Changes made so far.
You should probably include Plants in the types of creatures that can't be drained of blood.
Changed: "The vampire cannot suck blood from any creature of type Elemental, Construct, Undead, Outsider, Ooze or Plant"
You have a level 2 vampire gaining the "Improved reflexes" feat, which does not exist.
Changed: "Feats: All vampires of level 2 gain Improved Initiative"
What if some lesser gifts were more like Psionic feats, where you need a certain number of VP in reserve to get a benefit? For example, if using the Mind Gift, the vampire must have more VP in reserve than the victim has HD.
Changed:
"The Vampire needs to have at least 5 VP in store before he gains the benefit of Greater Alternate Form."
"The Vampire needs to have at least 5 VP in store before it gains the benefit of Lesser Unholy Speed. "
"Should the vampire loose enough VP to bring his store down to 5 or less, he will instantly loose any abilities he might have absorbed, as he looses the capacity to hold on to them."
Perhaps split Unholy Speed into 2 gifts, one that's essentially haste, and a second that grants the extra full round action. An extra full round action every turn is pretty insane (tho it is very Anne Rice-y).
Changed:
"Lesser Unholy Speed
Requirements: Dexterity 20+
A vampire with Lesser Unholy Speed is a terrifying opponent indeed. Able of moving with a speed which is unfathomable by mortal beings, the vampire becomes a hurricane of death. When a vampire has Lesser Unholy Speed, he automatically gains one extra partial action each round as if though he was permanently hasted. The Vampire needs to have at least 5 VP in store before it gains the benefit of Lesser Unholy Speed.
Greater Unholy Speed
Requirements: Lesser Unholy Speed.
Greater Unholy Speed enables the Vampire to move even faster than Lesser Unholy Speed. The Vampire can use his VP to gain extra speed, in times of need. By expending one VP in a round, he gains an extra full round action instead of a partial action. Invoking this gift is a free action, so a vampire can gain an extra full round actions for as many rounds as he has VP. A vampire of vampiric level 8 or above can gain two extra full round actions by expending two VP. A 15 Th. vampiric level vampire can gain three extra actions by expending three VP."
And I corrected any mistakes found so far, mostly typos.
If there are anyone out there that knows how to put together a catchy PDF, I wouldn't mind a little assistance
