Behold! DOOM!
Some fairly big changes here. I decided to make the Create Objects power Val's "primary" power, and I think it worked pretty well. Adding the 'Damaging' extra (which it becomes eligible for due to having the Move Object extra) lets her create small 'chunks' of force and hurl them at damaging speeds. Making the created objects selective reflects her control over the constructs, and allows her to shield herself or others while altering the shield so as not to interfere with outgoing attacks.
Her gadget pool was expanded slightly, and will generally consist of support equipment...communication, senses, and similar. With experience, this will grow.
I used her Equipment points to define a warehouse she's purchased and outfitted as a workshop. Though it has living space, it's not necessarily where she spends most of her time.
Finally, in the background, I made a few assumptions that might need revising. For one, the order of events between Franklin's return and Reed's disappearance. For another, the length of time that has followed between Reed's vanishing and the present day. Let me know what needs changing and I'll make the necessary adjustments. Insight, be sure and let me know if any changes to the part involving Franklin are needed too.
[sblock=Sheet]Name: Valeria Von Doom
Gender: Female
Age: 16?
Size: Medium
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 124lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Power Level: 10
Power Points: 150
Experience Points: 0
Hero Points: 1
ABILITIES 24
STR 10 (0 PP)
DEX 12 (2 PP)
CON 12 (2 PP)
INT 22 (12 PP)
WIS 14 (4 PP)
CHA 14 (4 PP)
SAVES 14
Tough +10 (+1 Con + 9 power)
Fort +6 (1 +5) 5pp
Ref +6 (1 +5) 5pp
Will +6 (2 +4) 4pp
COMBAT 20
INIT +5
BASE DEF +4 (8 PP)
DEF 14 (10 + 4 Base)
FLAT-FOOTED 12
BASE ATT +6 (12 PP)
SKILLS 40 SP (10 PP)
Computer +10 (6 + 4)
Craft Mechanical +11 (6 + 5)
Craft Electronics +11 (6 + 5)
Craft Chemical +11 (6 + 5)
Knowledge Technology +16 (6 + 10)
Knowledge Physical Sciences +11 (6 + 5)
Disable Device +11 (6 + 5)
LANGUAGES (1 ranks)
- English
- Latverian
MOVEMENT
SPEED 30/60/120
FEATS (6 PP)
Attractive 1
Inventor 1
Improved Initiative 1
Improvised Tools 1
Equipment (15pts) 3
POWERS (75)
Create Object (PF Subtle 2, Stationary, Selective, Accurate 2, Extra: Movable, Extra: Damaging) +10, 46pp
Flight (PF Subtle 2) +4, 10pp
Device (Hard to lose Armored Suit, 15pts) +3, 12pp
- Protection +9, 9pp
- Enhanced Strength +6, 6pp
Gadgets (Flaw: Action, Flaw: Limited - Workshop Only, Drawback: 1 min action, 10pts) +2, 7pp
EQUIPMENT
Cellphone 1
PDA 1
Camera 1
Gas Mask/Rebreather 2
Headquarters (10)
- Medium, Toughness 10 (2)
- Concealed 1
- Defense System 1
- Computer 1
- Workshop 1
- Garage 1
- Living Space 1
- Security System 1
- Power System 1
COST
Abilities [24]
Combat [20]
Saves [14]
Skills [10]
Feats [7]
Powers [75]
Drawbacks [0]
Total [150]
Unspent [0][/sblock]
[sblock=DESCRIPTION]
With her blonde hair, blue eyes and luminous smile, it is clear that Valeria takes after her mother's good looks. Even so, she's much more self-conscious about her appearance than a lot of superheroes. Her loose tabard over thick armored extremities is functional, but not particularly alluring. Even so, it's clear that she's growing into her mother's magazine-cover curves as well, though she's got some years to go before she gets there.[/sblock]
[sblock=HISTORY]
Valeria is the second child born from the woman who had been called Susan Richards...though by the time Val was born, Sue's name had changed to Von Doom. She grew up in the relative luxury that was the birthright of the daughter of the Defender of Latveria, and one of the more revered minds on planet Earth; Victor Von Doom. She inherited her father's intelligence and love of engineering and invention. Victor encouraged this, and they grew very close with their common interests.
