I DLed this thread and a number of others as text files to take to work (and look busy) during slow spurts, since my office blocks ENWorld and any other fun sites. Now that I'm up to date on book 2, I wanted to offer my comments and thanks for your story.
I only vaguely remembered book 1 (the child-eater demon did stick out in my memory), but I quickly sank into the depth of the milieu. I thought that the characters were portrayed very vividly, with the prose equally effective at building suspense and evoking emotions as one reads. Given the difficulty of doing this in a serial format (especially given the long breaks between chapters), I was quite impressed. It looks like the story is on hiatus now (like many of the great ones here, unfortunately), but when I do another round of DLs in a few months, I'll check back in and see what happens. Based on the high mark you've set, Destan, I have no doubt I'll be quickly swept back into the high drama of your story.
LB