunnel the samurai found a secret door and he went in. The group got to the end of the tunnel and found two owl bears and started fighting them; as they did the samurai found a way down to a lower level. He went down and found a room with two force fields that separated the room into three sections. He would have to lower both force fields to get to the hall on the other side of the room. In each section there was a lever. He pulled the first lever and the first force field dropped. He walked in and, despite having a bad feeling, pulled the next lever. The first force field popped back up and these sprinklers come out of the ceiling and start spraying acid. The samurai started to panic and pushed the lever back up but nothing happened. He took 4 points of damage so he started looking for another way out. There wasn't another exit available and he took 4 more points of damage. He searched the walls for any way out and took 4 more points of damage. As he was looking around he found a secret lever up near the ceiling, but by this time the level of acid had risen to a little above knee high and he took 11 points of damage because he was walking through acid. He pulled the lever and the second force wall dropped, the sprinklers stopped, and the acid washed out the samurai. Relieved he walked down the hall and found a locked door that he didn't have the key to so he just sat there and rested.

Well in a little bit the rest of the party got down to the room with the force walls and they sent the ninja in first. He pulled the lever and the acid started spraying but the rest of the party pulled the first lever and it dropped the first force wall and the acid stopped. This continued for the next few minutes when finally the samurai walked back and pulled the third lever and dropped the second force field so the group could get past. Then they opened the door with the key they got before and continued on.

Please let me know what you think with that thank you.

I will happily give you my address if you wish to send me the million dollars Whizbang.

 

[robberbaron]

The party split up. Questionable.
The Paladin wanted to search the room. Why? Was he after loot or something?
The Paladin proceeded to pull levers and walk across the room. Suicidal or merely insane?

My take:
Never split the party unless all sub-parties have all the bases covered (or they know what they are dealing with).
Never pull levers without a rogue-type checking them out first. At least have a spellchucker Detect Magic on them.

Bottom line - not exactly stupid but very unwise and I question the Paladin's motivation.

 

[Plane Sailing]

Paladin?

 

[Ace32]

Paladin?

Or Samurai... same thing

 

[green slime]

Troll.

 

[Piratecat]

Troll.

It is exceptionally rude to wander into threads and label people trolls. Don't do it, please. If you think the thread lacks value, then don't post and move on.