Gave it the once-over. Looks pretty solid.
You have the damage wrong on his longsword though. A Bane weapon does +2d6 damage to the bane, not 1d6.
I didn't see anything about his Paladin Mount either. I think they get that at...5th level?
Oh, and your Touch AC looks off to me. You have it as 17, but it should be 14, I think. 10 + 1 for your dex, and +3 for your mythically touchy shield bonuses.
You have the damage wrong on his longsword though. A Bane weapon does +2d6 damage to the bane, not 1d6.
I didn't see anything about his Paladin Mount either. I think they get that at...5th level?
Oh, and your Touch AC looks off to me. You have it as 17, but it should be 14, I think. 10 + 1 for your dex, and +3 for your mythically touchy shield bonuses.