Thomas Hobbes
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I like it. Has she ever been described, though, by Sepulchrave? I'm sure he has, I just can't remember when.
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Soneillon. Part 1 (Updated 6/15)
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Sepulchrave II
Legend
I like it - a lot. As always, I am reluctant to suggest anything - as an interpretation it captures her pretty well.
However, if I were to venture an opinion:
1) I like the face and rod a great deal. They should both stay. There is a fey-ness which is very appropriate, and the rod is close to exactly how I envision it. Perhaps a wee bit too long, but certainly not too thin. It is intricately designed.
2) Her breasts are more ample than I had imagined, and I suspect she is not someone, by character, who would routinely show cleavage. Thus,
3) I would probably have a higher-collar outfit, and smaller
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4) The cloak must be purplish black.
5) The dress, equally dark, maybe a bluish tint. I like its functionality/form balance.
6) Lots of rings. Shomei is both emotionally defensive and extremely rich.
7) Fingernails = Yes!
In terms of her general build, Shomei is a little on the petite side (maybe 5'4" and 110 lbs), but not excessively so. I appreciate the fact that relative size is difficult to convey.
Thank-you, both Cheiromancer and A.K. Brown. Very much appreciated indeed.
Edit: Wow! Eric's Grandma is stricter than I thought!
However, if I were to venture an opinion:
1) I like the face and rod a great deal. They should both stay. There is a fey-ness which is very appropriate, and the rod is close to exactly how I envision it. Perhaps a wee bit too long, but certainly not too thin. It is intricately designed.
2) Her breasts are more ample than I had imagined, and I suspect she is not someone, by character, who would routinely show cleavage. Thus,
3) I would probably have a higher-collar outfit, and smaller
. 4) The cloak must be purplish black.
5) The dress, equally dark, maybe a bluish tint. I like its functionality/form balance.
6) Lots of rings. Shomei is both emotionally defensive and extremely rich.
7) Fingernails = Yes!
In terms of her general build, Shomei is a little on the petite side (maybe 5'4" and 110 lbs), but not excessively so. I appreciate the fact that relative size is difficult to convey.
Thank-you, both Cheiromancer and A.K. Brown. Very much appreciated indeed.
Edit: Wow! Eric's Grandma is stricter than I thought!
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William Ronald
Explorer
An interesting and enjoyable update, Sepulchrave.
My own group's experiences with Time Stop shows it can truly be devastating. (Hanging spells are nasty when they go off.)
As I suspected, at least one demonic entity is hoping for some measure of success by Eadric. This story hour is proving once again how politics can make for interesting bedfellows.
My own group's experiences with Time Stop shows it can truly be devastating. (Hanging spells are nasty when they go off.)
As I suspected, at least one demonic entity is hoping for some measure of success by Eadric. This story hour is proving once again how politics can make for interesting bedfellows.
Joshua Randall
Legend
Sepulchrave says he likes her face, and I won't dispute him, but from my reading of his story hour I always pictured Shomei's features as more angular. Am I misremembering? Does someone with the compiled .rtf documents want to do a search for Shomei and quote back her description? (hint, hint)
It's been a long time since Wyre needed bumped...
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