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[OOC] M&M 2nd: Gotham Squires


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For old tomes sake ;). But the gloves are clunky and obvious (strange control lights, slightly humming) and take a full round to equip.

I really start to dislike the normal identity drawback. You could make a Batman guy, give him one super-sense and the normal identity drawback for net -3 points.

I agree, I was thinking on something like this, with more buttons and lights and sparks of electricity.
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Where exactly? Powers? Totals?

What were your intended att and damage bonuses for Unarmed and Plasma Control? What was your intended Toughness total in full armor?
Yes.

My intended Attack bonus was initially +5. I envisioned the character being able to generate bolts of plasma as well as creating a 'Plasma Blade', but I think another character on the team has a similar shtick.

I intended this character to 'need' to use hand-held weapons rather than unarmed. I also got the notion to give her a big tonfa/stun rod to wield alongside her shield.

I guess I'm still not 100% understating where a 'good' score in a stat lies versus 'effective'. You suggested I lower my saves, but will they be TOO low? What IS too low?

Should I rewrite the vision I intended?

FWIW, I agree with just about everything you've changed; I can't resist tweaking here and there but I really don't know what to tweak.
 

Knocked the abilities down more, removed a skill and took out a couple of feats.

Crucible

PL: 9 (135pp)

Abilities: STR: 14 (+2) DEX: 12 (+1) CON: 14 (+2) INT: 10 (+0) WIS: 10 (+0) CHA: 16 (+3)

Skills: Bluff 4 (+12 w/attractive), Intimidate 4 (+7), Knowledge: Arcane Lore 4 (+4), Knowledge: Business 4 (+4); Knowledge: Theology & Philosophy 4 (+4), Notice 4 (+4), Sense Motive 4 (+4)

Feats: Attractive, Fearsome Presence 3 (15 ft DC 13), Precise Shot

Powers:

Demonic Speech & Comprehension: Comprehend 3 (speak and understand all human languages, anyone understands no matter the language). Total cost: 5 (2 points per rank and -1 point for broad type human only).

Demonic Flight: Flight 3 (50 mph Power Loss when wings are bound). Total Cost: 5 (2 points per rank -1 point for power loss)


Demonic Fire: Hellfire Control 9 (Hellfire Flames Blast 9)Total Cost 18 (2 points per rank)

Demonic Resistance: Immunity 10 (Life Support, Fire); Total Cost 14

Demonic Warping: Insubstantial 4 (Incorporeal - flaw Tiring, Mental & Magic still affect her in Insubstantial)/Alternate Power: Teleport 6 (20 miles, extra accurate - flaw tiring); Total Cost 17 (Insubstantial 5 points per rank, -1 for Tiring flaw so 4 points per rank +1 point for Alternate Power)

Demonic Skin: Protection 7 (Impervious). Total Cost: 14 (1 point per rank +1 per rank for Impervious).

Mystic Senses: Supersenses (Mystical Awareness); Total Cost 1 point.

Witchcraft: Magic 9 (flaw Power Loss if unable to freely speak and gesture)/Alternate Power: Mystic Bindings - Snare 9/Alternate Power: Mystic Fog - Obscure 9/Alternate Power: Mystic Blast - Blast 9 Total Cost 18 ( 2 points per rank -1 point for power loss +2 points for Alternate Powers)

Combat: Attack +6 Defense 14 Init +0

Saves: Toughness +7 (7 Impervious) Fortitude +8 Reflex +2 Will +0

Drawbacks: Power Loss (Holy Sites, Uncommon/Major) -3, Vulnerable (vs. Holy, Uncommon/Major) -3

Abilities 16 + Skills 7 (28 Ranks) + Feats 5 + Powers 93 + Combat 20 + Saves 0 – Drawbacks -6 = 135pp
 


Posted in the RG thread.

I am wondering if Dr. Kaltzov is going to respond about integrating Fallen Angel's recent history into his current plans for domination. <But I suspect he is too busy thinking about swashbuckling at the moment. :p>

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Upon reflection, I enjoyed working on this character, but in the end, I'm not going to have the time to dedicate to it for at least a month... I'm gearing up to become a Student again. So, I think I must respectfully withdraw from this PbP. :I
 

Ok, real life first. In that spirit, I will continue the reviewing on Wednesday, when my kids are not longer at home (summer vacation).
 

@VV;
Okay, other than the "yes". Anything else you want to give me on recent history for Dr. Kaltzov for Octavia to work with.

ie. She answers an ad in the local newspaper. "Local mastermind criminal seeks SWF, non-smoker, for nefarious activities, long walks, and global domination. Dog owners, need not apply. Must be able to be partially evil at least."
 

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