Adult: GUCK development forum III

[VVrayven]

Hmm, I'm considering it. You had plenty of time to make this spell list, since these spells have been over on the Online Guide's spell section for a while now.

Hey, cut a poor girl some slack. I had other stuff to do too. And wait till you see the higher level ones. <giggle>

Thanks for the great suggestions Alzrius, I'm considering most of them and updating them. I'll add in yours spells to my DB and Spell List sections.

Loren Pechtel: PIG needs some work. I'll edit it and see what works. Good ideas though.

Just one quick question, how does the offical text for adding adept list list look, Just Adept 0? Okay, now please continue with the pregnacy disucussion before DbS really thinks I'm being bad and trying to rerail the agenda.

 

[Death By Surfeit]

Thanks for the spells, VVrayven and Alzrius, I'll look over them presently. Try not to infight too much - if we tackle each spell level as a group, proposing a set of our own or those already posted when they come to us, the yask will be much easier.

Oh, and why you'd want to be a Mistress, Alzrius, I can only speculate. There are plenty of titles to go around - Master of Spells would be more fitting, I guess. Bags on Grand Vizier of spells!

We must, however, bear in mind that however fun it is to come up with reams of variously useful and humourous spells, we should be conservative regarding those we put in and the classes with access to them - we don't want to double any spell lists! I would recommend keeping the 'functional' spells that are good only for sexual actions to a small proportion, encouraging those that also have a non-sexual (inc. combat) application and those that are quietly witty. However, I doubt we have space for purely 'gag' spells.

Right, I'll drop my sense of humour and get down to the nitty-gritty.

*dons critic glasses*

Spells from the Mistress:
Arousal: Good, functional spell. I would propose 'arousing hands' (below) as a possible alternative.
Contraception: I still hold to the 'barren land' version. Bah, humbug. Add adept, remove sor/wiz.
Comeliness: Nice idea; useful, and well balanced. You may want to add a Will save to realise that the augmentation is magical (negate bonuses). Drop cleric.
Delay Orgasm: Useful, but a little flavourless.
Detect Disease: Good, useful and balanced. Keep! Possibly a 1st level spell - what do the rest of you think?
Detect Pregnancy: May give too much detail for a 0th-level; I would allow a Heal check in addition to Wisdom. I concur with Alzrius's comments. Add adept.
Detect Romantic Interest: Too subjective (hidden love?), and too powerful in some campaigns for 0th level. What happens if there are multiple interests?
Embarrassing Wilting: Remove duration, state that he goes into Recovery instead. Add adept.
Pillow Talk: A bit of a gag spell? What application would it have?
Prevent Nausea: Quite good, but possibly of too much of a niche application. Clerics would be unlikely to prepare it (due to short duration).
Repulsion: Replace title with 'unsightliness', 'repulsiveness' or 'ugliness' add clause to state it dispels comeliness. Again, drop cleric.
Sex Toy: Consider changing title. Replace 'total bonus of +4' with 'Charisma of 14 (+2 bonus)' and 'no skills'. Remove 'unable to perform...'. Alzrius's comments are valid here. Consider making it a first level spell, with a 'Charisma bonus equal to caster level (maximum +5)' but no skills, feats, etc. Should not have the ability to make conversation (but can groan) or do anything but sexual activities. You could call it a fragment of the caster's libido given form.
Slap: Good, and likely to be popular. Keep!
Tweak: Remove necessity of seeing anatomy - implies it could only be used when target is indecently exposed. Add clause of 'blushing likely'. Concentration check would be DC 10 + spell level.
Voyeur's Sight: Maybe too niche? Possibly add that it cannot pierce illusions, but offers a +10 enhancement bonus to Spot checks made to realise a person is Disguised.
Wet Dream: A bit pointless. I'd either give it a game effect and add spell levels, or drop.

Spells from Loren:
Greater sex toy: Very iffy. The clause of failing to do any non-sexual checks is an awkward way of doing things, and the spell is a obtuse way of achieving the effect. We should cap prowess bonuses to level, +5 per spell level (like with healing spells).
Pig: Hmmm.... okay, but PCs would be irritated if they could be polymorphed by touchy (not intended) 3rd-level spellcasters. Reverse: 'Prig'.