Unfortunately, life wasn't all polo and family bonding at the Von Dooms. They had an enemy who was every bit Victor's intellectual equal, possibly even more so. A former romantic rival for Susan's affections, Reed Richards. When his growing paranoia and possessiveness drove Sue into Victor's arms, something in the brilliant, but deranged scientist snapped. Afraid for their daughter's safety, they kept Valeria on a very short leash. Victor was sure to teach her the basics of defending herself very early on, and didn't flinch from teaching her the more dangerous applications of the sciences. Sue's son from her previous marriage to Richards, Franklin, had vanished some time previously and she feared the worst for Valeria as well.
Then, everything changed. The Earth was besieged by a giant alien being calling itself Galactus. Before the planet could muster a defense capable of repelling it, Galactus was turned back when its Herald turned on it and destroyed its planet-eating weapon! The Herald of Galactus turned out to be none other than Franklin Richards, who was stripped of his otherworldly powers as Galactus retreated, and returned to his home on Earth. Shortly afterwards Reed Richards, one of the most dangerous men in the world, vanished into one of his experiments and didn't come back.
It took perhaps another year before Valeria's petitions to go to the United States and visit her brother, or half-brother, were finally deemed safe enough to permit. At first she had one of her father's Doombots with her at all times. As time passed, she convinced Victor that she didn't need the chaparone. For months she visited frequently, quickly growing to love the big cities of America, which Latveria lacked. While there, she performed the same duties she would have in her homeland...helping to fight crime. Ordinary crime she handled herself. Bigger jobs would have her teaming up with Franklin. Either way, she found it much more interesting than Latveria, where Doombots handled just about everything with effortless ease. Seeking an excuse to reside in America permanantly, she applied, successfully, to several prestitious universities.
That, however, took a back seat when she was contacted about something called The Avenger
Initiative...
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Some fairly big changes here. I decided to make the Create Objects power Val's "primary" power, and I think it worked pretty well. Adding the 'Damaging' extra (which it becomes eligible for due to having the Move Object extra) lets her create small 'chunks' of force and hurl them at damaging speeds. Making the created objects selective reflects her control over the constructs, and allows her to shield herself or others while altering the shield so as not to interfere with outgoing attacks.
Her gadget pool was expanded slightly, and will generally consist of support equipment...communication, senses, and similar. With experience, this will grow.
I used her Equipment points to define a warehouse she's purchased and outfitted as a workshop. Though it has living space, it's not necessarily where she spends most of her time.
Finally, in the background, I made a few assumptions that might need revising. For one, the order of events between Franklin's return and Reed's disappearance. For another, the length of time that has followed between Reed's vanishing and the present day. Let me know what needs changing and I'll make the necessary adjustments. Insight, be sure and let me know if any changes to the part involving Franklin are needed too.
[sblock=Sheet]Name: Valeria Von Doom
Gender: Female
Age: 16?
