Character checking:
Jules(renau1g)-
* please remove Experience from Game info and give yourself 1 Hero Point
* under AC change + 1 (shield) to + 1 (feat) I know it says it gives you a shield bonus to AC but it was confusing whether or not you were carrying one.
* Short sword crit range is wrong.
* Rations(5) weigh 5lbs
* have total weight at 55lbs which is under your light load by 3lbs but you have no pack or even a sack you could change your outift to expolrer's adding both no cost and no weight to the character
* have gold spent at 219gp, 5sp, 3cp leftover = 4sp, 7cp (hmmm dirt poor good reason to go adventuring)
* your FC bonus and treasure sbloks should be listed in the tracking post. I think I explained that badly as the other group had trouble with it also. Will try and re-explain that second post in RG
* question about bacground - Did you ever join Kullen's gang or did they offer and you refused? Do you have that tattoo?
???(s@squ@tch)-
* please remove your Experience Point spot in game info and add Hero Points: 1
* HR for channel energy is Xd6 + 1/2 your cleric lvl + WIS Modifier so you can add a +4 to your 1d6
* Extra turning is not a feat in PF did you want Extra Channel? or Turn Undead as a feat?
* Clerics are not prof with all armors just light and medium armors
* under Focused Mind you don;t recieve a +2 bonus to spellcraft checks only concentration checks
* ACP penalty is -6
* have total weight at 96lb
* have leftover gold at 14gp, 8sp, 8cp
* important - need apperance, deamenaor, background, and name
Galyne(ghostcat)-
* no deity? want to put agnostic or atheist in that slot (which will be tested lol)
* apperance and deamenaor
Aria(Shayuri)-
* AC have AC 00 = 13 + this and that; should read AC 13 = 10 + this and that
* Init should be +2 modifier not added
* CMB is correct STR mod not listed
* under bloodline list know(religion) becomes class skill
* I don't know where you got those two traits from or what they do.
* under Spellcraft you should list +3 [misc] as +3 [feat]
* Favored class bonus +1 skill point needs listed under trackig post please
* Need Equipment or you could start with nothing but the clothes on your back and a gem worth 70gp
* And your very lucky we are not using XP or you would be at -5,000 for the teaser background.
Avren(fireinthedust)-
* please remove Experience from game info and give yourself 1 hero point
* another agnostic
* CMD should be 15
* Fort stat is wrong should be +1 total then is +3
* attack for curved blade should be +4
* need tarits or list that you aren't taking any
* list skill points: 10 and max ranks: 1 and ACP: -3 please
* misc skills (that have no ranks) need filled out along with listing ACP to skills
* please add your
starting gold link into your treasure tracking spot in your second post in the RG
* Not listed is max weights and weight carried I have your gear at 54.5lbs (medium load)
* Not listed leftover gold have you at spent = 127gp, 2sp, 1cp leftover = 52gp, 7sp, 9cp (You could buy a few scrolls and have them for when you reach character lvl2 (wizard 1)
* Background note: is the mad hermit that attacked you still out there?
Vixtrin(CanadienneBacon)-
* have checked character resently so will wait to hear back if changes are made
Ok that was three hours of he.. um heck. And now I have a headache.
HM
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