Tears in Hell (UPDATED OCTOBER 11th)

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“Tears in Hell” – Bearly Involved

11:45 PM Monday, July 12th
Yorktown, Virginia


Armani and Quin crouched over Devin’s body while Meadow applied pressure and bandages to his head. “He might make it,” she said. “He might not.”

Quin glanced at Armani’s wounds. “Not looking too good there, pal. Might want to have a seat. I’m sure the briefcases aren’t going anywhere.

Armani scowled at him and hugged the metal and leather briefcases to his chest harder. He almost passed out. “I’ll have a seat if I want to, man.” Then he sat down. “You ain’t looking too good neither.”

“Please remain calm.” The voice droned through the earpiece of Rebecca’s cell phone. “We are sending help. Just stay calm. Stay on the line and remain calm.” Rebecca rolled her eyes. She set the cell phone down on the trash can. The droning voice continued. “Help will be there any minute. Just remain…” The voice faded as Rebecca walked over to the body of Mr. Louisville Slugger and checked his pulse.

“This guy’s dead.” Rebecca thought she sounded remarkably calm while she said it. He was poorly dressed. The clothes still had that new-clothes-from-a-cheap-store smell to them.

“Good! Swing a bat at me, motherf***er.” Armani coughed in agony from the strain of his sudden outburst.

The emergency vehicles arrived a few minutes later. Almost everyone rode an ambulance to the hospital. An armed police escort rode shotgun. Quinton objected at first.

“I’m alright. I think I’ll just go home.”

“You’ll go to the hospital with us or you’ll go downtown with us.”

“Hospital it is.”

Rebecca followed in her Grand Am. She fixed her makeup at the stoplights.

---​

After checking in on Devin to make sure he was alive, Armani left the hospital and checked in to a Motel 6 a few miles away. Checking the caller ID feature of his cell phone, Armani dialed in the digits for Sammy Nickels. The deal had gone bad and Armani wanted to clear the air as soon as possible.

Busy signal. He’d try again later. But for now…

In the peace and quiet of the air conditioned hotel room, Armani finally sat down and took a long relaxing breath. On the floor near his feet rested the leather briefcase he’d brought from New York. In front of him on the desk was the metal briefcase he’d collected from McDonalds. He’d killed a man to make sure he got at least one of them.

He rolled the dials to the proper combination. 5 – 3 – 5 - 2. The lock clicked. The case creaked as the young thug opened it. “Ohhellyeah. OH… HELL… YEAH!”

Armani fell asleep an hour later, as visions of thirty THOUSAND dollars in cash danced through his head.

The clock blinked 4:12 AM at him when he awoke to the pounding on his hotel room door.

---​

02:30 AM Tuesday, July 13th
Riverside Hospital


Rebecca sat in an uncomfortable chair in Meadow’s hospital room. The ugly looking man (he’d introduced himself as Armani, and Rebecca thought THAT was an amazingly inappropriate name) had checked himself out a couple of hours ago. The nice-looking man with the bullet wound in the head was still at the hospital, still unconscious. Quin was in this room too. A curtain separated his quiet snoring from the girls. Meadow was awake.

“All that for nothing. The professor got shot. Innocent people got shot. I got shot. They stole the bear. They stole the professor.” Meadow looked shell-shocked, like a woman who had lost everything – and then been shot.

“Well, I have the little bear statue.”

Meadow looked at Rebecca, eyes wide. “You stole the bear?”

“Well I didn’t STEAL it. It was in my backpack. I guess Martin put it in there before he got shot.” Rebecca smiled. “Unless it crawled in there by itself!”

Meadow suddenly looked a bit pale. Rebecca leaned away. SHE certainly didn’t want to catch whatever seemed to be making Meadow queasy all the time.

---​

04:12 AM Tuesday, July 13th
Newport News, Motel 6


Armani fumbled with the sheets as the pounding on the door continued. He fell out of bed, kicked the briefcase full of cash into a corner, peaked through the peephole. A huge man’s fist came in and out of view as he pounded on the door. He was dressed professionally in a tailored suit. The jacket almost-but-not-quite hid the bulge of a pistol.

“Who is it?”

“We’re looking for Armani Determan. We’re here from Mr. Nickels.”

“What do you need?”

“Let us in.”

Armani double-checked the security chain. Locked. He maintained his view through the peephole as he unlocked the deadbolt and cracked the door open … just a little. The large man tensed and propelled himself towards the door. Armani was ready for this and slammed it shut. The huge man’s shoulder slammed against the door, but it held.

“WHAT DO YOU WANT, A**HOLE?!”

“Better let us in, kid.” The big man reached under his tailored jacket and produced a large pistol, silenced.

