(Shark World) Wuha Islands

[las]

How would you take the spirit folk.

 

[Crothian]

How would yuo take the spirit folk.

No idea

 

[las]

Thot so, so why change them they alredy like water at least to of them do freash and sea.

 

[Crothian]

Thot so, so why change them they alredy like water at least to of them do freash and sea.

I can't say without being more familair with the race. But that doesn't matter. All that matters is the current write up was not specifically designed for Shark World.

 

[drowdude]

I am not so sure that all of this Oriental Adventures type stuff fits into how I visualize shark world right now... I guess anything can be worked in though... *shrugs*

 

[Crothian]

I am not so sure that all of this Oriental Adventures type stuff fits into how I visualize shark world right now... I guess anything can be worked in though... *shrugs*

Either am I, but this is like when the teacher gives the class busy work. Plus, he seems to be having fun. WE'll see how it all fits as things get defined.

 

[las]

Theres more on thw Wuha islands.

 

[trentonjoe]

Wuha

1)It is placed on the equator surronded by the South Sea and the Sea of Sea dragons.





2) The shamans show this power of these spirits in their daily lives.

3) The Dramoren Defender (Hida Defender) keeps the people in one peace. The knights of Dramore (Purple Dragon Knight) keep the people going while the Shipmasters (Mantis Mercenary) keep the trade open.

4)They some times have to deal with the shark, as they have dubbed him. His minions want Wuha for their own. The border to his land is only a 100 miles from the ghost islands.


5)Emperor Uchoze Otomo 20th level Aristocrat rules the city as well as the country of Wuha. .

6)The weather is nice for its part of the world. It's full of rain forest. It has lots of wood and lots of land for crops. They have a tree that grows extremely fast that they use in their buildings, boats and other things.

7)They keep a sizable army, which is usually about 5,000 strong. Their leader Chatetu is a 5th level Fighter, 6th level Sohei, 5th level Dramoren Knight. He is one of the emperor’s seven heroes.

8)Once a year the people of Wuha show there belief in the spirits by sending any extra wood they have into the sea. THe wood is put in the northern currents. They believe the spirits guide the wood to where it is needed.


9) They have found seaweed that makes good armor when properly woven and formed. See dragon #298 for silk armor they have the same abilities.

10) The other common armors are Padded, Leather, Studded leather, Hide, Breastplate, Splint mail, Banded mail, half-plate, Cord armor, Bone armor, Ashigaru armor, Leather scale, Dhenuka, Brigadine, and Lamellar. All shields plus the following Chahar-aina and Dastana.

11)They use an odd weapon known as the Fang.
Fang, Exotic weapon, Size small, cost 70gp, Damage 2d4, Critical x2, Weight 4 lb., Type Slashing and piercing.
Fang: This odd shaped double blade is made to strike two points on the same target, which makes it very powerful and very hard to use.

12)That whats done at the moment. As i'm typing to do this in high detale.

I don't know how to do that cool cut and paste quote option so my notes are numbered from the above.

Also, I went through and edited some of the grammar and spelling. I hope you don't mind but I am a teacher. IT is kinda second nature to me. MAke sure I didn't change the meaning accidentally.

I would highly reccomend that you do most of the writing in Word or a similar word proccessor. Then Spell and grammar check. It is not perfect but it will help alot.

1) I will try to add the seas on my map. Do you mind that the island are a little south of the equator?

2) These are shamans of the god (Gildas?) of water right? The main God?

3) These could be developed into nice organizations and eventual PrCs. YOu need to define their "jobs" more clearly though. I don't quite understand.

4) Good. Are the ghost isalnds and wuha islands the same?

5) I like that you made him an aristocrat. Maybe give him some ability that has prolonged his life. I imagine him as old and wise.

6) Very good.

7) Also very good. Trentonjoe LOOOOVES heroes. Seven seems great. Maybe they can have an items that links them? ALso is the army just for the main island or for all of them?

8) Excellent this may be where the Wave Raiders get there wood. This could make the two people unknowing allies.

9) Very nice.

10) It may be just me, nut I thought metal would be rare here. I would limit metallic armors. Maybe only the dwarves could have plate mail and the like.

11) YOu just love that darn fang don't you

12) This is a vast improvemment over the first try. Keep at it. You are doing a great job. Try to make these islands as developed as possible before starting the next. We have plenty of time. I don't believe we have any publishers knocking on the door with deadlines yet!

 

[las]

2) These are shamans of the god (Gildas?) of water right? The main God?

Ther out of OA the shaman.

7) Also very good. Trentonjoe LOOOOVES heroes. Seven seems great. Maybe they can have an items that links them? ALso is the army just for the main island or for all of them?

Thats for the 6 core islands.

3) These could be developed into nice organizations and eventual PrCs. YOu need to define their "jobs" more clearly though. I don't quite understand.

There alredy Prcs I gust changed there name.

10) It may be just me, nut I thought metal would be rare here. I would limit metallic armors. Maybe only the dwarves could have plate mail and the like.

If you notis no heavy metal armor gust stuff that uses it the min.

4) Good. Are the ghost isalnds and wuha islands the same?

Yes.

1) I will try to add the seas on my map. Do you mind that the island are a little south of the equator?

So long as its close to it. Thats what matters.

You realy need AO dont you to make this out.

By the way I do Right in word do you think id all thet right that here

 

[trentonjoe]

Ok, I reread shamans. I am on the same page now. My bad.

I am still confused about these guys:
The Dramoren Defender (Hida Defender) keeps the people in one peace. The knights of Dramore (Purple Dragon Knight) keep the people going while the Shipmasters (Mantis Mercenary) keep the trade open.


I'll look up the PrC though maybe that'll help.

These armors are all mostly metal: Breastplate, Splint mail, Banded mail, half-plate. I would recomend limiting them.

Plus no one on a boat would wear these. SInky sinky.