Kered Rinos Background (advice/critics welcome):
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Kered was born on Iridonia, to a single mother named Shren. They were never really close, as he viewed her as a weak person. She struggled to survive. She could not fight very well. The older he got the more he hated her. She was weakness personified.
Every day he trained in the martial ways of his homeworld. He survived the wilderness, he survived his hand to hand contests. Every fight, he envisioned weakness. He envisioned his mother struggling to put food on their table and even going so far as to accept food from others!
He was forced to leave his homeworld when he killed another Iridonian during a supposedly friendly contest. When asked why he killed the boy, he replied that the "boy was too weak to live, and earned his own fate."
The colony held a council to decide his fate. He was to be exiled. He almost laughed when they announced his fate. He had planned to leave this pathetic planet when he could anyway. He wanted to be a Sith. He had heard the stories of their power and longed to hold it in his own hands.
A trader vessel landed near the colony a few weeks later. It was to be his passage off that cursed planet. The colony paid the traders to take him away, but did not say to where. Kered managed to half-threaten them into taking him to the Emperor himself. It was the only place he knew to find the Sith.
He never bothered to learn the name of his Sith master, as he figured he would kill him as soon as possible anyway. Darth Krayt was the one he looked up to. He was ruthless, wise, and most importantly, strong. Kered wanted to be him. He was also smart enough to know he must serve to learn. And so his story began..........
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He is prideful and rather arrogant. I am trying to make him a hand to hand fighter, but still have to figure out how to. I will try to have a character sheet up sometime either late late tonight or by tomorrow afternoon. Whether I make it or not, thank you for the chance and encouragement.