Armani thought quickly. He was in no shape to take on armed thugs. His gunshot wounds had been treated at the hospital, but they were by no means healed. There was no escape path. No window in the bathroom. Armani did the only thing he could think to do.

He politely opened the door. “Come in. Uh, have a seat.”

The man filled the doorway when he entered. “Thank you. I will.” Another man followed. He was slightly smaller, but still intimidating. He also held a silenced pistol. He closed the door and stood in front of the doorway.

“You had a deal with Sammy,” said the bigger man. He leaned against the TV stand and scanned the room. “Sammy never got his merchandise.”

“It wasn’t my fault, man!” Armani argued. “We were attacked! Man, I tried to call.”

“We’re not here to listen to excuses, Mr. Determan. Where’s the merchandise?”

Armani pointed at the leather briefcase on the other side of the room. The man reached it in two steps, picked it up, opened it. “This is it.”

The other man opened the door and stepped out. The large man glanced at the metal briefcase, then at Armani. “Anyone know you’re here?”

Armani nodded. “I told the cops where I was gonna stay.”

The big man nodded. “Don’t tell anyone we were here tonight.”

Armani assured him that nobody would know and locked the door behind the men as they left.

Armani’s heart returned to its normal pace within a few minutes and his frenzied mind began to relax and assess the situation.

How did they know I was here?

Tuesday morning Armani deposited thirty thousand dollars in two separate bank accounts.

---​

12:30 PM Friday, July 16th
Riverside Hospital


It was Friday when Devin finally awoke. The pain in his head was intense and his vision swam as he tried to focus on the neatly suited figure sitting in his hospital room.

“Glad to see you’re finally awake, Mr. Cole.” The voice sounded familiar.

“Glad to be awake.” Devin managed to get his eyes focused on the man. One of Sammy’s cronies. “What day is it?”

“Friday.”

“What do you want?”

“Mr. Nickels was wondering what happened to his property.”

“I got shot in the head. I sort of lost track of it about then.”

The man nodded. “Sorry to hear that. I’ll go let Mr. Nickels know.” He stood to leave. “Oh, your little sister is in good hands.”

Devin tried to sit up, swooned, collapsed to the bed. “WHAT HAVE YOU DONE WITH LISA?!?” The world swam around him.

“Oh, she’s safe. We’ll just take care of her while you’re busy looking for Mr. Nickels’ property.”

“WHERE IS SHE!?!”

“I hope you feel better soon, Mr. Cole.” The man walked out.

---​

Rebecca, Quin, and Meadow had returned to the hospital to check on the stranger with the head wound. Some quick words with the nurse and Meadow found out his new status. “Cole’s awake.”

“Well let’s go see him. I’ve got some questions,” said Quin.

The three students had spent the better part of the week healing and researching the artifact they had been mysteriously left with. They recapped their findings as the wound their way through the hospital passageways and elevators.

“He found this thing in Mexico…”

“Southern Mexico, near Chiapas. Darn near in Guatamala,” specified Rebecca.

Quin continued. “Right. So southern Mexico, some Mayan village or something. But he found a bunch of other things too. Like, tons of little tourist toys.”

“We call them artifacts, Quin.”

“Right, Meadow. Artifacts. So why was this one so important?”

“The notes didn’t really say how he decided it was more important than the others. But he is REALLY smart. And he found out its name... Uh... Mentos... Mannequin...”

"Mensajero de la Muerte," said Meadow. "Spanish. It means Messenger of Death. The notes MIGHT have said why, if they hadn’t been soaked by the rain.” Meadow glared at Quin.

The elevator dinged at the third floor and the doors opened.

“Hey, I did the best I could. And who knows what we missed out on because you couldn’t keep your hands on that satchel.”

“Oh, children. Enough!” Rebecca walked off the elevator. The others followed. “It doesn’t matter HOW he knew it was different. But there was definitely something different. His notes talked about some ritual that made the bear talk to dead things.”

“The bear sees dead people!” Quin grinned.

“Yeah, sounds silly to me too. But so what if it’s all bogus? Somebody thought it was important enough to kidnap and kill for. Martin didn’t know the specifics of the ritual anyway. Plus I’m sure he’s smart enough to realize that that’s all hokey anyway.”

“We shouldn’t just assume it is fake, Rebecca. We should, perhaps, assume it is real and then see where that leads us.”

“Whatever, Meadow.” Rebecca stopped at an open door. “This is his room.”

Devin Cole was pulling on a pair of pants with one hand and removing various IV needles with the other. Armani was in the room with him, but there was no conversation going on.

“Hi. Devin Cole I presume?” Devin didn’t answer. Quin extended his right hand “Quinton Stark III. Nice to meet you.”

Devin continued to get dressed.

“Listen. I don’t care what kind of attitude you’ve got going on here, Mister. We’re all in this together.”