Spells from the Master:
Byrning loins: Unsure when it would be used. Neat name, though.
Flavourful: Very cantrip-y. Keep! Remove cleric.
Premature orgasm: I'd say it were too powerful. Detecting and dispelling isn't too easy, and the opportunity to automatically screw up a character's next sexual act lies above 1st level. Jump up the spell level, and make it permanent (D), requiring a Fort save every time the character becomes Aroused to avoid premature orgasm. Add adept.
Raging Lust: Interesting. Good idea, but the effect and spell text could do with reworking.
Unattainable orgasm: Perhaps make it mirror premature orgasm, and state that they dispel each other.

*removes glasses, rubs nose*

That pretty much sums it up. Oh, and Xeriar, nymphs do not embody men's desire, but rather femininity. Just as women may not like satyrs because they are 'too' masculine, so might a nymph be beyond some men's tastes. Yes, maenads do exist in some literature, but there is no mention of them in D&D and there is no need to add them. Besides, it would mean working out something else for how nymphs breed.

Cheers,

DbS

 

[Alzrius]

Thanks for the spells, VVrayven and Alzrius, I'll look over them presently. Try not to infight too much - if we tackle each spell level as a group, proposing a set of our own or those already posted when they come to us, the yask will be much easier.

I promise nothing (j/k). Seriously though, we wouldn't want to yackle hard yasks alone.

Oh, and why you'd want to be a Mistress, Alzrius, I can only speculate. There are plenty of titles to go around - Master of Spells would be more fitting, I guess. Bags on Grand Vizier of spells!

The presumption was that the title changes according to the gender of whoever holds it. I don't mind the current title you've affixed me with though, so it's all good.

Arousal: Good, functional spell. I would propose 'arousing hands' (below) as a possible alternative.

I'm not sure what you're pointing us towards with the "(below)" notation there.

Detect Disease: Good, useful and balanced. Keep! Possibly a 1st level spell - what do the rest of you think?

I agree with bumping it up a level due to the fact that it tells you exactly what type of disease it is with an Int check. I also propose that the whole "Int check" part be removed, making only a Heal check; someone who had never studied diseases before shouldn't be able to adequately make a check to determine the type of disease.

Detect Pregnancy: May give too much detail for a 0th-level; I would allow a Heal check in addition to Wisdom. I concur with Alzrius's comments. Add adept.

I concur that for a "mere" detection spell, this one is too forthcoming at its level. Learning the date of birth, stage of pregnancy, and even the child's gender is a bit too much. Make it 1st level. I'm unsure about making the Wis check a Heal check though...you don't need to be too trained in midwifery to understand how long ago the child was conceived, or what sex it is, for example.

Detect Romantic Interest: Too subjective (hidden love?), and too powerful in some campaigns for 0th level. What happens if there are multiple interests?

Presumably it would detect all the interests a target had. I concur with your comments here though.

Embarrassing Wilting: Remove duration, state that he goes into Recovery instead. Add adept.

I disagree here. Removing the duration and saying he goes into recovery simply means that he's going to have a harder time getting it up...a male can become erect when in Recovery, its just harder. That's not the point of this spell; it's supposed to be that no matter what his arousal state is, he remains flaccid. Keep the duration.

Prevent Nausea: Quite good, but possibly of too much of a niche application. Clerics would be unlikely to prepare it (due to short duration).

The obvious application here is that this spell is meant to be a guard against morning sickness in pregnant females. For what its worth, "Nauseated" is a status condition that D&D characters can suffer from...

Experiencing stomach distress. Nauseated creatures are unable to attack, cast spells, concentrate on spells, or do anything else requiring attention. The only action such a character can take is a single move (or move-equivalent action) per turn.

...that said, I recommend changing the duration to 1 hour/level. Since the spell not only cures current nausea, but assures the target will not suffer from it in the future, the name might better be "Protection From Nausea".

