Hmm. On page 8, It's 'Torel'. On page 9, in the drawing, it's 'Torrel'. And in the text it seems to be 'Torrell'. Need a proofreader?
'Raph Tonsilflare'? I like it, but is it supposed to be a comedic setting?
"If you wish to have your ghodon character become a ranger, change the racial +2...