seankreynolds
Adventurer
Re: Re: Re: Re: Re: STOP!
Well, too bad.
dcollins said:
A move in the right direction, but unfortunately the point is easily lost because all of your examples feel like descriptive-text, not rules-text. The quote about seeing an orc on a battlement, the gem bearing an enchantment, and the advice against referring to "sorcery" (which has no place in rules-text whatsoever) all feel like what you call "flavor text".
Even with the revision to one sentence, the overall tone of the essay and its examples does not feel like it is meant to be restricted to rules-text.
Well, too bad.
