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I think “burned it all down” is the new “raped my childhood”. It’s hard to take such hyperbole seriously. Sometimes the internet isn’t a good thing.

Well one is saying that the new stories have negatively impacted ones view of the old stories. The other is saying that something in a piece of fiction ruined your memories of your real life as a kid. Noticeable difference in levels of hyperbole.
 

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In less than a second, it establishes that Luke wants nothing to do with the lightsaber, nothing to do with Rey
Then Rey should've hopped on the Falcon with Chewie and gone off to an actually fun movie.

Luke being a dick is not something I needed to see on film. But apparently Rian Johnson confused his evil *character's* most quoted phrase from this movie (kill the past / burn the past) with a writing credo.

The Canto Bight scenes are critical for Finn's character arc -- they're where he learns a number of important lessons: winging it doesn't work
lol WHUT

Star Wars has always been about winging it. Always.

there's more out there to fight for
He already learned that lesson in the previous movie. He only needed to re-learn it because of bad writing.

It also introduces the very interesting plot twist about war racketeers being behind everything for profit, which I hope they pay off in IX.
Oh please, Ovi. Out of all the people on the 'net I never thought you would fall for this bleeding-heart-liberal pablum. This is a cliche so old it's not even remotely interesting any more. It is not interesting in the least. It the kind of thing I would expect in a student film.

I agree it's the weakest part of the movie, but it's still important and totally not a waste of time.
It inexplicably sends two characters away in the most contrived way possible, it gives us the runaround with the hacker for no apparent reason (either the star destroyer is so hard to hack that only Mazz's friend can do it, or it's so easy that any dude in jail can do it), it advances a lame boring and trite social commentary message, it features a way drawn out chase scene complete with property destruction for no reason (you're going to tell me every single car on the street was owned by an evil war profiteer?), and it bogs down the film just as we are getting some interesting Rashomon style depictions of what actually happened between Luke and Ben. All this in a movie that destroys any semblance of character consistency *and* is 30 minutes too long, *at least*.

And the 'pick up the guy you just found' puts paid to a decided trope when that goes about as horribly wrong as it can.
I... guess? So how does that bode for part 9 when they will presumably have to 'pick up the guy(s) you just found' to rebuild the Rebellion which is down to like 20 people? 'Wait, we'd better not trust these new guys we just picked up, they could betray us like DJ.'

Also... DJ? Seriously? I mean Snoke was a dumb name but at least sort of Star Wars-y.

You seem to confuse the deliberate trope flipping as bad writing because it doesn't adhere to the tropes.
Deliberate trope flipping just because you *can*, *is* bad writing.

Psychological reinforcement. This is moments before Ren betrays Snoke, so the hamfisted double reinforcement is there for a reason
Hamfisted is never a good technique unless you want to mock a character.

Audiences today seem to need to be punched in the face to get the point.
Again, I wouldn't expect you, Ovi, to indulge in this kind of 'audiences are stupid' mentality.

your complaints are about the punches to the face to reinforce a point because they were punches lacking artistry, but you still seem to have missed the point
I didn't miss the points. I just thought they weren't worth making.

Or, it's how real people really speak when suddenly confronted with their heroes after a tragedy. Good grief, do you really want the character crying over her recently dead sister, being chased by the Order, and who just meets unexpectedly one of her heroes to have perfect diction?
People have perfect diction in movies all the time. It's an acceptable break from reality. When people do not have perfect diction, it must be for some reason.

Rose could've been humanized without bad writing.

(P.S. Yeah yeah some films deliberately have more true-to-life diction. This isn't that kind of film.)

The things you're complaining about are like the Pirate Code -- more like guidelines than rules.
When you violate the guidelines in the service of a great reveal or a great scene or a great character, that's fine. When you do it out of laziness, incompetence, or just to be a snarky jerk, that's not fine.
 

Ovinomancer

No flips for you!
Then Rey should've hopped on the Falcon with Chewie and gone off to an actually fun movie.

Luke being a dick is not something I needed to see on film. But apparently Rian Johnson confused his evil *character's* most quoted phrase from this movie (kill the past / burn the past) with a writing credo.
You not liking it doesn't make it bad writing or a bad choice, though. If it's the story you dislike, address that instead of making up things about bad writing to justify your dislike. I've no problem with you disliking it.

lol WHUT

Star Wars has always been about winging it. Always.
You're almost there....

He already learned that lesson in the previous movie. He only needed to re-learn it because of bad writing.
No, he didn't. He ran, selfishly. The only thing he cares about it Rey, and only turned around when Rey was threatened. In the beginning of this movie, he's running away again, with Rey being the only thing he cares about (he only says this a few times, so surely you didn't miss it). It's only when his ability to get to Rey is threatened by being thrown in the brig that he consents to a path that keeps him out of the brig.

