Silence domain?

[Nifft]

Eternity of Silence
Enchantment (Compulsion) [Mind-affecting]
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Saving Throw: Fortitude negates

Shouldn't this save be Will?

As to the others, they look great!

However, IMHO Silent Moves should give a flat +5 bonus to Move Silently checks. It's far less of a pain in the butt to keep track of a nice flat bonus.

-- N

 

[the Jester]

Wow, excellent work!

I'm with Nifft on both the Will save and a flat bonus, though I'd say +10.

 

[Zappo]

Oops. Will save it should be, right. I'll edit the above, it's got a good formatting, it should as well be correct.

As for the flat bonus, I figure that this way it scales with levels, and it is in line with Find Traps. Halving your level means that the bonus is "almost" flat - ie, it only changes once every many sessions. I'm more worried about it being too low - then again, this is atypical as a cleric spell. Dunno, I'll drop it on my player and see how it works in action.

Thanks guys!

 

[Scion]

I know you were thinking of giving the silent spell feat for the domain power, but how about this.

All domain spells memorized are automatically silenced at no level cost.

This would make your 1 domain spell each level silenced, and any spells you memorize that are in one of your two domains automatically silenced for no additional level cost. It wouldnt be incredibly powerful, and would add some interesting flavor