A finely formatted .pdf file with a decent collection of NPC traits. Adding dice rolls— even considering the author's aversion to them for the sake of this document's brevity —and removing the single use of ostentatious verbiage would make this 4 stars. There's no need to use "kohled eyes" in this document. Virtually no one is going to know what that means. Even Google wasn't immediately helpful on the subject when I just tried to look it up, because that term is so archaic. "...painted her eyes and lips..."–Reba McEntire. 'Nough said. ;)
