Avatar of the North
First Post
Doesn't grace (+1 armor ability tthat removes the max dex cap on armor) seem a little powerful for a +1 enchanment considering that Nimbleness (from Magic of Faerun) only raises the max dex by +2 and its a +1 ability
I also think that his knockback ability should be called 'Lesser Knockback' seeing as how there is a more powerful one in Magic of Faerun as well.
Bow of the Gray Marches: how much would you guys rate an enchantment that allows you to get upto +10 str mod on a bow for damage?
The Vigor blade: Again the question is what would your rate this enchanment as a Plus. After it inflict 5 points of str damage in a day it can cast Bull's Strength on him that lasts for 3/hour (use able once day). Perhaps it has two enchantments, the ability damage per strike and the after effect of being able to cast a spell on you once per day.
Tentacle Shield: again the question is as above what plus would you consider its ability?
The Helm of Alcrity: would you allow this enchanment to be applied to normal armor or possibly a weapon and if so at what cost
The Unholy Riven: Doesn't this thing seem like it should be a template instead of a creature? Personally i think it should have been a template. Also at cr13 with its complete immunity to magic? Don't you think its cr should be somewhat higher?
Other than these small things i think its a great book.
I also think that his knockback ability should be called 'Lesser Knockback' seeing as how there is a more powerful one in Magic of Faerun as well.
Bow of the Gray Marches: how much would you guys rate an enchantment that allows you to get upto +10 str mod on a bow for damage?
The Vigor blade: Again the question is what would your rate this enchanment as a Plus. After it inflict 5 points of str damage in a day it can cast Bull's Strength on him that lasts for 3/hour (use able once day). Perhaps it has two enchantments, the ability damage per strike and the after effect of being able to cast a spell on you once per day.
Tentacle Shield: again the question is as above what plus would you consider its ability?
The Helm of Alcrity: would you allow this enchanment to be applied to normal armor or possibly a weapon and if so at what cost
The Unholy Riven: Doesn't this thing seem like it should be a template instead of a creature? Personally i think it should have been a template. Also at cr13 with its complete immunity to magic? Don't you think its cr should be somewhat higher?
Other than these small things i think its a great book.