Sex Toy: Consider changing title. Replace 'total bonus of +4' with 'Charisma of 14 (+2 bonus)' and 'no skills'. Remove 'unable to perform...'. Alzrius's comments are valid here. Consider making it a first level spell, with a 'Charisma bonus equal to caster level (maximum +5)' but no skills, feats, etc. Should not have the ability to make conversation (but can groan) or do anything but sexual activities. You could call it a fragment of the caster's libido given form.

I recommend re-naming it "Real Doll", an in-gag based on the web-company that produces the sex-dolls of the same name. The rest of the critique here is good, though I think that "caster's Cha bonus up to +5" is better than a flat Cha of 14 for the construct.

Tweak: Remove necessity of seeing anatomy - implies it could only be used when target is indecently exposed. Add clause of 'blushing likely'. Concentration check would be DC 10 + spell level.

Trust me about the Concentration check. Check out the Skills section of the SRD. Tweak is a non-damaging spell, which means the DC for the Concentration check is calculated differently from damaging spells such as Fireball.

Voyeur's Sight: Maybe too niche? Possibly add that it cannot pierce illusions, but offers a +10 enhancement bonus to Spot checks made to realise a person is Disguised.

It's less niche than Pillow Talk, since its almost stereotypical that some horny wizard-wannabe learns a spell to look at women naked. The rationale for the bonus to realize someone is disguised is good, but +10 is much to high for a cantrip, IMHO.

Wet Dream: A bit pointless. I'd either give it a game effect and add spell levels, or drop.

Perhaps something along the lines of the dream being so intense that for the next day, any Prowess check made to bring the target creature to Aroused has a +2 bonus?

Byrning loins: Unsure when it would be used. Neat name, though.

The rationale behind it's use is that, at this level of magic, its as close as a caster can come to magically interrupting the sexual endeavors of someone he doesn't like. Hence why its considered a curse. While that may seem somewhat even less useful than, say, Embarrassing Wilting, this one also works on females.

Premature orgasm: I'd say it were too powerful. Detecting and dispelling isn't too easy, and the opportunity to automatically screw up a character's next sexual act lies above 1st level. Jump up the spell level, and make it permanent (D), requiring a Fort save every time the character becomes Aroused to avoid premature orgasm. Add adept.

The manner in which I'd envisioned the "detect and dispel" part is that this is a spell-effect that a character has on them that has not yet activated, a la a Contingency.

I can see this one being bumped up to having a permanent duration though...my initial vision for this one was that having it only "go off" once would be enough to ruin the sexual encounter (assuming it was a young man that this was cast on), but having it be permanent might be better. If so, it might want to also be considered a curse.

Raging Lust: Interesting. Good idea, but the effect and spell text could do with reworking.

"Raging Desire". I realized about halfway through writing the description that I hadn't thought this one out enough. The gist of what I wanted was that this spell causes sexual arousal in a creature when they're in a fight, and thus suffers the penalties of that (since the GUCK has that acting as a penalty to any non-sexual rolls). The part about the DSM bonus was when I realized the flip-side...it would make creatures associate battle with sex, but that would also mean they associate sex with battle. I'll try and rework this one.

Unattainable orgasm: Perhaps make it mirror premature orgasm, and state that they dispel each other.

That would probably work...though I find it mildly odd/amusing that both of these are negative effects, but when casting both on some poor target, it leaves him better off than if just one had been cast on him.

Originally posted by VVrayven
Just one quick question, how does the offical text for adding adept list list look, Just Adept 0?

I'm relatively confident (but not 100% certain) that when listing the Adept NPC class in a spell's "Level" line, you abbreviate it to "Adp". It's always three letters, and that seems to fit what I recall.

 

[Liquid Snake]

Detect romantic interest is not a Divination spell, it's an Enchantment (Compulsion) [Mind-Affecting, Language-Dependent] spell. The spell doesn't reveal the information, the subject does compelled by the spell. Consequentially, the name should be changed, because detect spells are always divinations.

I dunno...I've seen other detect disease spells (BoEM III) and they're all cantrips, not 1st level spells.

I definitely think Sorcerers and Wizards should get Contraception. Don't spoil the fun for them.

EDIT: Spelling

 

[Loren Pechtel]

Loren Pechtel: PIG needs some work. I'll edit it and see what works. Good ideas though.

