Yeah, I don't like it, aesthetically.
Me not liking it doesn't mean it is "bad" or "wrong". It does even necessarily mean I might not like it in practice. But that wall of text doesn't inspire me.
What wall of text? That’s 5 different active abilities - each is pretty concise, one to two sentences for an entire thing. You’ll have at most 5 of those in your loadout at any time. At level 1, you start with two chosen from the 6 your two class domains offer (plus your subclass - like most current games a L1 DH character is equiv to a L3 5e one roughly).
Core stuff like “attack with weapon” or “do something interesting / cool” is covered under attacks / Action rolls.