Against the Shadows VII - A Faded Glory Story Hour (Re-Updated - 5/17)

What Do You Like Best About This Story Hour?

  • The Campaign World

    Votes: 6 11.8%
  • The Characters

    Votes: 2 3.9%
  • The Multitude of Plot Lines

    Votes: 6 11.8%
  • The Narrative/Action

    Votes: 4 7.8%
  • The Whole Package!

    Votes: 27 52.9%
  • Nothing! It Sucks!

    Votes: 6 11.8%

Just got caught up through the last 5-6 updates (just finished Book V of TttWW so I have time to catch up on my favorite SHs). Reading the bulk of the dwarven temple sessions in one sitting, I can say that the pacing and building tension/action was excellent. Your players seem to give you excellent fodder for cliffhangers and dramatic moments in the story.

Of course, I HAD to come in right in the middle of another dramatic cliffhanger!

Cheers,
LB
 

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Thanks, LB!

Lazybones said:
Just got caught up through the last 5-6 updates (just finished Book V of TttWW so I have time to catch up on my favorite SHs). Reading the bulk of the dwarven temple sessions in one sitting, I can say that the pacing and building tension/action was excellent. Your players seem to give you excellent fodder for cliffhangers and dramatic moments in the story.

Of course, I HAD to come in right in the middle of another dramatic cliffhanger!

Cheers,
LB

LB -

High praise indeed from the "King of the Cliffhangers";)!

I am in the process of editing my SH for posting in the "Hosted" section...what a monumental task! Even minus the background info, the current file weighs in at a hefty 115,000 words (about 880 kb)! I have written a dang novel!

I hope to have the editing completed this week, then I may add some art, convert it to .pdf and .zip it to Morrus!

~ Old One
 

Thanks, Broc!

Broccli_Head said:
Finally caught up! Can't wait until the next post to learn more about the dwarven mystery and about what happens to Lew and Sextus!

Broc -

Thanks for stopping by...

The update is coming (see the post above)! I may have to put my compiled SH on hold until after the next update...what do you think;)?

~ Old One
 

Pure Sweetness

Hey everyone,

I haven't fallen off the edge of the Earth, I'm just waaayyy too busy due to RL issues to make substantive comments.

Old One, I'm still reading and groovin', however, and always will be.
 
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Re: Pure Sweetness

Pillars of Hercules said:
Hey everyone,

I haven't fallen off the edge of the Earth, I'm just waaayyy too busy due to RL issues to make substantive comments.

Old One, I'm still reading and groovin', however, and always will be.

P_of_H -

Welcome back! Thanks for taking a break from the dreaded RL issues and swinging by;)...

As you will soon see (hopefully today sometime), the campaign is about to take a very interesting turn.

~ Old One
 

Session 18 (Part Four)

One Miracle Too Many?

Rosë and Rowan dashed the stinging sweat from their eyes with shaking hands. Two shadowy shapes descended down the front of the immense dwarven statue through the swirling mist. The two companions stood, slack-jawed, as a ghostly winged figure, shimmering with holy light, led a pale reflection of Sextus down from on high.

The apparitions halted a spear’s length above the bard’s bloody body and the winged being addressed Lew in melodic language that flowed across their ears like the sweetest music. Lew, eyes shining violet, responded in the same tongue; his voice was calm and authoritative. Rowan squinted, straining to get a good look at the celestial creature. His eyes widened as he realized in had a vaguely dwarven shape to it!

Uncounted beams of violet light shot through chamber for half a grain. Rowan and Rosë flung their arms up to shield their faces from the unbearable brilliance. Their eyes snapped back open when they heard a long groan and a ragged breath being drawn. The beams of light were gone and the swirling mist was rapidly dissipating. They saw no sign of the winged being, but Sextus’s body stirred and the bard attempted to sit up.

With cries of joy, Rowan and Rosë dropped to a knee beside their friend. They barely noted Lew and the dwarven warrior conversing. The disjointed voice issuing from Lew recaptured their attention.

“You have agreed to the price for the life of your friend. That price is the mortal shell of the human you call Lew. This vessel is best suited for me to continue my mission, which is of utmost import. I have instructed Cragen, my apprentice, to travel with you, for you cannot walk on the path I must take. I fear I do not have time to tarry and explain more…I have slept in madness far too long! If the Lightbringer wills it, we shall meet again.”

As he finished speaking, Lew made a pass with his hands and began walking…straight up into the air. Sextus, Rowan and Rosë stared, dumbfounded.

Quintus, red-faced and panting, burst into the room from the tapestry chamber. Confused and slightly disoriented, the sorcerer took in the battered dwarven warrior, the ascending Lew and the stunned faces of his brother and friends in a grain. “What in the hell is going on here? What is happening to Lew?”

The words came in a rush. The dwarf cocked his head slightly and looked at Quintus, clearly perplexed. The elder Scipio’s frustration and fear burst like a paper dam. He unslung his crossbow and slotted his last Lathan-ensorcelled bolt. “You, dwarf, bring my friend back now or you die!”

The dwarven warrior’s eyes narrowed dangerously and his hand strayed towards his war hammer…

To Be Continued…

Next: Questions, Answers and Yet More Questions

~ Old One

PS - Sorry this one is a little skimpy...more will follow soon!
 


Well I might be reading this wrong but I think Lew is now playing the Dwarf Cragen. Maybe thats just me though ...

Good update though Old One! Long time no post! :D
 


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