Yeah--I've been batting it around for a while and never really been happy with it.

The idea is if the guy is going to act like a pig--make him one.

 

[Loren Pechtel]

Spells from Loren:
Greater sex toy: Very iffy. The clause of failing to do any non-sexual checks is an awkward way of doing things, and the spell is a obtuse way of achieving the effect. We should cap prowess bonuses to level, +5 per spell level (like with healing spells).

I was trying to restrict it so it only is useful for sexual purposes. See the gripe about the sex toy spell--it's got plenty of non-sexual uses that are too powerful for a level 0. The idea is to get a specific creature instead of just a generic one, and a bit better than the base spell. It should be a level above Sex Toy.

Pig: Hmmm.... okay, but PCs would be irritated if they could be polymorphed by touchy (not intended) 3rd-level spellcasters. Reverse: 'Prig'.

No--you can only cast it if you are being touched inappropriately--it affects the person touching you. Grope a third level spellcaster and you might find yourself going oink. I figure female spellcasters are going to come up with something effective to go with such pests.

 

[Alzrius]

Detect romantic interest is not a Divination spell, it's an Enchantment (Compulsion) [Mind-Affecting, Language-Dependent] spell. The spell doesn't reveal the information, the subject does compelled by the spell. Consequentially, the name should be changed, because detect spells are always divinations.

Incorrect. Nothing in the spell description actually says that it forces the target creature to verbally tell you whom their romantic interest is. The way I understood it, the spell detects their romantic interest, and the identity of the subject; it peers into the creature's mind. The target creature gains a Will save to avoid having the information read from their mind, not to avoid speaking. It is definately a Divination spell.

I dunno...I've seen other detect disease spells (BoEM III) and they're all cantrips, not 1st level spells.

Did they allow you do identify exactly what the disease was? That was my big sticking point.

I definitely think Sorcerers and Wizards should get Contraception. Don't spoil the fun for them.

This one I sort of agree with.

 

[Death By Surfeit]

Those who can, trip.

Looking back on everyone’s comments, I thought I’d compile a list of the cantrips I feel warrant inclusion. Some of the spells (such as detect disease and pregnancy) do not appear because I consider them in their current incarnations to be of higher level. Others (such as divine romantic interest or wet dream) are absent because I think they need revising. Some come from the blue, and others have been distorted beyond all recognition. Regardless of how mutilated your contributions have become, I thank each of you for contributing your ideas to the hotpot.

I won’t offer detailed justification for the spells below, but I feel that cantrips should be ‘useful, in a kind of useless way’. People should want them around, but won’t rely on them or use them for big impact – they basically allow spellcasters some room to show off. I have prioritised those spells that fit with 3e mechanics, and those that are mildly humorous, if only for a pun’d name.

Have a look through and voice your suggestions and concerns.

Oh, and some descriptors:
[Arousal] – Induces physical Arousal. Creatures that cannot be Aroused (Constructs, Elementals, Oozes, Plants, Undead, Vermin, some Aberrations and Outsiders) are immune to [Arousal] effects.
[Libido-Affecting] – Modifies a subject’s sexual alignment or kinks, else induces mental Horniness. A spell with the [Libido-Affecting] descriptor is considered to also be [Mind-Affecting]. Creatures immune to mind-influencing effects and those that do not have a sexual alignment are immune to [Libido-Affecting] effects.

0th LEVEL SPELLS (CANTRIPS/ORISONS)
Arousing Hands
Comeliness
Disrupt Conception
Flavour
Frigid Touch
Mage Backhand
Mage Fingers
Repulsiveness

Arousing Hands
Transmutation [Arousal]
Brd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes

Your hands are enveloped in crackling motes of energy, inducing arousal with a touch. With a successful melee touch attack, the target of the spell becomes Aroused unless they pass a Fortitude save; this effect dissipates naturally.
Arousing hands counters and dispels frigid touch.

