Check please!

[Tres`ni]

Would people please check this character? He's the first I've ever done, I started to do it with PC Gen but ran into problems of mods not being applied so I had to start doing it by hand. Any suggestions would also be appreciated. Thanks!


Name: New Character
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Race : Elf
Sex : Male
Class: Monk
Level: 6
Exp : 15000
TNL : 21000
Align: Lawful Neutral
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Str: 10 (+0)
Dex: 18 (+4)
Con: 13 (+1)
Int: 10 (+0)
Wis: 16 (+3)
Cha:  8 (-1)
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Max HP: 41

Type Total (Ability)
Melee: +4 (+0)
Ranged: +8 (+4)
Initiative Mod: +4
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Unarmed (1d8) +8/+5
Speed Walk 50'
Low-light Vision
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Defense
AC FF Base Armor MaxDex Spells Touch
18 14 +10 +0 +4 17

Ability Size ArmorCheck
+8 +0 0
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Reflex +9 (+5)
Fortitude +5 (+5)
Willpower +8 (+5)
SpellFail 0%
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Feats:
Weapon Finesse(Unarmed)
Dodge
Mobility

Racial Feats:
Martial Weapon Proficiency (Rapier,Longbow,Longbow (Composite),Shortbow,Shortbow (Composite))

Monk Feats:
Simple Weapon Proficiency
Exotic Weapon Proficiency (Kama,Nunchaku,Shuriken,Siangham)
Deflect Arrows
Improved Trip
Improved Unarmed Strike

Virtual Feats:
Stunning Fists
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Skills Mod Rank Total
Balance 6 6.0 12
Climb 0 6.0 6
Hide 4 5.0 9
Jump 2 8.0 10
Listen 5 0.0 5
Move Silently 4 6.0 10
Search 2 0.0 2
Spot 5 0.0 5
Tumble 6 5.0 11

Special Abilities:
(Racial) Immunity to sleep
(Racial) Save +2 vs enchantment spells
(Racial) Automatic Search check if within 5' of secret/concealed door
(Lvl 1) Stunning Attack 6/day DC (16)
(Lvl 1) Evasion: No damage on succesful reflex save for 1/2 damage
(Lvl 1) Flurry of Blows: One Extra Attack (at highest attack bonus)/-2 Penalty to all attacks
(Lvl 3) Still Mind: +2 to saving thorws agianst spells and effects from Enchantment school
(Lvl 5) Purity of Body: Immune to all non-magical diseases
(Lvl 6) Slow Fall (30 ft.): A monk within arms reach of a wall can use the wall to slow descent. Take damage as if wall was noted feet shorter.
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Equipment
Eq (QTY) Weight Name
Y (1.0) 2.0 Outfit (Monk's)
Y (1.0) 2.0 Backpack
* N (1.0) 1.0 Rations (Trail/Per Day)
* N (1.0) 0.0 Waterskin
† N (1.0) 1.0 Water (Pint)

* Stored in Backpack
† Stored in Waterskin

Total Weight Carried: 4.0 lbs
Carrying Capacity: 150.0 Load: Light

Loads:
Light 50
Medium 100
Heavy 150
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Funds:
8 Gold
5 Silver

Changes noted by RogueJK have been added.
Moved 3 points from STR to CON. Added 6 HP from CON bonus
Adjusted stats to reflect new STR

 

[RogueJK]

Only a couple of corrections...

Your Initiative should only be +4. Your Dex mod is only +4.

As an Elf, you don't get automatic proficiency with the handaxe. You get Martial Weapon Proficiency with all bows, and with either the Longsword or Rapier.

Your AC should be 18. 10(base) + 4(Dex) + 3(Wis) + 1 (Monk's AC bonus)

Also, as a 6th level character, you have 13,000 gp. Use them to buy some magic items.

Your Max Hit Points should be 48, not 35.

Looks good, though. Especially since it's your first character, ever.

[Edit] Your ability mods for your skills are off. The ranks are fine, but the Mods, and therefore the Totals, aren't correct.

They should look like this:

Skills Mod Rank Total
Balance 4 6.0 10
Climb 1 6.0 7
Hide 4 5.0 9
Jump 1 8.0 9
Listen 3 0.0 3
Move Silently 4 6.0 10
Search 1 0.0 1
Spot 3 0.0 3
Tumble 4 5.0 9

[/Edit]

 

[Tres`ni]

The skills are noted as such because they include synergy bonuses. Jump gets +2 from because I have more then 5 in Tumble
(and more then 5 in Jump gives a +2 in tumble) Balance is also given a +2 thanx to Tumble (I thought those where off to so I had checked them with the PHB (as I did the rest of the character, but I still knew I would have mistakes.)

Magic Items will not be allowed at the start in the campiagn I will be playing, and the DM is house ruling the gold, not sure how much we will get yet..

Max HP is 1D8 rolled (with an automatic 8 at level 1). So the 35 is correct (If I had rooled all 8's I would have had a 48, God those would be nice dice!)

 

[RogueJK]

Ah. I didn't check synergy bonuses. Oh, well. Ignore that part.

And I took "Max HP" to mean 'the most HPs that you could have at 6th level'.

 

[Darklone]

Uhm...

You didn't calculate Weapon Finesse to hit?

Makes more than a +5 then ...

Advice: Forget that 13 Str. Take con. Hitpoints are more important than the puny +1 to damage. Your damage will increase fast with monk levels and you hit with dex.

 

[RogueJK]

Re: Uhm...

You didn't calculate Weapon Finesse to hit?

He did... it's in the section underneath the attack bonuses.

"Unarmed (1d8) +8/+5 "

 

[Tres`ni]

Would an Weapon Finesse(Unarmed) apply to melee weapons?

 

[RogueJK]

Would an Weapon Finesse(Unarmed) apply to melee weapons?

No. Each time you take it, it only applies to 1 weapon. In this case, it only applies to your unarmed attacks.

 

[Artoomis]

Changing your Str and Con may have affected skill bonuses (sorry I didn't check them). You may want to make sure you've taken that into account.

Also, for a more robust character generator, try PCGen at

http://groups.yahoo.com/group/pcgen/

and

http://pcgen.sourceforge.net/


Good luck.

 

[Dravin]

He was using PCGen.