Devin looked up then. “I’m not in this with anyone. I was shot because of your old friend. I just need to get home.”

“Well… I… he’s not that old.”

They all followed as Devin hurried out of the room. He still wore his hospital gown. It was partially tucked into his jeans.

Quinton grabbed Devin by the shoulder and spun him around. “Listen. Like it or not, you’re involved in this. Those people were after all of us, for one reason or another. The least you can do is talk to us.”

“I’ve got other things to worry about.”

Devin was silent as they rode the elevator to the ground floor.

“Well let us help you. Do you need…”

Devin spun around and shouted at Rebecca. “I DON’T NEED YOUR CHARITY!”

“Um, Mr. Cole. There’s a problem with your insurance.” The nurse looked nervous as she tried to intercept Devin. He walked around her and continued towards the door.

They arrived on the sidewalk outside the hospital. The group watched as Devin searched the parking lot. He scratched his head. "Umm..."

“No charity, then." Rebecca dangled the Mary Kay keychain in Devin’s face. "Would you like a ride?”
 
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Puppy Kicker

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Thanks for the input, ledded. Didn't realize when I started what I was getting in to! Anyway, the players seem to like it so far so I'll keep it up. Another session tonight, so we'll see where they go from here. Wish them luck... muwahahahaha......

Oh, and as a bit of advertising, Devin's owner said he might be posting the "inner struggles" of his character on this board too. So look forward to that!
 

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“Tears in Hell” – Bearhunters

“Tears in Hell” – Bearhunters

3:30 PM Friday, July 16th
William & Mary Campus, Williamsburg, Virginia


Rebecca parked her car in the parking lot outside her dorm and said goodbye to Meadow. She walked up the three flights of stairs to her dorm room and stuck her key in the lock. It didn’t turn the right way… already unlocked. Rebecca’s heart rate ratcheted up to aerobic levels as she cracked the door open and peaked in. Her room was a MESS! Things were thrown all over the place. MK business cards littered every flat surface. Drawers were open, overturned on the floor, and… and… HER CLOTHES WERE ALL MESSED UP AND WRINKLY ON THE FLOOR! Rebecca plopped down on the floor and cried.

She landed on a piece of paper on the floor, directly in front of the door, as though it had been slid under. She picked it up.

You have something we need. You know to
what lengths we will go to recover it. If you
are interested in making a deal, send your
intentions to the following address:

Bearhunter443@hotmail.com

We WILL get it, one way or the other. It
would behoove you to hand it over before
you get hurt.


Rebecca jumped when her cell phone rang.

---​

"I like it when you do that right therrrr..."

The bass bumped. Quinton Stark III read a back page of the days old newspaper as he sat in his Beemer and moved to the music.

Shootout at Yorktown McDonalds

Yorktown, VA - Shots were fired at the Yorktown
McDonalds located at 17th and Victory Blvd Monday
night. Minor property damage occurred. One male
was killed and several restaurant patrons were
hospitalized. One is reported in critical condition.
The identification of the slain man has not been
released. Police reports speculate that the violence
was gang related. A police investigation is ongoing.


“Guess that’s us.” He hopped out of the car and tossed the newspaper in the trash as he headed into campus housing. His room was as he’d left it, with the exception of a handwritten note that had been slipped under the door.

You have something we need. You know….

When Quin finished reading the note he flipped open his cell phone, quick-dialed a number. A teary voice answered.

“Hello? This is…” Some sniffling. “…Rebecca.”

---​

“Meadow, is that you?”

Meadow closed her dorm room door behind her. “Yes. What are you doing here, Alli?” Meadow's voice was sharper than she intended.

Allison walked out of the bathroom. “I was worried about you. I haven’t seen you for a week. And… um… are you ok, Meadow?”

“It’s been a rough week, Alli.” Meadow sat down at the foot of her bed and started taking off her shoes. She needed a shower and some alone time to meditate.

“You were studying at that McDonalds that got shot up? Were you there when it happened?”

Meadow nodded. She hiked up her skirt enough to show the bandages wrapped around her wounded leg.

“Oh Meadow!” Allison hugged her. After they embraced, Alli pulled away. “You are in trouble, aren’t you?”

“Why do you say that?”

“Other than the gunshot wound?” Alli smiled. Meadow smiled back and looked down. “There was this note under your door when I came in.” Alli handed Meadow a small handwritten note.

You have something we need. You know…

Meadow read the note. “I’ll be fine, Alli. Some kind of practical joke.”

Allison stood up. “If you think it’s ok then I believe you. I have to go to study group. Call me?”

Meadow nodded. “We’ll do something this weekend. Maybe tomorrow night?” Allison smiled and nodded. They hugged and Allison left.

A few minutes later Quin and Rebecca knocked on the door. Meadow let them in.

“Note?”