Comeliness
Illusion (Glamer)
Brd 0, Drd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One creature
Duration: 10 minutes/level
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless) or Will disbelief (see text)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless) or No (see text)

You soften or enhance the subject’s features, giving them a +1 enhancement bonus to Bluff, Diplomacy, Perform and Prowess checks. Creatures that touch the subject receive a Will save to realise the beauty is illusory – if they succeed, the enhancement bonus to interaction with that creature is negated.
Comeliness counters and dispels repulsiveness.
Material Component: A bit of powdered rouge.

By popular demand... (bah)
Disrupt Conception
Necromancy
Adp 0, Brd 0, Clr 0, Drd 0 (although they should all be 1, really)
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 full round
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: 1 hour/level
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes

You hamper the subject’s capacity to create life. The DCs of any conception rolls made by the subject are increased by 1 per level, up to a maximum of five. This spell has no effect on creatures that breed asexually (such as Varguoilles).

Flavour
Transmutation
Brd 0, Drd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: 1 minute/level
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates (harmless)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless)
The subject’s bodily fluids gain a sweet smell and candylike flavour. Anyone using an Oral proficiency on the character receives a +1 circumstance bonus on their Prowess checks.
Arcane Material Component: A small beeswax candle or a daub of honey.

Frigid Touch
Necromancy
Level: Clr 0, Drd 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
Your hands exude a dull grey nimbus, snuffing out arousal with a touch. With a successful melee touch attack, the target of the spell loses all physical arousal unless they pass a Fortitude save; they may become Aroused again normally.
Frigid touch counters and dispels arousing hands.

Mage Backhand
Evocation [Force]
Level: Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Close
Target: One creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: None
Spell Resistance: Yes
With a word, your target receives a vicious backhand slap of magical energy. You inflict one point of subdual damage, forcing spellcasters to make a Concentration check (DC 11 + spell level) to successfully cast a spell, and leave a stinging red mark.

Mage Fingers
Evocation [Force]
Level: Brd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Close
Effect: An invisible magical hand
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: 1 round
Spell Resistance: Yes
An invisible replica of your hand appears at a point you designate within the spell’s range. The hand of force mirrors your own actions, allowing you to exert pressure as you desire provided it does not exceed 1lb. The hand is too frail to use tools effectively.
You may use this effect to playfully tweak, goose or pinch a part of a subject’s anatomy; if the subject is a spellcaster, for the duration of this spell they must succeed at a Concentration check (DC 10 + spell level) to cast a spell.

Repulsiveness
Illusion (Glamer)
Brd 0, Drd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One creature
Duration: 10 minutes/level
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless) or Will disbelief (see text)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless) or No (see text)

You blight the subject’s skin and bloat their features, giving them a -1 enhancement penalty to Bluff, Diplomacy, Perform and Prowess checks. Creatures that touch the subject receive a Will save to realise the effect is illusory – if they succeed, the enhancement penalty to interaction with that creature is removed.
Repulsiveness counters and dispels comeliness.
Material Component: A bit of lard.

Cheers,

DbS

 

[VVrayven]

Again DbS, you astound me with your grace and ability to merge ideas together. I'll pick up all the revisions and add yours in to the running spells document. I'll tidy it all up and post the revised list of 0th level as soon as disscussion has ended, which it almost has. I'll post the 1st level list and my additions to it this week and we can begin the heckling all over again, unless of course you would like to pause and finished pregnacy first. Just let me know. The compiled list will be done pretty soon.

::hugs to all::

 

[Alzrius]

Re: Those who can, trip.

Looking back on everyone’s comments, I thought I’d compile a list of the cantrips I feel warrant inclusion.

Only eight out of eighteen proposed. Here's hoping most of those others make it!

Oh, and some descriptors:
[Arousal] – Induces physical Arousal. Creatures that cannot be Aroused (Constructs, Elementals, Oozes, Plants, Undead, Vermin, some Aberrations and Outsiders) are immune to [Arousal] effects.
[Libido-Affecting] – Modifies a subject’s sexual alignment or kinks, else induces mental Horniness. A spell with the [Libido-Affecting] descriptor is considered to also be [Mind-Affecting]. Creatures immune to mind-influencing effects and those that do not have a sexual alignment are immune to [Libido-Affecting] effects.

