I'll gladly do so, OnlytheStrong!
One thorough glance:
- Kered has only spend 28 attribute points (I assume you have used the standard D&D advancement of +1 to one stat at level 4 and 8. SW SAGA gives +1 to two stats at level 4 and 8.)
- Destiny should be left open - ShaggySpellsword has stated that will chose them according to the Sith trait each PC personifies
- Lightsaber should be +14 (BAB (8) + Str (3) + WF (1) + GWF (1) + built his own LS (1) = +14) [LS can be built be everyone with 7 heroic levels (p.40), no Jedi level needed (but see below)] and 2d8+9 (2d8 (standard LS damage unless you use a Shoto) + 1/2 class (4) + Str (3) + Weapon Spec. (2) = +9 )
- Stun Baton damage thus 1d6+7
- Kered seems to have one skill too much: He has 7 trained skills. (Scout (5) + Int (1) = 6 skills)
- Languages: Basic + Zabraki + 1 for Int
- Equipment: Building as LS yourself costs you only 1,500 Cr. Regarding his secound LS, if you want the second one to be a Shoto for stylish reasons (like Sora Bulq) - no problem, but you could wield to two standard LS without any greater penalties if you wanted to.
- Hopefully not out-of-line, but could you see him ditching 2 Soldier levels and take 2 Jedi levels instead ? (No affiliation with the Jedi Order needed - even Palpatine has one Jedi level) This would have the advantage of giving him the WP (Lightsaber) for free, thus freeing a valuable feat slot. (Weapon specialization (LS) can also be gained as a Jedi class talent.)
Hope this helps a bit!
Folkert