“Yes. Both of you as well?” Rebecca and Quin nodded.

“And someone tore my room apart!” Rebecca cried.

Quin and Meadow both looked confused. “Mine was fine,” said Quin.

“Mine too,” said Meadow.

“Well what are we going to do?”

“Cops,” said Meadow.

Rebecca nodded. “We need to talk to the police.”

“You two go to the cops,” Quin agreed. “I’m going to see what I can find out about Bearhunter.”

---​

4:00 PM Friday, July 16th
Williamsburg, Virginia


Devin pulled the ’69 Chevy pickup into the parking lot. The engine sputtered a few times, groaned in agony, then fell asleep. Devin sputtered and groaned just as much as he lowered himself out of the cab. Good lord his head hurt!

The lights were out in his house. No sound coming from inside. He unlocked the door and entered. Empty. He checked every room just in case. Nothing. Lisa was gone. Devin could feel the bottom drop out of his stomach. It hadn’t hit him before. His little sister was in danger because of him. His answering machine flashed 3 at him. He hit the PLAY button.

“Mr. Cole. This is Don from Dominion Power. We have not received your payment for this billing cycle…”

DELETE

“Mr. Cole. This is Retta from Verizon Telephone Services. We have still not received your payment….”

DELETE

“Mr. Cole. Lisa is with us and she is being taken care of. We will make sure she’s safe while you recover Sammy’s lost merchandise.”

Somehow, the bottom of Devin’s stomach dropped even farther. He grabbed his baseball bat. Sammy was going to get some Louisville Lovin’.

Almost to the truck, he put the bat away. Calmer heads prevail. Devin climbed in the truck and turned the key. The old piece of crap took its time, but it started. Time to go see Sammy.

---​

4:30 PM Friday, July 16th
Yorktown, Virginia


Armani finished his double-quarter-pounder and Coke. Several of the windows were boarded over, but other than that the McDonalds was fully functional only four days after the shootout. He contemplated calling a cab, but decided he’d rather walk back to his hotel room.

An hour later, and covered in sweat, Armani reached the top of the stairway leading to the second floor of the Motel 6.

“Armani Determan?” Three cops were there, waiting at his hotel room door.

Armani looked around. All three had pistols drawn. But he’d done nothing wrong, had he? “Yeah, that’s me.” He put his hands up.

“Armani Determan, you are under arrest for the murder of Miguel Cervantes. You have the right to remain silent. If you…” Armani did not struggle as he was read his rights, led to the waiting cruiser, and brought downtown.
 

Zelfast

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Devin search for direction

The old pick-up sputtered at the stoplight. The red light just seemed to increase Devin’s complete annoyance and the bright sun did little for his pounding head ache. These last few days had been very strange; bullets, blood, and the old familiar…money. Money, it always ended up there it seemed. Jesus will this light ever change. Devin’s head pounded but the tears slipping down his cheeks stemmed from another source. His sister, a prisoner of that bastard Sammy Nickles, was gone and he had no way of knowing if he could ever get her back. Money…always the money. Well Devin, this one isn’t going to be found in your parenting magazines is it.


Devin lowered his head gently against the steering wheel. Lord, please give me the strength to see this through…for her not for me for her…Lisa…she is an innocent. His sobs broke his prayer for a few seconds, his shoulders rose and fell with each sputtering intake of breath. Please keep Sammy and his goons from harming her and show me what is right…And help me keep them from getting hurt…all of them.


HONK! HONK!


The light was green as Devin looked up. His foot pressed down gently on the gas and the truck lurched forward only to sputter and stall as it rolled into the middle of the intersection. The cars behind him began to honk their horns in protest. One by one they sped around him as he got out of the truck and popped the hood. Shaking his head he walked slowly to the bed of his truck and his toolbox. The passers-by showed him their appreciation by flipping him the bird or cursing him as they sped off. Coming back around the truck with a large wrench Devin looked in at the mass of metal crap that was his trucks engine. He smashed the wench into the block twice for good measure then fiddled with the loose spark plug wires and then closed the hood. It could have been worse I guess.


The truck started up a few minutes later and Devin sped off through the now red light, no one having even stopped to help him. I guess that’s your way of saying ok I have got your back son.
 

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“Tears in Hell” – Deals Made, Meetings Cancelled

“Tears in Hell” – Deals Made, Meetings Cancelled

5:30 PM Friday, July 16th
Newport News City Jail, Newport News, Virginia


Armani was led out of his cell to a waiting room. He sat at the table, hands still shackled, and waited for his visitor. A few minutes later a professionally dressed young man entered the room.

“Nicky Nickels.” He presented his right hand to Armani. “I’m here to get you out of this trouble. I suspect you know who I work for.”

Armani shook Nicky’s hand and they got down to business.

