Critique my Magic Item

[Ale]

Before introduce that item, think about the game consequences.

That PC always can take advantage of dim light (on born of shadows feat and other). It is like a stone to rogue that grant him combat advantage as minir action.

If that's ok, i have a suggestion to fluf the stone

Enconter power (standard).
The stone releases all the light it drained from the ambient.
Close burst 3 (all creatures)
At vc will or ref
Target is blinded until the end of your next turn

Encounter power (move)
Close burst 3
Extingues all fire from torch and others light source

 

[Delgar]

Thanks for some more interesting possibilities.

I have no issues with him having access to dim light, without it taking any shadow feats are worthless, and I don't mind rewarding a player for enhancing the roleplaying in the game.

Before introduce that item, think about the game consequences.

That PC always can take advantage of dim light (on born of shadows feat and other). It is like a stone to rogue that grant him combat advantage as minir action.

If that's ok, i have a suggestion to fluf the stone

Enconter power (standard).
The stone releases all the light it drained from the ambient.
Close burst 3 (all creatures)
At vc will or ref
Target is blinded until the end of your next turn

Encounter power (move)
Close burst 3
Extingues all fire from torch and others light source

 

[Delgar]

Here was the player's first real interaction with his patron:


You're floating in a sea of nothingness, it's dark and cold and feels empty. You feel a large slimy tentacle brush upside your face. A sharp pain races through your head. Now your floating above what looks like another version of yourself and a wretched desiccated female. Vol! The two are locked in battle. Your companions lie dead on the floor. You knock aside spells with your magical blade and Vol dodges out of the way of your vicious blows. She mocks you, she taunts you, you thrust your blade deep in her chest. You smile thinking victory is at hand.

Vol laughs as she slides down the blade towards you, her hands grasp each side of your head. You scream in pain and drop to your knees. "Fool!" Vol laughs, "did you really think YOU could destroy me?"

You loose your grip on the blade, blood begins pouring from your mouth and eyes. "I beat you before, and I'll destroy you again foolish Deva, but this time your soul is mine. She places a dragonshard to your forhead and you scream in pain, the shard begins to glow and then you slump on the floor. Then you're back floating in a sea of nothingness.

Strange Alien Voice: That is your fate Mathas, if you do not accept my aid. Your companions will die and you will suffer a fate worse than death. I can aid you though Mathas I can grant you the power you will need to defeat Vol. As your patron I can teach you and show you many things. Let me aid you Deva.

Off in the distance you can hear a faint feminine voice, but can't make out what it's saying

Mathas:This cannot be... Not again. My friends. *growls* Never! This time must be different. IT WILL BE! I must have vengeance for those who died before, and the countless times I've failed before. Show me what you will, Voice, I accept your aid. Vol must be
destroyed at all costs.

VENGEANCE WILL BE MINE!

What must I do?

Still floating in an endless sea you can see a tiny pin prick of light off in the distance. You barely hear the echo of a feminine voice. "Mathas, you don't....look to... Past...the future...not...in stone...don't give....Mathas..." the voice fades into the background.

The tentacle rests under your chin and lifts up your face.

Strange Alien Voice: you have made a wise decision Mathas you will not regret your choice. I will show you the true meaning of power and together we will destroy Vol and punish my children in the process.
You have made the first step my child and as your patron you may call upon my aid in the future. Because I exist on another plane my aid will remain limited but in due time we will change that together.

Mathas: What do I call you?


Strange Alien Voice: I am known as Chemosh

 

[MrBeens]

Okay I'm making a Rare magic item for a specific player in my campaign who has basically sold his soul to a being from Xoriat, and picked up the Born of Shadow feat.

So I was just wondering if this item was too good or not good enough for a rare magic item.

Stone of Chemosh 12 Rare

Flecks on this ebon stone, seem to flicker and shimmer like stars in the night sky.
Wondrous Item 13000 gp

PropertyThis stone sheds dim light 1 square in all directions. This light can be turned on and off with a minor action. Special: If there is brighter light in the area it dampens it down to dim light.

Power Encounter (Move Action)

Chemosh's favor smiles upon you.

Use this power while the stone is shedding dim light. One opponent in dim light grants combat advantage to you.

Power Daily (Standard Action)

Invoke the power of Chemosh to crush your enemies will. Tentacles lash out from the stone draining your enemies life force.

Use this power while the stone is shedding dim light.
Close burst 3
Target: Each enemy in the burst
Attack: Charisma vs. Will
Hit: 2d8 + Charisma modifier cold and necrotic damage, and -2 penalty to hit (save ends).


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For the daily you are going to need to build in an equivalent of enhancement bonus to the attack roll, otherwise it will just be using half level + cha.

 

[Delgar]

Aye, you're right I had forgotten about that.

For the daily you are going to need to build in an equivalent of enhancement bonus to the attack roll, otherwise it will just be using half level + cha.