The sheet looks good (like the keep it simple style

), but what if a cleric gains a third domain, or you want to write down your familiar/animal companion, keep some notes?
There is not enough room to write down classes for multiclass characters. You'd have to use abbreviations. I'd use one full line only for classes and level.
I generally dislike portions, which only apply to single character classes (the cleric domains/turning stuff specifically). It should at least be useful for a couple classes (i.e. like spellcasting). I'd do away with the cleric section and use it for something else. Domains can be listed under special abilities. Turning can be looked up in the book.
Also, personally I prefer a 2 page sheet, which has enough room to write down prepared spells (or known spells for a sorcerer). A spellbook needs a seperate sheet, for obvious reasons, but not everyone with spells needs that much room (actually, only wizards really do), so a small section (kinda like on the official sheet, maybe a bit more) on the first 2 pages would be nice.
For the extra "spellbook sheet" it would be good to add some columns for important information (i.e. range, duration, save, spell resistance), doesn't need to be much room, a one-letter space is enough for most of these.
One thing I totally like from Claudio Poza's character sheet, which I am currently using (it has a few flaws, but nothing major), is the area where the body slots are listed and you can write down what item is worn where.
That's all I can think of right now.
Oh, there's a typo. It's Deity not Diet-y (

).
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Thanee