One hour later Armani was on the street, free for a while but twenty thousand dollars poorer. He hoped it was a temporary setback. He had a meeting that night with Sammy Nickels to discuss some business. Nicky Nickels’ services were not free.

---​

7:00 PM Friday, July 16th
Williamsburg, Virginia


He’d stopped at Taco Bell to kill some time and cool his temper before visiting Sammy. His truck had broken down on the way – twice. By the time Devin Cole finally rolled into the seedy establishment that Sammy Nickels called his base of operations it was late and the establishment was empty, with the exception of the single bartender. Devin pulled himself onto a stool and held his throbbing head.

“What’ll it be?”

“I need to see Sammy.” The bartender ignored him for a moment. He filled a pint and slid it towards Devin. “He’ll be out in a while. This one’s on the house.”

“Thanks. First one’s always free, isn’t it?”

The bartender ignored him for good this time and wiped the bar. The bar was immaculate. The bartender still wiped.

A few minutes later the outside door opened and a tall, bulky figure entered the bar. The figure approached Devin and pulled up an adjacent stool.

“Whatcha drinkin’?”

“The cheap stuff.”

“Bartender. Get me a drink.”

The bartender grabbed a dirty glass, filled it, and slid it towards Armani Determan.

“We both here for the same dude?”

Devin nodded. They waited in silence.

---​

5:00 PM Friday, July 16th
William & Mary Campus, Williamsburg, Virginia


Quinton Stark III was leery as he entered the computer lab. He didn’t spend much time here – some would say his grades showed it. But he did know some of the people who spent a lot of time in here and he had an idea of what they could do for him.

“Heya Robby. How’s it going?”

A lean young man crouched over a computer console in the corner of the room straightened up and looked warily around. He adjusted his glasses and focused on Quin.

“Not bad. How you doing?”

Quin had a seat next to Robby Bunt, one of the premier computer geeks on campus, and discussed what he needed. Robby discussed what he needed. The deal was made.

---​

6:00 PM Friday, July 16th
11th Precinct, Williamsburg, Virginia


Rebecca ran her fingers through her hair in frustration. Meadow tried not to slap the insolent young cop.

“We’ve been here for an HOUR! Have you even told anyone we’re waiting?”

The young cop glared at Meadow. “Yes. Have a seat.”

“I’ve had a seat for the last hour! We are in DANGER!”

“Sit down, miss.” Meadow and Rebecca scowled identical scowls at the cop and plopped themselves down on the miserably uncomfortable waiting seats.

“They’re busy,” scowled Rebecca. “Busy eating donuts and drinking coffee.” She clicked on her cell phone and pretended to make a call.

A young police-woman entered the foyer. “Miss McLean and Miss Michaels?” Meadow and Rebecca faced her. “My name is Sergeant Betty Richardson. Please follow me.” They did.

“Don’t tell her we have the bear,” whispered Meadow. Rebecca nodded.

“You mentioned that, like, ten times.”

Sitting in front of Sgt. Richardson’s desk they recapped the events of Monday night, explained the threatening notes they had received, failed to mention that they still had the bear, learned that the police had closed the case on the McDonalds shooting and abduction.

“What!? But Martin’s still missing!” shouted Rebecca. “How can they close the case?”

“Shhh….” Sgt. Richardson looked around the office. Several of the other police were looking at the desk. “We can’t talk about this. The POLICE are no longer OFFICIALLY investigating this case. That does NOT mean that NOBODY is investigating this case. It would probably be best if we spoke about this somewhere else.”

Rebecca calmed down. Her hands clasped her knees. “We can meet at my room on campus tonight.”

“Isn’t your apartment wrecked?”

“You’re right, Meadow.” Rebecca looked from Meadow back to Betty Richardson. “We can meet at Meadow’s room.” They gave Sgt. Richardson directions to the dorm and a time to meet. 8 PM.

They left the police station and headed towards Rebecca’s Grand Am.

“Think we should call Quin?” Rebecca said as she pulled out her keys.

“Do we have to?”

“Probably.”

Meadow sighted and dialed some digits into her cell phone.

---​

7:30 PM Friday, July 16th
Williamsburg, Virginia


Devin and Armani watched a hulking but well-dressed figure walk from the back room of the bar and settle his large form into a chair. “That him?”

Devin nodded. “Let’s go see him.” They sat down at Sammy Nickels’ table. The bartender brought fresh beer before any words were exchanged.

“Gentlemen. We have a problem.”

“You have my little sister. That’s a problem. It’s all I can do to not kill you right now.”

“Calm down, Mr. Cole. Lisa is perfectly safe. In fact, she spent a lovely day at Busch Gardens today. You lost a large portion of cash that belonged to me and I’m upset that you couldn’t have done a better job at protecting my belongings.”

