Three posts in a row. Oops. Anyway...
[MENTION=211]Phoenix8008[/MENTION]: Digging your story. I have a couple of requests. First, would you mind making Justice's son and daughter twins? Of course if they're dead I guess it doesn't matter, but...
And second, when you're done with your story would you mind wrapping it up in the level 1 sblock? Thanks.
[MENTION=12183]sithramir[/MENTION]: Any way we could make old man Everwood a little older than that? I've got no issues at all with your character being related to someone important to name a mountain range (and probably the forest there too, honestly) after, but it seems that the disconnect should be a little more... distant. What did he do that was so profound that someone wanted to name that stuff after him, anyway? Not a major deal right now, but it might help with fleshing out the area some.
More to come later, hopefully.
-IG