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[OOC] M&M 2nd: Gotham Squires


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Review 1

Crucible

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Powers:

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Demonic Flight: Flight 3 (50 mph Power Loss when wings are bound). Total Cost: 5 (2 points per rank -1 point for power loss)
Drawback: Power Loss [if wings are immobilized; Common, Minor; -2pp]
You got 1 PP more :)

Take the 1 point from here and move it to cover the mistake in witchcraft.


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Demonic Skin: Protection 7 (Impervious). Total Cost: 14 (1 point per rank +1 per rank for Impervious). you only need 5 ranks to gain your toughness (impervious) +7 total. You have 2 PP more.

Moving the 2 pp back to skills. Increase Knowledge arcane to 8 (+8) and Intimidate 8 (+11).


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Witchcraft: Magic 9 (flaw Power Loss if unable to freely speak and gesture)/Alternate Power: Mystic Bindings - Snare 9/Alternate Power: Mystic Fog - Obscure 9/Alternate Power: Mystic Blast - Blast 9 Total Cost 18 ( 2 points per rank -1 point for power loss +2 points for Alternate Powers) 18-1+2= 19

Power Point moved from extra in flight to cover the 1 point.


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Saves: Toughness +7 (7 Impervious) Fortitude +8 Reflex +2 Will +0
Why do you have Fort +8 and not +2?

Mistake when I copied and adjusted. Sorry.


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Rest is fine.

Readjusted the main entry on RG with the changes and fixes. Thanks.
 

Ok, I will start an IC thread after the weekend!

Notes:

  • You can always add some (realistic) details to my descriptions.
  • I will not use maps for combats.
  • If you want details for supersenses, ask! I'm not thinking you are scanning everything to minute details each second a day.
  • Don't forget take 10 and that you can use it against minions for combat rolls.
  • Please make an spoilerblock with your base informations (combat stats, hurt levels, saves, ...) and attach it to your IC posts. This is very helpful for combat encounters.
 


Yes you can. I will post the first IC post for the other characters in a few hours and will introduce your character once she is ready. Can you post her latest incarnation to the RG?
 

First IC post is online. I decided that everyone bur Brick is known to each other. I also chose a neighberhood for Brick. If anything I post about your characters is horribly against what you imagined for him, please object immediatly in the OOC thread.
 




My suggestions (Review)

Shieldmaiden

(16 pp)
Str 10 0,0
Dex 12 +1, 2
Con 14 +2, 4
Int 14 +2, 4
Wis 16 +3, 6
Cha 10 0,0
right

(30 pp) Attack +5, Defense +10
Att melee (+5), ranged (+5), Plasma Control (+11)


(15 pp) Toughness +7
Fort +5, 3
Reflex +7, 6
Wil +9, 6 ok

(16 pp) Acrobatics 8, Drive 8, Investigate 8, Notice 8, Profession: Officer 8, Search 8, Sense Motive 8, Survival 8 ok

(15 pp) Acrobatic Bluff 1, Benefit: Security Clearance 1, Elusive Target 1, Evasion 1, Equipment 2 (+5 armor suit with special links for device), Improved Block 1, Improved Disarm 1, Jack of All Trades 1, Precise Shot 1, Takedown Attack 2, Track 2, Weapon Bind 1 ok

Device (Power Armor) (Hard to lose) 10 (40)
Leaping 3 (3)
Protection 5 (Impervious bonus to armor suit only) (5)
Speed 1 (1)
Deflect 5 (10)
Enhanced Str +10 (10)
Super-Senses 8 [darkvision, direction sense, distance sense, infrared, radio, time sense, track 2] (8)
Plasma Control 5 (10)
Expanded Feats: Attack Specialization (Plasma Control) 3 (3)

AP (1)
(4) Communication 4 (radio, 1 mile)
(2) Vehicle: Str 15, Speed 5, Defense 10, Toughness 8, Size Medium
(1) Feature: Restricted to users with armor suit with special links.
(33) unspent (do these points apply to the vehicle only, armor only, or the rider?) only to vehicle mode. You could add life support, flight or regeneration (for self-repair, once in vehicle mode).

Total Cost: 41 PP

Drawback:
Normal Identity 4

Abilities 16 + Skills 16 (64 Ranks) + Feats 15 + Powers 41 + Combat 30 + Saves 15 – Drawbacks -4 = 129pp

Your attack PL is 8, Defense is 8.5. But you have 6 unspent points.

One feat in attack spec (plasma) and 1 more defense (or the roll with the blow feat) will make her PL 9.

Your melee is only PL5 at the moment. With a chain saw you would have PL8.
 
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