Oh please, Ovi. Out of all the people on the 'net I never thought you would fall for this bleeding-heart-liberal pablum. This is a cliche so old it's not even remotely interesting any more. It is not interesting in the least. It the kind of thing I would expect in a student film.
It's very interesting because it's something not seen ever before in the Star Wars Universe. It's always been 'big bad evil empire vs plucky heroes, where beating the big bads means everything is okay!' This is actually a major departure from the usual, and that makes it not student film worthy (which is an interesting choice of criticism).

Also, you clearly pay as much attention to my posts of CM as you did to this movie. Concern about the military-industrial complex isn't a liberal/conservative breakpoint. But let's leave your interpretation of my politics, and politics in general, aside.

It inexplicably sends two characters away in the most contrived way possible, it gives us the runaround with the hacker for no apparent reason (either the star destroyer is so hard to hack that only Mazz's friend can do it, or it's so easy that any dude in jail can do it), it advances a lame boring and trite social commentary message, it features a way drawn out chase scene complete with property destruction for no reason (you're going to tell me every single car on the street was owned by an evil war profiteer?), and it bogs down the film just as we are getting some interesting Rashomon style depictions of what actually happened between Luke and Ben. All this in a movie that destroys any semblance of character consistency *and* is 30 minutes too long, *at least*.
A lot to unpack here. I've said this is the weakest part of the movie narratively, so, no I don't defend everything it does. However, the 'chance' finding of another hacker in jail is classic tropes-ville. That he doesn't work out upends that trope of the scruffy scoundrel with a heart of gold (Han Solo, anyone?). When he gives the medallion back, it's clear this is the trope their setting up, only to subvert. The 'social commentary' isn't that trite. And, yes, they established that Canto Bight is the resort for all the war profiteers, so it is set up that all of the nice things are owned by war profiteers on-screen. While I feel that's part of the weakness of this narrative, it's hard to argue that the movie didn't make that exact point.

You last is a very weird non sequitur -- where in any of that did you discuss character consistency? And, that established, what's the inconsistency?

I... guess? So how does that bode for part 9 when they will presumably have to 'pick up the guy(s) you just found' to rebuild the Rebellion which is down to like 20 people? 'Wait, we'd better not trust these new guys we just picked up, they could betray us like DJ.'

Also... DJ? Seriously? I mean Snoke was a dumb name but at least sort of Star Wars-y.
Hopefully, they'll come a bit more vetted than 'guy we met in jail.' If that's the best argument 'but this trope reversal means they can't trust anyone again because they'll all be picked up exactly the same way - strangers found in jail,' well, then, I have news -- that's silly.

And DJ isn't any more silly than any other name in Star Wars.

Deliberate trope flipping just because you *can*, *is* bad writing.
Yes, but this is not that. It's playing with some established tropes in the setting and uses those reversals to propel the story. It's not reversal for the sake of reversal.

Again, you're reading like someone with 'Writing 101' under their belt that's upset because some media doesn't follow the rules.

Hamfisted is never a good technique unless you want to mock a character.
You don't read much Shakespeare, do you?

Again, I wouldn't expect you, Ovi, to indulge in this kind of 'audiences are stupid' mentality.
Really? It's like you've never talked to me once over the last 12 years. People being stupid is a core belief of mine. People are dumb. Persons may be smart. When I talk to someone, I give them the benefit of the doubt that they may be a not-dumb person, but, on average, people are dumb.

Movies almost always have to punch their points into faces. I don't have a problem with that.

I didn't miss the points. I just thought they weren't worth making.
Huh, talk about bad writing, then. If you didn't miss the points the things you are criticizing were making, why, praytell, did you present them as making different points?

People have perfect diction in movies all the time. It's an acceptable break from reality. When people do not have perfect diction, it must be for some reason.

Rose could've been humanized without bad writing.

(P.S. Yeah yeah some films deliberately have more true-to-life diction. This isn't that kind of film.)
Incorrect you are. Limited, your vision is. Meesa think that you didn't really think-a this-a through. How many parsecs in the Kessel run?

Do I even need to step outside of Star Wars to show what a pointless argument this is? No, no, I don't.

When you violate the guidelines in the service of a great reveal or a great scene or a great character, that's fine. When you do it out of laziness, incompetence, or just to be a snarky jerk, that's not fine.
Luke being in an identity crisis is key to his character in this movie, so the lightsaber scene services that directly. Rose is unpolished and from simple stock, so not using perfect diction humanizes and sets her backstory without explaining why she's secretly a Liza clone (that's a My Fair Lady reference). DJ's betrayal certainly shocks some sense into Finn, as he realizes that just doing the minimum to get away gets people killed. Although, narratively, he was shoehorned into that badly, as DJ did rescue them and show he was somewhat trustable. Again, Canto Bight is the least narratively successful bit in the movie, no arguments, but it's not universally bad or a disaster -- it serves some very important functions to both the overall plot and the development of Rose and Finn.

