D&D 5E Wizard School of Obfuscation

[Elon Tusk]

Thus started as just a stealthy wizard but became something with a little more purpose.



As always, I appreciate any thoughtful comments and advice.

 

[Satyrn]

An interesting concept.

I don't know how Slyness is supposed to work. The reaction bit to Hide. I mean, if he's standing in the middle of a white room and gets smacked by a sword, how is he hiding? I think you're giving out too much at 2nd level, anyway, so I'd drop that bit.

A minor housekeeping thing: I find most featu4es that give a number of uses based on an ability score modifier say something like "you can use this abilitu a number of times equal to you Int modifier (minimum of 1 use)" instead of "1+int mod times." I think you ought to change Obscure Arcana to work that way.

And I'd simplify Tongue Tie to just have all the effects on a failed save without bothering about the fail by 5 or more.

 

[Elon Tusk]

An interesting concept.

I don't know how Slyness is supposed to work. The reaction bit to Hide. I mean, if he's standing in the middle of a white room and gets smacked by a sword, how is he hiding? I think you're giving out too much at 2nd level, anyway, so I'd drop that bit.

A minor housekeeping thing: I find most featu4es that give a number of uses based on an ability score modifier say something like "you can use this abilitu a number of times equal to you Int modifier (minimum of 1 use)" instead of "1+int mod times." I think you ought to change Obscure Arcana to work that way.

And I'd simplify Tongue Tie to just have all the effects on a failed save without bothering about the fail by 5 or more.

Thanks, for the comments.

I removed the Hide action from Slyness.

I changed Obscure Arcana to state "1 + your Intelligence modifier (minimum 1)," making it in line with features like the Alter Memories feature of School of Enrichment.

I realized that I made the illiterate part of Tongue-Tie an add on because it didn't exactly fit the name of the feature (reading doesn't tongues tongues don't really effect the ability to read). So I got rid of the 5 point differential and changed the name of the feature.