“Yeah? And how good a job would you do with a f***ing bullet in your head!?”

Sammy waved a dismissing hand at Devin. “Mr. Determan here took care of that and ensured that the goods got to where they needed to go.” Armani smiled proudly. “But the process of recovering involved hiring one of my more expensive men. For that, Mr. Cole, you owe me.” Sammy Nickels turned his attention to Armani. “Mr. Determan, I trust that Nicky has taken good care of you?”

“I’m here ain’t I? Not in f***in’ jail.”

“Good. So I suppose it is safe to say that you owe me.” Armani nodded. He knew how the criminal barter system worked. “I need something recovered. An Indian artifact. A carved bear.”

Sammy explained that the bear had been in the possession of the old man kidnapped at the McDonalds. He needed the artifact for a businessman he was working with. He claimed not to know about who took the bear or where it was, but he had ideas about who might have a better idea.

“There were some college kids there with their professor. They may have an idea of where the artifact could be found. Recover it and we are square.”

“Where d’ya want it delivered?” Armani asked.

“I’ll deliver it up his f***ing ass,” whispered Devin.

Sammy didn’t seem to hear. “Just bring it here. It will get to me.”

“You want a ribbon on it?”

“Thank you, Mr. Determan. No. That is all I have for you, Mr. Cole.” Devin and Armani both stood to leave. “Mr. Determan, if you would stay for a moment longer.”

Armani sat down as Devin strode out of the bar, slamming the door behind him.

“Yeah?”

“You killed a man on Monday.”

“I don’t give a f**k. He deserved it.”

“That’s what I thought.” Sammy smiled. “That’s just the man I want for this job. I DO know who was involved in the kidnapping. Her name is Wendy Johnson. I want her dead.”

“What’s it worth to you?” Sammy named a number. There were a lot of zeroes. “You got my attention.”

“I suspect that when you find the bear artifact you will find her. I imagine a man of your temperament will be able to find a way to get her head back to me. The rest of her body is unnecessary.”

“I’ll get it. We’ll find them college kids and go from there.” Sammy nodded and Armani left. Outside the bar he saw Devin parked in his pickup, trying to get it started. Armani hopped in the passenger side.

“Give me a ride to see them kids.” The engine sputtered and died.. Armani remembered briefly how to behave in society. “Please.”

“On my way.” The engine didn’t so much roar to life. It sputtered. It choked. It retched. Then it whimpered to life and they left the parking lot – destination William and Mary Campus.

---​

8:00 PM Friday, July 16th
William & Mary Campus, Williamsburg, Virginia


“What are you typing?” Meadow asked. She was sitting on the foot of her bed as Rebecca sat at Meadow’s computer, typing vigorously.

“Just a little e-mail about this bear. Don’t worry, I’m being subtle.”

“Nobody else knows we have this thing, Rebecca. I’d rather keep it that way. I mean, somebody is after it and if they knew…” Meadow shut her mouth as Quin walked into the dorm room. He closed the door behind him.

“Hey girls.” They greeted him. “I have a friend of mine working on finding out about that e-mail address. Hey, either of you know Jenny Patson?”

Rebecca and Meadow shook their heads. “Why?” asked Rebecca.

“Well, this guy doesn’t come free. He’ll find out about the e-mail address I’m sure. But in return I need to get him a date with this girl he’s got a crush on. This Jenny.”

“Quite the little pimp aren’t you, Quin?” Rebecca jibed. She reviewed her e-mail one last time.


TO: John Edward <johnedward@crossingover.com>
FROM: Rebecca Michaels <michaelsr@wandm.edu>
SUBJ: Bears that talk to dead people

Dear Mr. Edward,

I'm writing in the hopes that you can help me with an
extremely urgent problem. My fiance, who is a professor
at a well-known university, has recently found an artifact
that is reported to speak to the dead. Since this is also
your line of work (which I love!), I was wondering if you'd
heard of it. (If not, perhaps you could ask some of your
clients if they've spoken with a bear recently?) If they
have, or if you know of it, I'm very interested in any
information you can give me. I would certainly grant
permission for you to use my story in an episode.

Sincerely,
Rebecca Michaels

P.S. I'm in a hurry, and in danger, so it would be best if
you respond by e-mail. But I'd really appreciate it if you
could also send a paper copy of your response, signed,
by mail. Thank you, RM



Rebecca clicked SEND. She logged off the computer. “All done. Now were is that nice Sergeant lady?”

“What are we here for, anyway? What did you lovely ladies find out at the police station?”

“Well we dealt with this big fat jerk who wouldn’t let us talk to anyone for, like, an HOUR, and he had bad skin. He could really use some of my…”

Meadow interrupted. “ANYWAY… we got to see a lady who we’re meeting tonight. Betty.”

“Who’s Betty?” Quinton asked.

