Horacio said:
Dramatic? Drastic? 
What are you going to do ?!?!?!?
Heh. You'll see.
Originally posted by Ziggy
You write excellent fight scenes, IMHO the best among the story hours here. It's awesome how you are able to transform the ebb and flow of the battle into words, it's almost like being part of the battle.
Thanks! I've been writing action scenes for ten years now (I just recently realized that I started my first novel in 1992... feeling old all of a sudden), and I like to think I've come a long way in being able to produce convincing, fast-paced action. I'm glad you enjoy it, and I appreciate the compliment.
But now you promise an even bigger fight ?
Let's just say: 10 to 1 odds, and dwarven gifts needed sooner rather than later. Read on...
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Book IV, Part 16
“I can’t leave you alone for one second, can I,” Dana said, her tone light but her concern obvious on her face as she tended to Delem. The sorcerer gritted his teeth as Dana continued to pour healing energy into him from her wand of
cure light wounds, but soon his expression eased and the wound in his torso closed completely.
Around the battlefield, the others were making similar preparations, healing wounds and hastily looting the bodies of the ogres for anything useful or valuable. Jerral stood on the stone outcropping, watching impatiently for them to finish.
“We’ve got to get out of here,” she said. “The blast of that horn probably carried for miles…”
As if in answer, the loud note of another horn sounded in the distance, somewhere north of them. And even before the echoes had fully faded off the surrounding mountains, a second blast came from the southwest, its deep note sounding close… too close.
“Let’s go!” Jerral said, leaping off the outcropping and running to the west. Her companions hurried to follow, each imagining what forces might be behind those two baleful horns.
“Where are we going?” Benzan asked.
“Trust Jerral,” Cal managed, soon fighting for breath as his short legs tried to keep up with the pace set by the ranger. It was a hopeless cause, however, and soon he and the heavily armored Lok were lagging, the others adjusting their pace so as to not leave them behind. The ranger moved steadily ahead of them, pausing at the crest of another low rise ahead, her eyes darting over every bend and crease in the land as she scanned the horizon behind them.
“We’ll never outrun them,” Benzan said, as the companions reached the ranger’s vantage.
“I know,” Jerral said. “There’s a place, near here… I’ve only been there once, but it should serve as a good redoubt…”
“Lead on,” Benzan said. “We’ll be right behind you.”
“We need a scout, to check behind and see what’s coming and how close they are. Maybe I should…”
“No, you’re the only one who knows where we’re going,” Cal said, fighting for breath as he urged them on, continuing their conversation while still moving forward. They crested the rise to reveal another identical-seeming landscape of peaks and valleys beyond. The gray ceiling above them was beginning to darken, promising the approach of night, but they had perhaps an hour left until visibility would start to become a problem.
“I’ll go,” Dana said.
“Dana, you’re fast and nimble, but those monsters… their could be hundreds of them, and you just don’t have the ability to remain unseen that Jerral and I have,” Benzan said. “I should go.”
“I had something a little different in mind,” the cleric-monk replied, closing her eyes as she called upon the power of her goddess. They watched as she outstretched her arms and looked up to the heavens, and then started in surprise as she rose off of the ground, hovering effortlessly in front of them.
“I’m just going to make a quick scout, and I’ll be right back,” she said.
“We’ll keep to our current direction,” Jerral said. “Follow a westerly course, and you’ll find us.”
“Be careful, Dana,” Cal said. “Orcs are pretty good marksmen, and
dispel magic has a range of one hundred and fifty feet or more.”
“I’ll be careful,” she said. “You worry too much, you know.” And with a final wry smile, she shot up into the air, rapidly becoming just a speck as she rose several hundred feet into the air and flew speedily to the east.
“I didn’t know she could do that,” Jerral said.
“Neither did we,” Benzan admitted.
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For the next half-hour they set a rapid pace, scrambling over the broken expanse of rock and mud until they crested yet another rise to see a broad valley stretching out before them. They had not heard the horns of their pursuers again, but each could feel a sense of malevolence dogging them, as if unseen eyes were marking every step of their progress.
None of them ventured to suggest that perhaps their pursuers had given up on chasing them.
Now, within the valley ahead of them they could see the destination that Jerral had marked for them. Approximately within the center of the valley stood a lonely stone tor, its flat summit rising perhaps one hundred feet above the uneven valley floor. From what they could see, the only easy approach to the top was a rocky climb shaped like a funnel, a steep but manageable slope perhaps fifty paces across at its base but narrowing to only ten paces wide near the summit. To either side of that climb stood a sheer cliff.
“What about the back?” Lok asked.
“There’s a narrow trail up the rear face,” Jerral said. “It’s not a difficult climb, switchbacking its way up to the summit, but only wide enough for one at a time.”
“I’m surprised no one else has claimed it first,” Benzan said.
“This whole area is pretty barren, even during the other seasons. No good sources of water, and the soil is hard and rocky—the only other time I was here was in the autumn, and it was just as empty as it seems now.”
“It’ll have to serve,” Cal said. “It’ll be dark soon—we’d better get going.”
They started down into the valley. Delem asked, “What about Dana?”
“She knows how to take care of herself,” Benzan said. But the tiefling’s gaze returned frequently to the eastern sky as they made their way toward the tor.
They’d covered about half the distance to it, the stone monolith now looming above them in the twilight, when Benzan called out an alarm. They all looked back at the crest they’d just left behind, and even those without Benzan’s keen eyes could see the movement along the ridge. At least the armored forms they spotted were only man-sized, not the hulking forms of ogres.
“Orcs,” Jerral said. “About a dozen, it looks like. Probably a scouting wing for the main body.”
“They’re just standing there,” Delem said. “What are they waiting for?”
“Reinforcements,” Benzan replied. “Let’s get moving!”
They hurried their pace toward the tor, and they were nearing the base when another call, this time from Cal, brought their attention around again. Instead of another enemy, however, they saw it was Dana, streaking down out of the sky to land just ahead of them.
“What did you see?” several of them asked at once.
“It’s not good,” she told them. “There are two groups converging on this point. From the south we’ve got about fifty orcs—all warriors by the look of them. And from the north, fifteen or so ogres, plus two really big white wolves.”
“Winter wolves,” Jerral said. “They’re tough, and can breath cones of frost.”
“Oh, this just gets better and better,” Benzan interjected.
“How close?” Cal asked.
“They’re right behind us—just a ridge or two back. They’ll be here in minutes.” She shifted slightly, and they could see that she favored her right side slightly.
“You’re wounded!” Delem said.
“Just a scratch,” she said dismissively. “I’ll heal it when we get to cover. The ogres have several ballistae with them—I guess I got a little too close after all. One bolt grazed me… thanks again for the mage armor, Cal; it could have been a lot worse.”
“Strange… I can’t remember encountering ogres this well organized, or well equipped,” Jerral said. “I’m more curious about this mysterious ‘leader’ behind this alliance.”
“Well, we’ll be able to ponder the significance later,” Cal said. “Right now, we’d better get ready for their… visit.”
Without further discussion they hurried onward, reaching the base of the bluff and picking their way slowly up the front slope. The route was passable, if hazardous, and they took some hope in the fact that it would be a much more difficult climb in the face of determined opposition.
By the time they reached the summit, the light of the day was already beginning to fail. There was still just enough illumination, however, for them to make out the movement along the far ridge and the valley below.
Their pursuers had arrived as well.
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Starting Monday... battle royale!