A Warping of the Blood - Full

[Rystil Arden]

Pharod is 134 years old (young, but settled), with an 18 in wisdom. He's too much into the guardian role to be persuaded by even a very good friend. Balthazar is also only twenty years of age, and thus their relationship, although perhaps lifelong in the spryte's eyes, is very recent for the giant. I don't see him persuaded.

Don't worry however; I'm interested in creating a friendship between Balthazar ((you don't play wc3, do you?)) and Pharod.



This is somewhat more what I'm looking forward. Right now two ideas are forming in my mind.

1) The darkbond did something disastrous to Pharod's forest. Ra Pharod must go after him to ensure that the forest survives.

2) The darkbond somehow tarnished Pharod's reputation, and Pharod is relieved of his position by an elder. He must somehow regain his reputation.

As I'm writing this, a third possibility is occuring to me that combines the two..

OK, cool. He's a really freaky guy who I think gets the vision of this game across. Here's the description so you can put it in your history:

...encountered a hideous cloaked figure. It might have once been an azure-haired loresong faen, but it had become distorted in appearance as if somehow evolved into a new form. What was worse, where his right arm should be there was the long and sinuous neck of a Slassan, tipped by the malicious head, its eyes glowing bright red as the cloaked figure hurled a curse at Vayj, holding a large blackened emerald in its left hand out of which poured a beam of ebony darkness.

 

[Rystil Arden]

Balthazar is also only twenty years of age, and thus their relationship, although perhaps lifelong in the spryte's eyes, is very recent for the giant. I don't see him persuaded.

Are you sure Ender? 20 is still a young child for a faen (50 is like 17 for us humans). Then again, Balthazar does seem to be interesting and different from other faen.

 

[ender_wiggin]

It's what the character sheet said in the Rogue's Gallery.

 

[Isida Kep'Tukari]

Rillian, my bad. I meant Rystil. Rystil, please put your character in the correct format.

 

[ender_wiggin]

Here's what I've got:

After more than a decade of protecting the forest from all forms of Darkness, Ra Pharod finds his ward assaulted by a mysterious force -- perhaps more powerful than he had ever encountered before. Gathering what natural allies he has, he attempts to rid the the land of the corrupting negative energy, and finds himself in a fight against a mysterious cloaked figure, which ends in disaster: Pharod, rather than fighting to the end, flees after suffering terrible wounds to save his own life. His capitulation marks the beginning of a period of horrid devastation within the forest. Now that the darkbond has established a foothold in Ra Pharod's cherished land, he must find a way to attone for his cowardness and repair what damage is done to the environment.

Isida: I'll give you what you wanted for equipment tomorrow.

 

[Rystil Arden]

Rillian, my bad. I meant Rystil. Rystil, please put your character in the correct format.

Oops, what was wrong? I put the gods at the end in case that was it, and fixed a few minor cosmetic errors in the format, but if there's something big, then I'm missing it stupidly (just like I missed the fact that I had given myself only 3 HD)

 

[Isida Kep'Tukari]

Rystil, I need the bolding, italics, and colors as per my format.

 

[Rystil Arden]

Rystil, I need the bolding, italics, and colors as per my format.

Ohhhhh, I didn't know that that was an issue. Consider it done!

 

[Isida Kep'Tukari]

Makes it easier for me to read, breaks up the text more as it were. Besides, I'm a crochety ol' DM running 11 games and I can enforce my own rules with an iron mouse click! Shazam!

 

[Rystil Arden]

Makes it easier for me to read, breaks up the text more as it were. Besides, I'm a crochety ol' DM running 11 games and I can enforce my own rules with an iron mouse click! Shazam!

Oh, I don't consider it even slightly unreasonable. I just had no idea that was an issue, especially since I based Vayj partially on the descriptions in HttBT, which hadn't had the italics and bold