Size: Medium
Height: 5' 5"
Weight: 124lbs
Hair: Blonde
Eyes: Blue
Power Level: 10
Power Points: 150
Experience Points: 0
Hero Points: 1
ABILITIES 24
STR 10 (0 PP)
DEX 12 (2 PP)
CON 12 (2 PP)
INT 22 (12 PP)
WIS 14 (4 PP)
CHA 14 (4 PP)
SAVES 14
Tough +10 (+1 Con + 9 power)
Fort +6 (1 +5) 5pp
Ref +6 (1 +5) 5pp
Will +6 (2 +4) 4pp
COMBAT 20
INIT +5
BASE DEF +4 (8 PP)
DEF 14 (10 + 4 Base)
FLAT-FOOTED 12
BASE ATT +6 (12 PP)
SKILLS 40 SP (10 PP)
Computer +10 (6 + 4)
Craft Mechanical +11 (6 + 5)
Craft Electronics +11 (6 + 5)
Craft Chemical +11 (6 + 5)
Knowledge Technology +16 (6 + 10)
Knowledge Physical Sciences +11 (6 + 5)
Disable Device +11 (6 + 5)
LANGUAGES (1 ranks)
- English
- Latverian
MOVEMENT
SPEED 30/60/120
FEATS (6 PP)
Attractive 1
Inventor 1
Improved Initiative 1
Improvised Tools 1
Equipment (15pts) 3
POWERS (75)
Create Object (PF Subtle 2, Stationary, Selective, Accurate 2, Extra: Movable, Extra: Damaging) +10, 46pp
Flight (PF Subtle 2) +4, 10pp
Device (Hard to lose Armored Suit, 15pts) +3, 12pp
- Protection +9, 9pp
- Enhanced Strength +6, 6pp
Gadgets (Flaw: Action, Flaw: Limited - Workshop Only, Drawback: 1 min action, 10pts) +2, 7pp
EQUIPMENT
Cellphone 1
PDA 1
Camera 1
Gas Mask/Rebreather 2
Headquarters (10)
- Medium, Toughness 10 (2)
- Concealed 1
- Defense System 1
- Computer 1
- Workshop 1
- Garage 1
- Living Space 1
- Security System 1
- Power System 1
COST
Abilities [24]
Combat [20]
Saves [14]
Skills [10]
Feats [7]
Powers [75]
Drawbacks [0]
Total [150]
Unspent [0][/sblock]
[sblock=DESCRIPTION]
With her blonde hair, blue eyes and luminous smile, it is clear that Valeria takes after her mother's good looks. Even so, she's much more self-conscious about her appearance than a lot of superheroes. Her loose tabard over thick armored extremities is functional, but not particularly alluring. Even so, it's clear that she's growing into her mother's magazine-cover curves as well, though she's got some years to go before she gets there.[/sblock]
[sblock=HISTORY]
Valeria is the second child born from the woman who had been called Susan Richards...though by the time Val was born, Sue's name had changed to Von Doom. She grew up in the relative luxury that was the birthright of the daughter of the Defender of Latveria, and one of the more revered minds on planet Earth; Victor Von Doom. She inherited her father's intelligence and love of engineering and invention. Victor encouraged this, and they grew very close with their common interests.
Unfortunately, life wasn't all polo and family bonding at the Von Dooms. They had an enemy who was every bit Victor's intellectual equal, possibly even more so. A former romantic rival for Susan's affections, Reed Richards. When his growing paranoia and possessiveness drove Sue into Victor's arms, something in the brilliant, but deranged scientist snapped. Afraid for their daughter's safety, they kept Valeria on a very short leash. Victor was sure to teach her the basics of defending herself very early on, and didn't flinch from teaching her the more dangerous applications of the sciences. Sue's son from her previous marriage to Richards, Franklin, had vanished some time previously and she feared the worst for Valeria as well.
Then, everything changed. The Earth was besieged by a giant alien being calling itself Galactus. Before the planet could muster a defense capable of repelling it, Galactus was turned back when its Herald turned on it and destroyed its planet-eating weapon! The Herald of Galactus turned out to be none other than Franklin Richards, who was stripped of his otherworldly powers as Galactus retreated, and returned to his home on Earth. Shortly afterwards Reed Richards, one of the most dangerous men in the world, vanished into one of his experiments and didn't come back.
It took perhaps another year before Valeria's petitions to go to the United States and visit her brother, or half-brother, were finally deemed safe enough to permit. At first she had one of her father's Doombots with her at all times. As time passed, she convinced Victor that she didn't need the chaparone. For months she visited frequently, quickly growing to love the big cities of America, which Latveria lacked. While there, she performed the same duties she would have in her homeland...helping to fight crime. Ordinary crime she handled herself. Bigger jobs would have her teaming up with Franklin. Either way, she found it much more interesting than Latveria, where Doombots handled just about everything with effortless ease. Seeking an excuse to reside in America permanantly, she applied, successfully, to several prestitious universities.
That, however, took a back seat when she was contacted about something called The Avenger
Initiative...
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