Plane Sailing
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One of the things that I really appreciate is the way that you have allowed tracking to be a useful talent, and one that is missed if it isn't there. I have often thought it a shame that the Core rules don't make more of the tracking skill as a way of determining what has happened in a place, rather than the simplistic following of some tracks. Too many adventures just say "the tracks are too muddied for tracking to tell you anything". Feh I say to that!
Another thing that I really like is that in many cases (tracks, searches, gather info) you give increasing information for increasingly good skill check results. I much prefer this to the "DC15 to find everything or nothing".
Another thing that I like - your descriptions are short and evocative, not boring. Evocative descriptions are easier to remember when using someone elses work and thus convey to the players. I particularly like the mine scenes (this is as far as I've read in detail now) and the sense of cohesiveness.
The only thing so far that I would have liked slightly different is that in the town info you give NPC's name and hit points but that is all... I would at least have liked their class and level mentioned at that point (There. A complaint. That proves I'm not just a fanboy
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Cheers
Another thing that I really like is that in many cases (tracks, searches, gather info) you give increasing information for increasingly good skill check results. I much prefer this to the "DC15 to find everything or nothing".
Another thing that I like - your descriptions are short and evocative, not boring. Evocative descriptions are easier to remember when using someone elses work and thus convey to the players. I particularly like the mine scenes (this is as far as I've read in detail now) and the sense of cohesiveness.
The only thing so far that I would have liked slightly different is that in the town info you give NPC's name and hit points but that is all... I would at least have liked their class and level mentioned at that point (There. A complaint. That proves I'm not just a fanboy

Cheers