Help please! First time doing anything like this, so feedback would be muchly appreciated. Also, comments on whether "Charming Song" works on humanoids or all "creatures" would be great too.
Sirine
Fey (Aquatic)
+4 Level Adjustment due to favorable ability score bonus, spell-like abilities, intelligence damage and swim speed (with water breathing).
Racial Traits
Starting Ability Score Adjustments: +2 Dex, +2 Int, +2 Wis, +2 Cha
Speed: 30’, swim 60’
Low Light Vision
Skills: +8 Perform
Automatic Languages: Common, Sylvan and Aquan
Favored Class: Sirine
Class Skills
Animal Empathy, Concentration, Craft, Heal, Hide, Perform, Profession, Swim, Wilderness Lore
Class Features
Weapon and Armour Proficiency: Sirines are proficient with all simple weapons and with bows and with the short sword, but not armour or shields.
Feats: A sirine receives one feat at 1st level and another at 4th level. After 8th level it gains feats normally according to its character level.
Charming Song (Sp): At will, a sirine can sing a special song that functions like a charm person spell (as a sorcerer of half her hit dice), except that it lasts for eleven hours and affects every creature that hears it.
Intelligence Damage (Su): Any creature hit by a sirine’s touch attack takes 1d4 Intelligence damage (or 2d4 on a critical hit).
Soothing Touch (Su): A sirine, if it desires, can use its touch to restore 1d6 points of Intelligence damage caused by any sirine.
Deflection (Su): A sirine is surrounded by an aura that grants deflection bonus to AC equal to her Charisma bonus.
Spell Like Abilities (Sp): 1/day – fog cloud, improved invisibility, polymorph self
Lvl HD BAB Fort Ref Will Skills Special
1 1d6 0 0 2 2 (6+Int Mod)X4 Feat, Deflection, Soothing Touch
2 1d6 0 0 2 2 Charming Song 1/Day
3 2d6 1 0 3 3 (6+Int Mod) +2 Dex, Intelligence Drain 3/Day
4 2d6 1 0 3 3 Charming Song 3/Day
5 3d6 2 1 3 3 (6+Int Mod) Feat, +2 Dex, +2 Cha, +2 Wis
6 3d6 2 1 3 3 Spell Like Abilities
7 4d6 2 1 4 4 (6+Int Mod) +2 Dex, +2 Cha, +2 Wis
8 4d6 2 1 4 4 Intelligence drain at Will, Charming Song at will
Sirine
Fey (Aquatic)
+4 Level Adjustment due to favorable ability score bonus, spell-like abilities, intelligence damage and swim speed (with water breathing).
Racial Traits
Starting Ability Score Adjustments: +2 Dex, +2 Int, +2 Wis, +2 Cha
Speed: 30’, swim 60’
Low Light Vision
Skills: +8 Perform
Automatic Languages: Common, Sylvan and Aquan
Favored Class: Sirine
Class Skills
Animal Empathy, Concentration, Craft, Heal, Hide, Perform, Profession, Swim, Wilderness Lore
Class Features
Weapon and Armour Proficiency: Sirines are proficient with all simple weapons and with bows and with the short sword, but not armour or shields.
Feats: A sirine receives one feat at 1st level and another at 4th level. After 8th level it gains feats normally according to its character level.
Charming Song (Sp): At will, a sirine can sing a special song that functions like a charm person spell (as a sorcerer of half her hit dice), except that it lasts for eleven hours and affects every creature that hears it.
Intelligence Damage (Su): Any creature hit by a sirine’s touch attack takes 1d4 Intelligence damage (or 2d4 on a critical hit).
Soothing Touch (Su): A sirine, if it desires, can use its touch to restore 1d6 points of Intelligence damage caused by any sirine.
Deflection (Su): A sirine is surrounded by an aura that grants deflection bonus to AC equal to her Charisma bonus.
Spell Like Abilities (Sp): 1/day – fog cloud, improved invisibility, polymorph self
Lvl HD BAB Fort Ref Will Skills Special
1 1d6 0 0 2 2 (6+Int Mod)X4 Feat, Deflection, Soothing Touch
2 1d6 0 0 2 2 Charming Song 1/Day
3 2d6 1 0 3 3 (6+Int Mod) +2 Dex, Intelligence Drain 3/Day
4 2d6 1 0 3 3 Charming Song 3/Day
5 3d6 2 1 3 3 (6+Int Mod) Feat, +2 Dex, +2 Cha, +2 Wis
6 3d6 2 1 3 3 Spell Like Abilities
7 4d6 2 1 4 4 (6+Int Mod) +2 Dex, +2 Cha, +2 Wis
8 4d6 2 1 4 4 Intelligence drain at Will, Charming Song at will
