First, I'm assuming that Elementals get the same bonuses that Mechwarriors do; is that correct?
Aha, I hear my cue!
Actually, Elementals are created differently. Here are your choices:
A 27 points attributes, 24 points skills, 1 point advantages
B 27 points attributes, 21 points skills, 2 point advantages
C 24 points attributes, 27 points skills, 1 point advantages
D 24 points attributes, 21 points skills, 3 point advantages
E 21 points attributes, 27 points skills, 2 point advantages
F 21 points attributes, 24 points skills, 3 point advantages
In addition, Clan Elementals get: +2 BLD, +1 REF, -1 CHA plus the free advantage 'Toughness'.
A little bit of further advice:
Make him Carson of House Shaw, as he is probably not bloodnamed yet.
Second, at 6'8'', he's rather small for an elemental who range from 6'8'' to 8'4'' with something like 7'8'' being the average.
Skillwise, an elemental Star Commander is almost like a Mechwarrior Star Captain (due to one 'point' being equal to one 'mech or five elementals), so should have a few points in leadership and tactics.
If you have any further open questions, just email me. (email's in the profile)
Oh, and welcome to the game!
Folkert