Character Submission Thread

[GlassEye]

Welcome to LPF, BlueLotus! Glad to have you. This is my review of Levanna. Hopefully we can get her approved and in adventure soon!

If I mention something in error, let me know and we can work out what the difficulty is.

To be fixed:
Background: Decide whether open or closed. If open, DMs can use your background when planning adventures, etc. If closed, it's off limits.
Language: In addition to Common +4, Levanna will also get a free regional language (probably Middle Landellian but options are here).
Cantrips: Levanna doesn't get cantrips of Divination and Necromancy. This needs to be noted on the sheet.
Arcane School: Levanna's Conjuration specialization powers (Summoner's Charm & Acid Dart) are not noted on her sheet.

Suggestions:
Language: As far as I can tell, Undercommon has never been used. I don't even think we have agreed whether or not we have an Underdark-styled area to E'n. You might be better off selecting a different language.
Armor: Haramaki is cheap and light and gives a +1 bonus to AC.
Cash: You have 42 gp after the refund for your spellbook. I recommend spending it on a dagger (good for eating with & stabbing goblins in the eye) and other bits of possibly useful minor gear.

Minor edits:
Image adjustment for readability and other minor formatting edits.
Corrected CMB from +1 to -1.
Your first spellbook is free. Cost adjusted.

Fix those few items mentioned above and she will be ready.

 

[BlueLotus]

I made the changes and she's ready for another check. http://livingpf.wikia.com/wiki/Levanna_(bluelotus)

 

[GlassEye]

Levanna is APPROVED!

This is the first of two needed at first level but you can enter the Dunn Wright Inn and begin roleplay. There are a couple of other characters there to chat with, and some NPCs. I plan on starting a low-level adventure very soon (that is, as soon as I finish designing one encounter and get the PCs involved approved) and there is a place for you.

 

[BlueLotus]

Great! I look forward to playing!

 

[Scott DeWar]

Sorry, BlueLotus. Got hit with something that had me sleeping for most of the day, But Here is your second good faith review.

First, let me say that having data such as: Int (16 base, +2 racial), That is always a boon for the folks who have the honor of doing a review and is much appreciated!

Second:
re specialist opposition school spells
you have it written as:
Levanna may not prepare cantrips from the Necromancy or Divination schools

However You can cast spells of the opposition school, there are stipulations though

A wizard who prepares spells from his opposition schools must use two spell slots of that level to prepare the spell. For example, a wizard with evocation as an opposition school must expend two of his available 3rd-level spell slots to prepare a fireball.

under cantrips it says:
A wizard can prepare a cantrip from an opposition school, but it uses up two of his available slots (see below).
(D20 PFSRD, http://www.d20pfsrd.com/classes/core-classes/wizard)

Third:
I really like how you broke down Perception and Sense Motive!

Fourth:

Please double check the carried weight. I come with 41 lbs

fifth:
Carrying capacity
needed to be changed to reflect strength of 8 [fixed]
However, that puts you at medium load and that has some negative ramifications. I will let you work on that.

I will have to say that this character is not approved pending the player's decision on Number 5 Carrying capacity.
if I am wrong in this, we can discuss it openly.

 

[BlueLotus]

I made the changes to equipment and cantrips. She's ready for another pass!

 

[Scott DeWar]

examining . . . . .Ok, I see the changes and the corrections are approved. I hereby give a non judge approval and this character is now ready for play!

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APPROVED!!!​

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I am curious to know if you are already familiar with Pathfinder, and if you know about mule back chords? It would help with carrying capacity. You cannot afford them right now as they cost 1000 gp.

editGlassEye, can you remove the character off the awaiting approval as I, for some reason, cannot. Thank you in advance

 

[Scott DeWar]

Mowgli, I will take a look at weylyn when I return from taking a walk.

 

[Maidhc O Casain]

Thanks, SDW. Once he's approved for 9th, I might just use a few DMC to bump him to 10th...

 

[BlueLotus]

I am curious to know if you are already familiar with Pathfinder, and if you know about mule back chords? It would help with carrying capacity. You cannot afford them right now as they cost 1000 gp.

Thanks!

I've played 3.5 more than Pathfinder. I've only played Pathfinder for a few months, so I don't know a lot of its specific options but I have a good grasp of its core system. I'll keep that one in mind.