SK had suggested an archetype. If you're okay with vanilla, I will check over it tomorrow.
Im okay with vanilla just wanting to have my character ready and its been so long since I have played 3.0/pathfinder that I don't wanna confuse myself lol
The fixed style for the racial features, traits, feats, appearance, and demeanor is a pain because it forces people to go through and insert line breaks to make it look nice, which they rarely do -- either because they don't know or because they don't care. Which usually means the reviewing judge has to fix it somehow.