D&D 5E [5e] QL's Al-Qadim Game

Me and my wife are dying laughing. That was my daughter. Not sure how she managed to do a reply at 15 months but wow.

I thought that you were trying to point out that I had established contact with another character but your smartphone decided to post in another character set.... this is hilarious :) You need to save this and whip it out when she's a teenager and proudly say how she was so precocious, posting on the web at 15 months etc... I'm sure she'll be very grateful!

[MENTION=20323]Quickleaf[/MENTION] please see PM for proposal, I hope you will like it :)
 
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I haven't played 5e yet but I've been wanting to try it for a while.
I've got access to the SRD, and I have an exceptional amount of experience with all the other editions from the basic box to pathfinder, and with breaki.. er.. playtesting.. games in general. Would you be alright if I submitted a character?
 

I haven't played 5e yet but I've been wanting to try it for a while.
I've got access to the SRD, and I have an exceptional amount of experience with all the other editions from the basic box to pathfinder, and with breaki.. er.. playtesting.. games in general. Would you be alright if I submitted a character?

Hi Jemal, actually with [MENTION=6855204]tglassy[/MENTION] [MENTION=20005]Matthan[/MENTION] and [MENTION=23]Ancalagon[/MENTION] that brings the total group size to 6 which is my maximum.

If someone drops out, I can put you at the top of the wait list, if you like?
 


Hello again

I've updated my character sheet and posted it in the rogue gallery. Once Quickleaf approves my proposal, I'll add more recent background details. :)

[MENTION=20005]Matthan[/MENTION], any details you would like to add about our occasional travels together as caravan guards? I could come up with something but I don't want to step on your creative toes, so to speak.

Edit: Also, my character will drain the party treasury from the vast sum of ... 91 gold and 69 coppers. I hope Lal will be worth this investment. ;)
 
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OOC: I shifted gears from the idea of a caravan guard to serving the Sheik more directly. Let me know if this works.


Husam grew up in the shadow of a father he never knew. The story was one he knew by heart. His father, Khalid, was a loyal guard to the exalted Sheik. The Sheik leads his people with grace and wisdom, but there were those who rejected the wisdom of the Loregiver and denied their Fate. These infidels sought to use dark magic to kill the Sheik and disrupt the land. They attacked while the Sheik was among his people to learn their needs. They cowards would not face the Sheik and his guards with honor. Instead, they had managed to leash an efreet to their aid.

The Sheik was noble and brave as he ordered his soldiers to protect the people. Many guards fought, but only one saved the Sheik’s life. As the efreet swung his massive blade, the Sheik turned to shield a child from harm. Khalid stepped into the path of the blade and took a blow that would kill an ordinary man. With the last ounce of his strength, he killed the efreet and closed his eyes one final time.

The Sheik sought to honor the man who died for him. He called for his family to be brought and found his wife pregnant with Khalid’s son. He brought them into his home and promised to care for them to honor Khalid’s sacrifice. Husam was raised and trained to be like his father, a loyal guard for the Sheik.

In his fourteenth year, Husam was permitted to walk in the way of his father and serve the Sheik. He quickly began to distinguish himself among the guard. It was he who apprehended the Desert Fox and ended her campaign of theft by removing her hands. It was he who held back the stampede of giant scorpions when the faithless wizard, Al-Qadir, attacked the city. It was he who descended into the depths of the city to battle the false god of the Serpent Brethren and proved their faith heresy by dragging its carcass through the city square.

It came about in the sixth year of his service to the Sheik, that the Sheik noticed the acts of Husam and remembered the sacrifice of Khalid. He summoned Husam to his side and bestowed upon him the gifts that his father would have received had he survived the assault. First, he was given armor, Riah’alssahra, made from the scales of a fiery salamander that would let Husam walk through the desert heat with no fear. The second gift was Bariq, a javelin that crackled with the rage of a lightning storm. The next gift was a cloak, Khaymaljism, that strengthened the body while protecting it. The final gift was Ifritlissan, the very flaming sword that had struck down his father.

Humbled by the honor bestowed upon him, Husam bowed to his Sheikh yet was told to rise as the Sheikh had need of his talents. Caravans had been found slaughtered in the desert. The protection and wisdom of the Sheikh was being insulted by these acts. Husam was to act as the sword of the Sheikh and silence those who would deny the laws of the Loregiver by committing these acts.

OOC: The initial story of Khalid is written as the Sultan had it told to Husam. It paints him in a good light. That may not have been how it actually happened. I’ll leave that to the DM’s pleasure. Also, the attackers may have well been part of the Brotherhood of the True Flame. I don’t know much about them, but that sounds like a group that would work for or with an Efreet (who may not have been enslaved at all, that could be a bit of political storytelling).

The Desert Fox, Al-Qadir (and his giant scorpion army), and the Serpent Brethren are all designed to give the DM something to use for plots if needed.

Would that work?

[MENTION=23]Ancalagon[/MENTION] : I’m not sure how Lal is being reworked, but if he still has the sense of truth seeking religious type then maybe he was around during the Serpent Brethren incident. My thought was that it was some kind of cult that sprang up around some kind of intelligent snake monster and began to gather followers. The Sheikh would not allow the heresy to stand and sent his guard to investigate. Perhaps we ended up working together to take out the cult?
 
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Hello

[MENTION=20005]Matthan[/MENTION], so if I gather correctly, you are essentially one of the Sheikh's champions now? Ok, I think we can riff each other and create something here...

