Classless BESM d20 Game [Closed] (Calling Kyloss, Candide and rangerjohn)

[Candide]

Finally, my character

Here he is. This was my first classless BESM character, so I'd like help on where I might have messed up. Namely his special attack. I think I did the math horribly wrong.

Name: Onigara
Race: Demon
Starting level or CP: 170(50base +120 +whatever defects)

Stats: 46 cp
Str: 50 +20 (18base +2race +28superstrength +2Enhanced STR) 9
Dex: 43 +16 (18base +2race +20Enhanced DEX +3lvl points) 9
Con: 20 +5 (18base +2race) 9
Int: 10 +0 5
Wis: 16 +3 8
Cha: 12 +1 (10base +2race) 6

Hp: 119 (12d8 for 24 cp)

AC: +13(+16 dex, -3Inept Defense)

Saves: 8cp
Fort +9 (4base + 5con)
Ref +20 (4base + 19dex)
Will +3 (0base +3wis)

Bab: +11/+6/+1 33cp

Full Attack: (katana) +31/+26/+21

Damage: (katana) 1d10+30(str)+20(massive damage)

Initiative Modifier: +32(+16dex, +12speed, +4improved initiative)

Powers:
Super-Strength: Rank4; +28 Str 16cp

Speed: rank6 +12 to init., huge traveling speed, 12cp

Massive Damage(katana) rank10; +20 damage with katana 20cp

Heightened Sense(Hearing) rank5; +10 on listen checks. 5cp

Special Defense: Aging 2cp(taken twice; does not age)

Personal Gear: rank1; katana with cane scabbard, fine suit, sunglasses

Jumping: rank2; +40 to jump

Attack Combat Mastery: rank 11; Bab +11/+6/+1


Feats:
5x Sneak Attack
Improved Initiative

Skills: (8+Int) 24cp
Climb +35
Hide +31
Intimidate +16
Jump +75
Listen +28
Move Silently +31
Spot +14

Onigara's demon racial stats:
+2 STR, DEX, CON, CHA
-Darkvision
Base Movement of 30ft.

Defects: 26bp
Achilles Heel 2bp (Holy symbols)

Bane 2bp (Holy water)

Blind Fury 2bp

Detectable 1bp (facial features/ears)

Easily Distracted 1bp (things of beauty. Mostly girls)

Famous 2bp (in Netherworld as an assassin, and in Real world for being one of the best swordsmen ever/assassin)

Inept Defense 6bp -3 to AC

Marked 2bp (Mostly human features, but demonic accents)

Significant O.(pc) 1bp rank3 (protects Genryu the shadow dragon, not sure of relation yet. Looks at her as a younger sister)

Wanted 2bp (I have a higher profile than most assassins)
Sensory Impairment 1bp (short-sightedness)

Vulnerability 2bp(holy water)



Onigara, the Fallen. His true origins are known only to a few. His father, brothers and Genryu. Originally from the Netherworld, he carries the essence of demons in his blood. His features are mostly human, but have demonic accents like pointed ears, sharp teeth, red/orange/yellow irises in his eyes. He possess an unholy speed, a bit of charm, a razor sharp wit and immense strength. He has not been beated in a swordfight. Ever. He is too quick and too deadly for any mortal to fight, though that doesn't stop them from trying. He gladly issues and accepts any fighting challenge where he can show off his expertise. He is a fan of bloodshed and gore, his style with his katana uses flourishing moves that allow for blood to be scattered about everywhere.

His eyes are red as flame, hair the color of silvery white. In the modern Earth world, he wears a stylish black suit and has his katana tucked inside a cane.

He is often called by his brothers a weakling, because of his human appearence. Only part of him is human.

Onigara, though quite a bad guy, has a less-vile side. He loves things that are beautiful like art, flowers and girls. He has a following of young girls wherever he goes. Once or twice he's reciprocated affection for one of them.

He looks to Genryu as a little sister. He was one of the trainers she studied under as she grew up. He tries to protect her, a fact that she takes with a grain of salt.

 

[Zack2216]

Candide, your special attack requires more cp. It is minimum rank 4, and it'll do 1d8 points of damage, thus costing 16 cp.

 

[Candide]

thanks, making the changes now. I think I'll just take that power off and use the points for something else.

 

[hafrogman]

Actually it would be even more complicated if you choose to use it. Some of those are special attack disabilites (for per rank bonuses) and some are normal disadvantages (for set point bonus) and errata are being used, so drain body (con) would cost 2 ranks.

 

[Kalanyr]

There's also one other problem, PCs as an SO always work as a 3 BP defect for the purposes of how committed to protecting them you should be, but only yield 1 BP. (Basically you get 1 BP for Significant Other 3 (PC). And zip for lower levels of SO to PCs)

 

[Candide]

used extra 2 points for 2 ranks in Jumping attribute. Who else are we waiting on characters from? I don't mean to rush anyone though.

 

[kyloss]

Im getting my character made and have a ?

is there a limit on HD as in 12 or can we go beyond that ie (one semi-abbsurd example-36d4 same as 12d12 in maximum total and higher mimimum/average) or are we building effectivly 12th level characters with our own classless classes?

but more importantly for my new char idea what about skills?
I think I am going to go more for a tech type though how I am going to fing one that fits in with all these devil-beasties I have no clue, earthly or otherwise.

 

[Festy_Dog]

My character has been finished for a while, though it'll be a little while yet before I can post it because my computer was fried in a storm recently and I'm getting the motherboard and power unit replaced. In a nutshell, my character's a possessed mecha.

 

[kyloss]

I was wondering what happened to that project I thought the government took it away when I was asleep.

 

[hafrogman]

In a nutshell, my character's a possessed mecha.

Am I the only one suddenly filled with a desire to design a possessed mecha in a nutshell?

Hmm. . . diminutive mecha, limited movement (cannot leave the shell). . .perhaps piloted remotely by a megalomaniacal squirrel bent on world domination.