So, yeah, if you missed the point behind the subversions -- that they propel the story Rian wanted to tell -- then you'll think they're pointless. But that's part of being to blind to the story told, whether that's because you missed it among your nitpicking or if you brought too much baggage into the film and it let you down by not meeting it (looking at the EU readers out there). There's a reason the critics loved this movie -- it's well made and uses some very nice techniques to subvert expectations in a way that propels the story. That's hard. The hate for this movie isn't because it's badly done, but because it's not what some fans with lots of preconceptions wanted.
 



fjw70

Adventurer
I enjoyed TLJ. I do however put it at the bottom of my SW movie rankings. Here is my trilogy ranking

OT
PT
ST

Not that that the ST is bad. There are some really good parts to them and I really enjoy the movies. They just can’t compete with the strong action/adventure of the OT and the epic feel of PT for me.

On the TLJ. I really enjoyed the Rey/Kylo/Luke story. The chase story was just okay.
 

Raith5

Adventurer
Not that that the ST is bad. There are some really good parts to them and I really enjoy the movies. They just can’t compete with the strong action/adventure of the OT and the epic feel of PT for me..

Yeah. I am struck by the contrast of the prequels and sequels. They prequels were defined by very poor acting but excellent world/universe building but the sequels (for me) where defined by great acting but a really unclear universe. I didn't like the TLJ at all but I couldnt miss the charisma of Kylo and Rey. For me though, I have a really hard time situating them in the universe, with the First Order (which seem pretty inept and comical) the resistance (which are being humiliated in the TLJ),and Canto Blight being somewhat hamfisted in its depiction. I am not sure why I should care for the resistance or the force kids even though Rey is amazing.
 

Kaodi

Hero
So I finally saw The Last Jedi today and I enjoyed it. There were things about it that were a bit disappointing. Then I came Home and started reading about how actually there are a [l]lot[/i] of things that are kinda disappointing. And, for the most part, agree those things could have been way better though maybe were not completely game-breaking. My overall feeling right now though is: wrap it up in Episode IX; proceed to never making anything that could be described as "Episode X". Like, yes, the movie was good enough watching. But it does not make me want to see more and more of the same forever in quite the same way the MCU managed to (forever still probably being a bit too strong there).

I think the biggest thing that instinctively rubbed me the wrong way while I was watching the film was the way Yoda was handled. Having a Force ghost appear and use the biggest blast of Force Lightning we have ever seen to practically vapourize a tree kind of beggars belief in why we would even need living Force wielders at all. I also kind of think having him appear hologram style to Luke is a bit on the nose. He could have been more obviously just in Luke's head.

Second, and this is not a complaint per se, but at the end I was actually expected Leia to disappear then and there right after Luke did. They were twins. They came into the world together. Having them go out of the world together would by acceptable mysterious in a way that nobody telling us anything about Snoke in a whole 'nother film kinda is not. If having her just die because he did would not be good enough, then maybe she could have been part of the final act. They already showed that she can use the Force. Maybe she could have acted as a conduit for Luke to achieve that incredible feat of Force projection across the span of half a galaxy and that the effort killed them both instead of just him.

Finally, I really think more could have gone into the Finn v Phasma fight. Finn is an important character, as important as Han Solo or maybe even moreso. He is the first one who takes up the Lightsaber against Kylo Ren, an incredible act of courage. And in TFA it is teased that he might be Force sensitive: he hears the screams when the Hosnian system is about to be vapourized. And while that might have come from people from the cantina, I do not think that is the most congruent explanation. I was really hoping that the Finn v Phasma duel would be worthy of being called one of the Top 5 Star Wars duels of all time, yet it clearly was not. In this movie Phasma says he is "just a bug in the system" . The "system" in Star Wars is first and foremost the conflict between the Dark and the Light. Ordinarily I would expect that to be picked up on to great effect in the final film, but as we just saw, TLJ seems to have trashed a lot of the setup from TFA.
 

Kaodi

Hero
I knew I forgot something important in that post above. Maybe I am alone in this opinion, but Rogue One did something amazing that did not involve tearing down anyone else: it made it seem like there was another family other than the Skywalkers whose story was immensely important to the overthrow of the Empire. Without them the Death Star annihilates the Rebellion, Force or no Force.
 

The CAnto/casino storyline is definitely the weakest part of the series. I wonder if they just forget about it, or will actually make something about it. Instead of just rebuilding a new rebellion and a new army, will they go after the profiteers?

But I am having trouble building this into a trilogy-finishing Star Wars movie.

Well, it's not my challenge to solve, it's up to Abrams and his team.
 

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