Cleon
Legend
They're very pregnant. That revision looks fine. Should we put in the bit about flickering in the wonderblast?
I thought you wanted to cut out the flickering?
If we are including it, I'd add it to the Maternal Glow SQ.
They're very pregnant. That revision looks fine. Should we put in the bit about flickering in the wonderblast?
I wanted to cut any mechanical effect of the flickering. I meant that we could put in a fluff line into Maternal Glow for the wingless wonder: The maternal glow of a wingless wonder flickers for one round after the wonder uses its wonderblast. But maybe that's not worth it. I'm just as happy ignoring the flickering bit altogether.
Whichever makes you happier.
I don't think we need to change the fluff from one critter to the other. But, as a vegetarian, I'm don't like saying that their diet is "mostly vegetarian." I'd say instead, "Most of their diet is plant matter, supplemented by whatever small animals come within reach of their tentacles."
That'll work.
Do we need anything else, or are these mercifully done?
Yes to the note about the walking egg.
Hmmm. Think we can do wonderform quickly?