Ascardian - Arcane Melee Striker

[Daniel D. Fox]

Shorten the powernames and capitalize each power name. Here are my suggestions, as nitpicky as they may be:

Step Through the Air (Split the Sky)
Force through your blade (Forceblade)
Ice Cage (Icey Cage)
Lightning that hits the unwary (Lighting Strike)
Step (Pierce The Veil)
Sword Trail (Trailing Sword)
The Force of Thunder (Thunderblow)
Fire of your body and mind (Mindfire)
Weapon of Lightning (Lightning's Embrace)
Block Your Mind (Inner Fortitude)
Walk (Penetrate the Veil)
Self control (Mind Stasis)

 

[Oldtimer]

Two things.

1. Both the Nimble Ascardian Style teleport and the power Travels of the Mind are listed as Immediate Interrupt, but they seem to trigger on things happening in your turn. You can't do immediate actions during your own turn. They need to be free actions.

2. The effect of Travels of the Mind says "Reroll the Inside Check". That would be Insight.

 

[Kreaf]

Shorten the powernames and capitalize each power name. Here are my suggestions, as nitpicky as they may be:

Step Through the Air (Split the Sky)
Force through your blade (Forceblade)
Ice Cage (Icey Cage)
Lightning that hits the unwary (Lighting Strike)
Step (Pierce The Veil)
Sword Trail (Trailing Sword)
The Force of Thunder (Thunderblow)
Fire of your body and mind (Mindfire)
Weapon of Lightning (Lightning's Embrace)
Block Your Mind (Inner Fortitude)
Walk (Penetrate the Veil)
Self control (Mind Stasis)

Thanks for your suggestions.

I will make use of a few of your names. Not all of them but a few ;-)

Two things.

1. Both the Nimble Ascardian Style teleport and the power Travels of the Mind are listed as Immediate Interrupt, but they seem to trigger on things happening in your turn. You can't do immediate actions during your own turn. They need to be free actions.

2. The effect of Travels of the Mind says "Reroll the Inside Check". That would be Insight.

Thank you. I changed it to free actions and corrected the "Inside"

And upped it again.

 

[Engilbrand]

I wanted to keep this from sliding off the first page. Do other people have recommendations and ideas? This is definitely a class that I want to use, and the more help from you guys, the better the chance of this being used. I'm sure that the creator would like to see it improved, too.

 

[Kreaf]

Thanks for the bump...
I hadn't had lots of time the last few days. But the project is not forgotten.
So stay tuned for the next update (probably this evening local time ;-) )

 

[Kreaf]

As I promised I uploaded the update. It includes Level 7 Encounter and Level 9 Dailies.
I am looking forward to your evaluation.
Also I have included a Level 15 Daily.... I wanted to make it a Level 9 Daily but thought it would be to powerfull....
Thanks

 

[Surina]

Hey Hey!

I'm liking this class more and more! I like the new powers that you've added.

 

[Engilbrand]

I like the updates. I love Falling Doom. I think that Sharpened Blade might be overpowered. There's a high epic power that increases crit ranges. I don't really see how Crystal Coffin makes sense for the class.
I'll probably use this on Friday against my players. I'll let you know how it goes. Has anyone else tried it out?

 

[Kreaf]

Thanks again.
I am playing one of them (level 4 Eladrin) in our Sunday but I just played a few hours and we hadn't had a figth...

I thought Crystal Coffin would fit nicely the crystal theme...
Hmm maybe I will change it...

 

[Engilbrand]

There's a mild crystal theme. But the first thing that comes to mind is teleportation.