Maybe its just me, but I don't see a strong need for these descriptors at all. A spell that induces physical arousal isn't something I think needs its own descriptor, since we lay out elsewhere the levels of physical arousal and what they entail. If the spell does cause physical arousal, there really won't be any way to not say that in the description anyway. I could maybe see this descriptor, but it still seems kinda iffy to me.

The second one, Libido-Affecting, I really think is superfluous. There is no reason for this to not be just the Mind-Affecting descriptor. The only instance where this would apply where Mind-Affecting wouldn't is where a creature has a mind but no sexual alignment...something that hasn't been fleshed out at all yet.

Arousing Hands
Transmutation [Arousal]
Brd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes

Your hands are enveloped in crackling motes of energy, inducing arousal with a touch. With a successful melee touch attack, the target of the spell becomes Aroused unless they pass a Fortitude save; this effect dissipates naturally.
Arousing hands counters and dispels frigid touch.

"Frigid Touch" should have the first letter of each word capitalized (yeah I'm nitpicking...someone has to do it).

Comeliness
Illusion (Glamer)
Brd 0, Drd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One creature
Duration: 10 minutes/level
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless) or Will disbelief (see text)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless) or No (see text)

You soften or enhance the subject’s features, giving them a +1 enhancement bonus to Bluff, Diplomacy, Perform and Prowess checks. Creatures that touch the subject receive a Will save to realise the beauty is illusory – if they succeed, the enhancement bonus to interaction with that creature is negated.
Comeliness counters and dispels repulsiveness.
Material Component: A bit of powdered rouge.

Spell name capitalization again.

Flavour

Ah, you reveal a British heritage, eh DbS? As far as I know, there is no "u" in "flavor" the way most people spell it.

Frigid Touch
Necromancy
Level: Clr 0, Drd 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One living creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: Fortitude negates
Spell Resistance: Yes
Your hands exude a dull grey nimbus, snuffing out arousal with a touch. With a successful melee touch attack, the target of the spell loses all physical arousal unless they pass a Fortitude save; they may become Aroused again normally.
Frigid touch counters and dispels arousing hands.

Capitalization of spell names again.

Mage Backhand
Evocation [Force]
Level: Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Close
Target: One creature
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: None
Spell Resistance: Yes
With a word, your target receives a vicious backhand slap of magical energy. You inflict one point of subdual damage, forcing spellcasters to make a Concentration check (DC 11 + spell level) to successfully cast a spell, and leave a stinging red mark.

I'm going to be honest and say I liked the name "Slap" better, though "Mage Slap" would be fine (though it sounds like a class-specific variant of the bitch slap). Simply put, slapping is more stereotypical; people who make sexual advances that get rejected tend to get slapped, not backhanded.

Mage Fingers
Evocation [Force]
Level: Brd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Close
Effect: An invisible magical hand
Duration: Instantaneous
Saving Throw: 1 round
Spell Resistance: Yes
An invisible replica of your hand appears at a point you designate within the spell’s range. The hand of force mirrors your own actions, allowing you to exert pressure as you desire provided it does not exceed 1lb. The hand is too frail to use tools effectively.
You may use this effect to playfully tweak, goose or pinch a part of a subject’s anatomy; if the subject is a spellcaster, for the duration of this spell they must succeed at a Concentration check (DC 10 + spell level) to cast a spell.

I wonder if "Magic Fingers" wouldn't be a better name...

Repulsiveness
Illusion (Glamer)
Brd 0, Drd 0, Sor/Wiz 0
Components: V, S, M
Casting Time: 1 action
Range: Touch
Target: One creature
Duration: 10 minutes/level
Saving Throw: Will negates (harmless) or Will disbelief (see text)
Spell Resistance: Yes (harmless) or No (see text)

You blight the subject’s skin and bloat their features, giving them a -1 enhancement penalty to Bluff, Diplomacy, Perform and Prowess checks. Creatures that touch the subject receive a Will save to realise the effect is illusory – if they succeed, the enhancement penalty to interaction with that creature is removed.
Repulsiveness counters and dispels comeliness.
Material Component: A bit of lard.

Spell name capitalization again.

All in all though, I think this looks pretty nice.