Someone knocked on the door. “That might be her.” Rebecca got up and walked to the door. She peered through the peephole. “Drats. It’s those thugs from the McDonalds. Should I let them in?”

“C’mon, let us in.” A gravelly voice came through the door.

“Don’t you thugs have other things to worry about besides us?” Rebecca said to the peephole.

“Damn it, I’ll break the door down!” “Shut up, Armani.” “Bunch of pansy college students.” “They might be doing something gay. Lots of gay people on this campus.” “Let us in! We don’t want to break in on anything gay, but we got to talk.”

Rebecca opened the door. “I’m not gay,” objected Quin. Armani and Devin stood in the doorway, looking inside but not looking too hard. Meadow objected to their presence as Armani insisted that he needed to talk to “all you gay college kids.”

Rebecca’s phone rang. The arguing continued as she answered it.

“Hello, this is Rebecca Michaels.” There was silence for a moment. In the background Rebecca could hear car noise, some strained breathing. "Hello?"

“Ms. Michaels, this is Sgt. Richardson. I can’t make our meeting tonight. They’re on to me. They’re following me right now…” The phone clicked off.

Rebecca clicked her phone off. The argument in the hallway had bounced between “why should we help you?” to “how can you help us?” to “why are you such thugs?” to “where is the bear?” to “why don’t you just go away?” It was at the “why don’t I just beat the answers out of you” stage when Rebecca interrupted.

“Betty can’t make it.”

Meadow looked worried. “Why not?”

“Who’s Betty?” Quin asked.

Rebecca ignored Quin and faced Meadow. “She says someone is following her or something.”

The stream of arguments continued. “Just help me get the goddamn bear.” “Look, I just want to get my sister back.” “Are you gay?” “We can help you if you help us.” “Who’s Betty?”

The flood of voices was interrupted by the screeching of tires and the SLAM of metal on metal from outside. More squealing tires as the group ran down the stairs to investigate. Outside they saw a large black pickup peeling out of the parking lot and a virtually destroyed Toyota Tercel crunched against a light post.

“There’s someone in there!” Rebecca shouted. Devin sprinted towards the car, the others a few steps behind. A woman was in the driver’s seat, pinned in by seatbelt, airbag, and crushed metal. Devin yanked on the door with all his might. Nothing.

“Back off, little man.” Armani shoved Devin out of the way and wretched on the door. It gave, but only slightly. “Ok, need help.”

“Just use a crowbar, man!” Quin made a prying motion towards Armani.

“What, you think I carry a f***in’ crowbar in my pocket?”

Meadow chimed in. “You’re a thug! Isn’t that what thugs do?”

Armani opened his mouth. Closed it. Opened it. Closed it. Cursed under his breath.

Devin’s attention shifted from the growing puddle of fuel at his feet to the jammed door. “We’ve got to get her out of here!”

Armani and Devin threw their collective strength into the door and slowly it groaned open.

“Get her out!” Devin shouted. “We can’t hold it for long.” A flicker of flame was visible under the accordioned hood and the puddle of fuel at their feet was spreading.

Meadow and Rebecca carefully tried to pull the body from the car, avoiding projecting metal. “We’ve got her!”

Armani and Devin released the door, which SLAMMED shut inches from Meadow’s face. Armani hefted the woman’s body up on his shoulder and the group sprinted towards the protection of the housing building. The fire and fuel connected as Quinton, bringing up the rear, reached the doorway and the explosion hurled him into the building.

Armani carefully set the woman’s body down on the ground. She was breathing weakly. “Stupid broad. Chicks can’t drive.”

“That’s Betty,” said Meadow. “I guess whoever was after her almost got her.”

“Who the hell is Betty?” asked Quin.

Meadow sighed loudly as she helped Devin apply first aid. “Pay attention, Quin. We’ve been discussing her all evening.”
 

ledded

Herder of monkies
Puppy Kicker said:
“What are you typing?” Meadow asked. She was sitting on the foot of her bed as Rebecca sat at Meadow’s computer, typing vigorously.

“Just a little e-mail about this bear. Don’t worry, I’m being subtle.”
<snip>

TO: John Edward <johnedward@crossingover.com>
FROM: Rebecca Michaels <michaelsr@wandm.edu>
SUBJ: Bears that talk to dead people

Dear Mr. Edward,

I'm writing in the hopes that you can help me with an
extremely urgent problem. My fiance, who is a professor
at a well-known university, has recently found an artifact
that is reported to speak to the dead. Since this is also
your line of work (which I love!), I was wondering if you'd
heard of it. (If not, perhaps you could ask some of your
clients if they've spoken with a bear recently?) If they
have, or if you know of it, I'm very interested in any
information you can give me. I would certainly grant
permission for you to use my story in an episode.