Here is what I propose:

The scorpion army of Al-Qadir sounds like a good scenario for the two PCs to initially meet. This situation sounds less like the work of a tactical genius and more like one of a madman (the high int, *looow* wisdom type). He suddenly attacks the city with his scorpion horde, hoping to break through the gate, rush the palace, murder the rulers and take over kinda deal. Unfortunately for him, both Husam and Lal happened to be near the gate and together they rallied the defenders and broke the attack. This would have resulted, at the very least, in both warriors having a very healthy respect for each other. Of course Lal would let Husam get most of the credit.

A year or two later, Lal could have been passing through the city, learn about the Serpent Brethren, curiously look into the group only to be very alarmed by what he found. (Lal is *not* a natural spy, but cults are rigth up his alley). Husam would have been a natural person for Lal to contact about this situation. Husam could then have asked for Lal's assistance in dealing with the cultists.

Does this work with you?

Lastly, Lal isn't being reworked per se, but as QuickLeaf pointed out, he wasn't very rooted in the setting, which is a very fair comment (it's a bit harder to do when you are a wanderer and a commoner). I've sent him a sort of "records of travel", as well as a way to introduce him to the party (but I want his OK with him since it may not fit with his vision of the game). I think these prior contacts with Husam will help with this rooting process.



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[MENTION=23]Ancalagon[/MENTION], those could work. I wanted Hussam tied to the Sheik to ease him into joining the group. It also made more sense to me to provide some narrative reasons for the magical items and high level. A regular caravan guard doesn't strike me as elite enough to match the level/items. A legacy agent who has worked up the ranks and earned his stripes being trusted to independently tackle problems solves some of that for me.

My approach is to keep the details vague at this point and just riff as we play. We fought together during Al-Qadir's assault (and I agree, I doubt it was well planned out. More of a Cobra from G.I.Joe type plan.) As for how the details work out, I would like to just go with the "yes, and..." approach. As it comes up, we make it up and flesh it out.

The only important bits to me are what I spelled out (The Desert Fox was a woman and Hussam chopped her hands off, he held the line against the giant scorpions [which is exactly what a Guardian is built for], and he dragged the carcass of false snake god through the town square). Other details are open for riffing or DM chicanery (was the Desert Fox a beautiful woman that Hussam was in love with, but chose his honor/position over her? Maybe? It depends if it ever comes up, but you know what, now that I think of it, that's exactly what happened.)

I'll wait and see if [MENTION=20323]Quickleaf[/MENTION] has any notes before we get to far ahead of ourselves though.

*edit* Also, for timeline, Hussam is active in the city for six years so there's plenty of time for shenanigans.
 

[MENTION=20005]Matthan[/MENTION] Hussam ibn-Khalid sounds like a striking figure, one who would have a mixed relationship with Sheikh Ali of Tajar as (1) Hussam's father saved the Sheikh's life, and (2) Hussam reminds the Sheikh of his wife's infidelity.

So perhaps the reason the Sheikh tasks his elite guardsman – who normally would be kept close to the palace – to go forth and investigate the raiders has to do with questions of inheritance? Maybe the growing "hero worship" around Hussam makes Sheikh Ali uncomfortable, especially in light of the fact that the Sheikh's son Afzal is a pompous fool. Maybe the Sheikh noticed himself admiring Hussam more than his own flesh and blood and that worried him.

Also one question on the timeline...

It sounds like everything with your PC and his father occurred during Sheikh Ali's reign, right? Nothing to do with the wicked Sultan who ruled some 30 years earlier and was overthrown by Sheikh Ali's father Kori al-Zafiri?
 

[MENTION=20323]Quickleaf[/MENTION]:

I have no reference material to work off of so I just made a lot of stuff up. I couldn't even easily find the Sheikh's name to research him (shame). All that is to say that I'm not familiar with the character to build off of. I'm not sure why he would remind the sheikh of his wife's infidelity. Did she sleep with a guard or a half-orc? That seems like an interesting angle, but I just don't know enough.

***Wait! I just went back and realized where the misunderstanding happened. The part, "The Sheik sought to honor the man who died for him. He called for his family to be brought and found his wife pregnant with Khalid’s son. He brought them into his home and promised to care for them to honor Khalid’s sacrifice. Husam was raised and trained to be like his father, a loyal guard for the Sheikh." The "his wife" is ambiguous. I can edit the sentence to read, “He called for Khalid’s family to be brought to his court and found his widow pregnant with their first child.” I meant it to be Khalid's wife was pregnant with his unborn son, not the sheikh's wife.

I drew from some Old Testament stories for inspiration. The idea of the ruler taking them in was based off of King David taking in the lame son of Jonathan, Mephibosheth.

I just built a guy to have a connection to the sheikh, explain the magical items/level, and explain why he would be sent away. The acts that he previously did were what I imagined a character doing in a city on his way to 11th level.

Timeline wise: Khalid died 20 years ago. If the present sheikh wasn't reigning, it just takes a slight edit. The idea was to riff off something that happens in the Biblical book of Esther. The King of Persia can't sleep and asks to be read the record of his rule. He is reminded of a heroic act by Mordecai and realizes that he was never rewarded.

I wasn't aware of the prior ruler (I'm not easily finding Al-Qadim info online), but it wouldn't be a stretch to say that Khalid served in the campaign to overthrow him.
 

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