Satin Knights
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Amien is APPROVED for third level.
Character Level Up Approvals
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WindCrystal
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Nice. Thanks for the response.
FYI, Iago appeared to be already approved, but had the Awaiting category. I just removed that.
Reviewing Fury
1) I was driving myself nuts trying to figure out why all your off-hand attacks seemed wrong, and didn't figure it out until I followed the link in your equipment to Deulist's Vambraces, so I added a note about it in your two-weapon fighting section. You might have a preferred method for noting it that you think is cleaner, but I thought it was a good idea to put it somewhere in the combat stats section.
2) Heartseeker only ignores concealment for living creatures with hearts. I might add that to the 'special' note, especially since at upper levels you're likely to be encountering outsiders more often and it won't apply to some of them.
3) I had to look up the extra bump Skill Focus gets @ 10 ranks, so I added it to the description of the feats in the feat section.
4) You have fewer coins than you have remaining wealth. My assumption is that it's in Fury's home?
After getting myself up to speed on a couple of those higher-level bits of crunch (so: my bad, not yours), the only thing outstanding is tracking your coins vs. remaining worth. Since the math for your remaining wealth works, though, I think noting where the money happens to be staying is minor, so I'm going to go ahead and APPROVE Fury.
Reviewing Fury
1) I was driving myself nuts trying to figure out why all your off-hand attacks seemed wrong, and didn't figure it out until I followed the link in your equipment to Deulist's Vambraces, so I added a note about it in your two-weapon fighting section. You might have a preferred method for noting it that you think is cleaner, but I thought it was a good idea to put it somewhere in the combat stats section.
2) Heartseeker only ignores concealment for living creatures with hearts. I might add that to the 'special' note, especially since at upper levels you're likely to be encountering outsiders more often and it won't apply to some of them.
3) I had to look up the extra bump Skill Focus gets @ 10 ranks, so I added it to the description of the feats in the feat section.
4) You have fewer coins than you have remaining wealth. My assumption is that it's in Fury's home?
After getting myself up to speed on a couple of those higher-level bits of crunch (so: my bad, not yours), the only thing outstanding is tracking your coins vs. remaining worth. Since the math for your remaining wealth works, though, I think noting where the money happens to be staying is minor, so I'm going to go ahead and APPROVE Fury.
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Grayn
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Thuk is ready for review for Lvl 2. This is my first time leveling a pc, so please be gentle (but thorough!) 
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Dimb'antar_Thuk_(Grayn)
Thanks!
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Dimb'antar_Thuk_(Grayn)
Thanks!
GlassEye
Adventurer
Thanks, I don't know why it didn't occur to me to make more notes so my apologies there. As for the coins vs. worth, I was planning on doing more shopping after my Agile proposal passed (or failed) and updating afterwards but that is still up for voting and then it slipped my mind.
Actually, his approvals aren't up to date. He was mid-adventure when he last leveled, so his finances weren't approve. When the adventure ended I resubmitted him to get his finances checked (post in this thread on April 28). So, he is still awaiting approval.
No rush, though. I'm traveling a fair bit this summer and have other projects I want to do, so I'm not planning to do anything on LPF until August.
Ah. Sorry about that. I didn't think characters needed re-approval mid-level for finances when they finished adventures, so I jumped to the wrong conclusion. Apologies.
I think in general I'm just crazy-annotation-happy, plus a little behind on the latest rules. I don't imagine SK or PM would probably have wondered what you were up to. No worries.
But thanks for reminding me to check the board instead of just my subscriptions. I'd totally missed you had a proposal pending. Voted.
Gorgon Heap
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I believe Lightfeather is ready for a 2nd level look, though I probably messed up the skills again.
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Lightfeather_(Gorgon_The_First)#Skills
http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Lightfeather_(Gorgon_The_First)#Skills
Satin Knights
First Post
Looking at Lightfeather:
1) I recomputed your XP. The GM had it a little off because you start gaining time based XP as soon as you hit the threshold. So, it went up a bit.
2) Skills: You cannot spend more ranks in a skill than you have levels. So, perception needs to be whittled down and the extra point put elsewhere.
3) I liked the original picture better. (Just a personal opinion.)
Everything else was cosmetic tweaks.
So, fix the skills and you will be set.
1) I recomputed your XP. The GM had it a little off because you start gaining time based XP as soon as you hit the threshold. So, it went up a bit.
2) Skills: You cannot spend more ranks in a skill than you have levels. So, perception needs to be whittled down and the extra point put elsewhere.
3) I liked the original picture better. (Just a personal opinion.)
Everything else was cosmetic tweaks.
So, fix the skills and you will be set.
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