Sincerely,
Rebecca Michaels

P.S. I'm in a hurry, and in danger, so it would be best if
you respond by e-mail. But I'd really appreciate it if you
could also send a paper copy of your response, signed,
by mail. Thank you, RM

Okay, *that* little scene just made me nearly spit coffee all over my monitor. Nice touch.

The story is coming along quite well, your characters are developing in very interesting and 'normal' ways, and the plot has already got a couple neat little twists in it. I'm liking it.

One question; do your players play these characters like they are written, dialog and all, or do you take a little bit of 'poetic license' with their PC's based on how they act?


 

Puppy Kicker

First Post
ledded, the group is used to mainly combat in a fantasy game. So for the first session (and the first time they'd ever played a Modern game) there was a lot of dialogue derived from what they did and how I thought their characters would talk. Frankly, that's why (in my opinion) the first session just wasn't as funny. I just can't make these things up that well. ;) There were, however, a couple taken straight from their mouths...

“Please don’t hurt me, just take my purse. There’s a cell phone… some money… a nice shade of lipstick?” (said as Rebecca's player was reading out her equipment list) “Take it, punk. Take it all.” “Nice toss.” (said as Meadow's player gave Rebecca's player a legitimate angry scowl)

... for example.

The second session was pretty much verbatim as far as the clever and witty dialogue went. The players had gotten a handle on their characters and started having fun with them. Plus, we have an official "wit recorder" so whenever someone said something cool it would get written down. When I went back to write the story hour I typed in the quotes first and then started writing the story around them. This is working well I think. Otherwise I might have forgotten quotes like “You want a ribbon on it?” or the “What, you think I carry a f***in’ crowbar in my pocket?” “You’re a thug! Isn’t that what thugs do?” scene.

As far as the non-witty "filler" dialogue to present information to the reader or advance a long scene, I pretty much make that up the way I think their character's would say it. I stick in whatever they said that was cool during that scene and then type in the filler around it. I'm good at non-witty. The players are good at witty. It's what I call teamwork. ;)

I think it's only going to get better from here now as everyone gets more into the characters and they get stuck in wierder and wierder situations. Stay tuned!

* As for the e-mail. I'll just let Rebecca reply about that. I think the girl gets a certain perverse pleasure out of watching the GM almost choke on his drink laughing.

** Oh, and if anyone happens to have d20 Modern stats for John Edward, well I know one GM who suddenly needs them.
 
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pogre

Legend
Well, your post in my SH led me here and I'm glad it did.

One of the things I struggle with in modern settings is the question of how I would bring the group together. You did a great job of bringing a diverse bunch of folks together in an interesting way. The whole thing reminds me of a CoC campaign I ran years ago...


This is a long way of saying - great job!
 

ledded

Herder of monkies
Puppy Kicker said:
ledded, the group is used to mainly combat in a fantasy game.
Ours was too before Modern. OldDrewId's Medallions d20 Modern really introduced us all to playing normal, flawed characters who did more than just whack things with a big stick. We like it a lot more that way now; games are much more interesting when there is a little more than 'open the next door, whack the baddie, take his stuff, lather, rinse, repeat'.

“What, you think I carry a f***in’ crowbar in my pocket?” “You’re a thug! Isn’t that what thugs do?”
Heh. My character gets this kind of stuff a *lot*. But our in-character bickering and prodding adds a lot to our game and subsequently our Story Hour. It's great fun. Your folks seem to be doing quite well in that department.

I stick in whatever they said that was cool during that scene and then type in the filler around it. I'm good at non-witty. The players are good at witty. It's what I call teamwork. ;)
That is very much how I write my own story hour :). Most anything amusing was taken straight from a player, the rest I sort of fill in from things they said and their general attitudes. In our modern game we actually started taping the sessions, then Pierce transcribes them later for OldDrewId. We taped some of mine, but I don't have the patience to wade through the tapes so I just write how I see fit.

** Oh, and if anyone happens to have d20 Modern stats for John Edward, well I know one GM who suddenly needs them.
A bunch of Charismatic with some levels in Personality. Waaaaay maxed out bluff. He's gotta have some kind of enchantment or illusion magic going :D

Pogre said:
One of the things I struggle with in modern settings is the question of how I would bring the group together. You did a great job of bringing a diverse bunch of folks together in an interesting way. The whole thing reminds me of a CoC campaign I ran years ago...
I've actually found that it's sometimes easier and almost always more interesting and believable in a modern setting myself. Our group was so tired of the '5 adventurers with disparate personalities and professions meet up at a Tavern...'. In a modern setting, you can draw from your own personal experience, movies, books etc on the strange or not-so-strange events that draw people together, whether they be traumatic or not.

Good work Puppy Kicker. You have a good SH going and it sounds like you have a really fun group to work with.
 

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