Rabelais said:
Great googly moogly... Monday evening cliffhangers?
Heh, check out my custom nick. Plenty of cliffhangers to go around.

One of the more entertaining thing about the serial format, actually; had I lived in the 1950s I probably would have been writing for one of those campy movie serials. With maybe a
mote more internal consistency.
I'm heading out of town on Thursday, so the "week-ending cliffhanger" (as opposed to your daily run-of-the-mill cliffhanger) will be posted then.
Today update includes one of those situations where you just can't think that it can get any worse...
And then it does.
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Chapter 36
RETURN TO ZELKOR’S LAIR
Dar woke feeling miserable, his guts clenching, bringing back memories of a bout with dysentery when he was in the army. Refusing to show weakness in front of the others, he forced himself up and through a series of warm-up exercises. Throughout the brief exertion he felt as though his stomach was about to explode. The would-be rescue party might have been fooled, but Varo saw through his charade and noted his distress.
“It is the advance of the crystal death," he said.
“You don’t seem to be all that affected.”
“The advancement of the illness varies with each victim,” the priest explained. “And in any case, there is no need to prolong our suffering. The healer should be able to purge our bodies of the substance.”
Dar nodded, although for some reason he felt oddly reluctant at the thought of subjecting himself to the healer’s touch again. But Varo took the initiative, and Allera agreed to work the magic on their behalf. After all of the worry about a slow, lingering death, the cure was remarkably anticlimactic; once she had prepared her spells for the day, it took only a few seconds of mental focus, and a momentary surge of tingling power, before she pronounced both of them fully healed.
They did not linger long in their camp. Talen and Argus efficiently broke camp while Varo and Aelos prayed to their respective gods, separated by the full breadth of the room. The captain warned that they might encounter additional servants of Orcus searching for the missing party of clerics, but the bodies were still were they had stashed them in one of the smaller side rooms, and they encountered no other threats as they made their way back into the large cavern of the purple worms. They clung to the wall and retraced their steps to the stream without incident.
“What exactly can we expect to find ahead?” Varo asked.
“The stream goes on for a long distance... not quite a mile, but it’ll feel like it,” Talen said. “Your magic, if it is the same as Aelos’s spell, will keep you above the water, so the current should not affect you, but there are places where the roof juts low and it will take some time to slip past.”
“If the current is going our way, why not just float down with it?” Dar asked.
“It’s a rough ride,” Shaylara said. “At places, the tunnel bends, twists through tight spots, and the water is churned into a nasty froth. No matter how good a swimmer you may be, I wouldn’t recommend it, let alone with a pack and full gear.”
“What about beyond?”
“The stream opens out onto a large cavern with a high ceiling,” Talen said. “The stream pours into a large recessed pool in the middle of the room. There’s a raised stone bier in the middle; we fought a pair of wraiths there when we came through.”
Varo nodded. “And the well?”
“Accessed through a series of tight tunnels that pass through several additional rooms. It wasn’t difficult to navigate, but the dark power of the place will steal your resolve. Try to focus on the objective, getting out. We got through by helping each other, last time. Don’t leave anyone behind.”
“There’s a lot of sudden ups and downs,” Krogan said. “Watch where you put your hands and feet. And keep an eye out for things lurking around the bends.”
“The well itself is located over a deep pool,” Shaylara added. “We left a rope attached just below the opening. If it’s still there, it will be a tough climb, but I think all of us can manage it.”
“And if it’s not there?” Dar asked.
“Then we find out if Shay’s as good a climber as she claims,” Talen said. The scout smiled at him.
“Are you ready, Aelos?” Talen asked. At the cleric’s nod, the companions gathered beside the overhang where the fast-moving stream vanished into the cavern wall. Dar came over to Varo, who was readying his own spell.
“Are you sure this will work?” the fighter asked.
“Have faith, mercenary,” the priest replied, invoking the power of Dagos, and touching his golden focus to the fighter’s forehead briefly.
“I don’t feel any different.”
“Look.” The cleric pointed at Talen, who was already edging under the overhang, his boots hovering a finger’s breadth over the rushing water.
The eight of them made their way through the narrow space, and followed the stream down the low passage beyond. As Talen had noted, the fit was tight at places, forcing them to bend low or even crawl over the surface of the water. But for the most part, the tunnel roof was about five feet above the stream, allowing them to made decent progress ahead.
After a time, a dark passage opened to the right, where a branch of the stream split off and headed off into another direction. “What’s that way?” Dar asked.
“We don’t know,” Argus said. “We weren’t exploring when we came this way; the divine miracle only lasts about an hour, according to Aelos.”
Varo paused briefly to look down the side tunnel, but then proceeded after the others.
As they made their way deeper down the stream, each of them began to feel a cold chill settle upon them. They’d all been splashed with the bracingly cold water numerous times, until their clothes were soaked through, but this was something deeper, a cold that seeped through their skins to cool the very bone. The light coming from Aelos’s staff dimmed slightly, drawing out the shadows that stretched along the tunnel walls.
“Focus on the goal,” Talen said. “We are getting out of here.”
Finally, after another few tight places that slowed their passage, they could see the stream tunnel opening into a wider space ahead. Wary, readying weapons, they moved forward.
“The entrance to the passage is to the left,” Talen said quietly. “Do not linger.”
Argus leaned against the side of the tunnel, but Allera was there immediately, drawing him back into line. Dar felt the same oppressive sense of ennui, an emptiness that whispered into his mind, urging him to surrender everything in the face of the inevitability of their doom. He too wanted to give up, to sit down or to throw himself into the water, letting the current carry him away. His jaw tightened until he felt pain in his teeth from the pressure, but he kept going.
“There is a powerful evil infusing this place,” Varo said.
“I’m no priest, but even I could have told you that,” Krogan said. The dwarf’s teeth were chattering.
“Come on,” Talen’s voice came from up ahead, a sharp command that drew them forward.
The light from Aelos’s staff—truly feeble now—spilled out into a cavern that was truly majestic in scope. The roar of the stream as it spilled out into the broad T-shaped pool was deafening, echoing off the distant walls all around them. For a moment, the companions stood there and took it all in, struggling with the lethargy that continued to pound away at their consciousness. Then Talen’s voice drew them again, forced them back to the immediacy of the moment.
“Over here!”
They followed him away from the stream, making an easy transition from striding across the water to solid ground. But as the cleric’s light reached the north wall of the cavern, they froze.
“I take it this was the way out?” Dar asked.
They stared at a massive heap of rubble, stones piled into a mound almost fifteen feet, high, spilling out into a trace that jutted into the cavern like a long tongue. Talen, a stricken look on his face, reached down and picked up a rock the size of his fist. For a moment he stared at it, and then he hurled it off into the darkness with an angry shout.
There was a clang.
“That doesn’t sound good,” Shaylara said, shifting her longspear in that direction.
The noise came again, this time louder and longer, a creaking noise of metal shifting. It was followed by a heavy clod upon stone, and then another.
“Something’s coming,” Argus said. The fighter was as pale as death; he reached for his sword, and then hesitated, his hand falling forgotten to his side.
Something resolved out of the darkness, a massive form that took form at the edges of Aelos’s light. It was formed like a man, but no mere man stood twelve feet tall, or made the noises that continued to come from it, the sound of metal bending in a most unnatural way. The fragments of light that reached it glinted off of an emerald skin, alien and terrible.
“An iron golem!” Varo cried.
“You’ve got to be kidding me,” Dar said, as the massive terror continued to lumber forward, bringing with it the promise of death.