Hussar said:
Yeah, I can totally see that. Plus, I'm thinking that there may have been alterations to the maps during adventure writing that wasn't passed on to the adventure writers. I mean, look at the mess that B is. The way it is written, the Goblin Empire, despite controlling the southwest and northeast, cannot actually move from one section to the other. Pretty hard for the rebels to hide when the only way guards can shift from one area to the other passes right through their home.
C has issues as well. As written, Nardarik cannot actually leave his area of the map - he'd have to pass through too many nasty areas - including the hall of the Celestials which would pretty much kill him to do so. Even if he could open the secret doors, which he can't. I added a couple of passages to the map to fix that when I ran it.
ah. hussar. how you vex me.
but seriously, map b was an absolute MESS when i got it from the writer. i won't go into it here, but the material was four months late on top of everything else. i've avoided on EVERY FRONT avoiding speaking negatively of anyone's efforts on this book. but region b was completely re-written by me and region c had three authors because of people's inability to hit deadlines.
so much time was spent trying to reconcile everything, time we didn't have.
four years ago, this month, i had two broken fingers in my right hand, and i was editing and typing with my left. insane. region a took all of a week to edit. region b took four weeks. region c three. region d zero.
regions d, f, g, and k might be the best ones in the book, but few people get that far because
a is boring
b has typos
thankfully e is amazing and many people give the book a second chance because of that.
i always feel amazingly bad about the editing errors in this product, but at the same time slighly malign (and i know this isn't intentional), when said errors are brought to my attention.
or in the case, flaunted in front of me like a diabetic watching people eat mounds and mounds of delicious chocolate cake with rum sauce and a mountain of whipped cream while sipping sugar-infused espresso...
er.
where was i?
i am sorry there are 10 x 10 (or 20 x 20... if you change the scale of the map) rooms with monsters too big to fit into the dungeon. but that's great fodder for the "prison" that is the WLD.
editing errors suck. i know. i'm with you. if i saw someone else make this mistakes i'd be the first one posting behind hussar.
sigh.
at least i can be proud a few innovations in the book design, eh?
oh...
if you'd like to hear my rant about the ruins of undermountain, i'd be glad to post it on my blog.
