doctorbadwolf
Heretic of The Seventh Circle
In the product I'm working on, I am reworking the monk as a more globally inspired mystical warrior. The goals are to unify the ki and martial arts die into a number of focus dice, make some of it's current ki stuff at-will or even passive, upgraded by spending a focus die, and adding more focus techniques, including meditations, stances, and regimens, that each work differently from eachother and from the regular action techniques.
Thematically, this is a warrior who has brought their body, breath, soul, and mind, into alignment in order to master themselves and defy normal mortal limitations. Right now I've got the feature that grants focus dice being called Focused Breath, because the conceit is that all physical, spiritual, and even intellectual, movement begins from your breath.
Here's what it looks like so far.
I'd love to hear your thoughts, lets just keep it positive in the sense of not arguing about whether the monk should exist, the name I've chosen (i;m up for other suggestions, but i'm not going to engage in arguments about them), and keep in mind that half the levels of the class don't have features in this draft and I haven't updated the class table fully yet. This is rough work, at the moment.
design notes
The idea is to have focus techniques that are one and done, focus stances that last a minute or longer with concentration, meditations which are done between fights and last until you get knocked out or do a different one, and focus regimens which can only be done as part of a long rest or during downtime and are basically like training. If that all seems odd, cehck out the force powers, talents, techniques, and regimens, in star wars saga edition. Force Powers
The idea isn't to emulate those exactly, but the vibe is similar.
Thematically, this is a warrior who has brought their body, breath, soul, and mind, into alignment in order to master themselves and defy normal mortal limitations. Right now I've got the feature that grants focus dice being called Focused Breath, because the conceit is that all physical, spiritual, and even intellectual, movement begins from your breath.
Here's what it looks like so far.
I'd love to hear your thoughts, lets just keep it positive in the sense of not arguing about whether the monk should exist, the name I've chosen (i;m up for other suggestions, but i'm not going to engage in arguments about them), and keep in mind that half the levels of the class don't have features in this draft and I haven't updated the class table fully yet. This is rough work, at the moment.
design notes
The idea is to have focus techniques that are one and done, focus stances that last a minute or longer with concentration, meditations which are done between fights and last until you get knocked out or do a different one, and focus regimens which can only be done as part of a long rest or during downtime and are basically like training. If that all seems odd, cehck out the force powers, talents, techniques, and regimens, in star wars saga edition. Force Powers
The idea isn't to emulate those exactly, but the vibe is similar.