jdeleski
First Post
Getting Your Rooms
Those are wonderful kickoff writings! Paco's first experiences travelling to New York City, Camille's comical scene with the housekeeper, Vitorrio's stay in Sayner to learn about the motorized toboggans (you've effectively eliminated any penalties with repairs, Bobitron), and Annie's going away party. We'll eventually get to some shorter, action writings of a few sentences, but these things really set a great opening tone.
Here are a couple of things to consider:
Job (the tortured one).
Those are wonderful kickoff writings! Paco's first experiences travelling to New York City, Camille's comical scene with the housekeeper, Vitorrio's stay in Sayner to learn about the motorized toboggans (you've effectively eliminated any penalties with repairs, Bobitron), and Annie's going away party. We'll eventually get to some shorter, action writings of a few sentences, but these things really set a great opening tone.
Here are a couple of things to consider:
- Shaman, in Paco's opening paragraph, please edit out the "cool morning air" sentence. At this time, the entire Eastern U.S. is experiencing an unusual weather phenomenon, with daily lows above 80 degrees Fahrenheit and 80 percent humidity. Even in the evenings and early morning, there's no escape from the heat and the constant sweating and stickiness.
- Taokan, I am alerting you a bit early that your student pose will not work because the fundraiser is by invitation only. I'm giving you advance warning so that you can think about how Camille will alter her plans once she's turned away. You can edit your post if you'd like, but there may be no need to do so unless you have trouble figuring out how to proceed from here (or if you have a blinding flash of brilliance that you absolutely must perform immediately!). It's up to you. Normally, we would play out this event as you wrote it, but I'm offering you the option of changing your post since I believe that Camille would've likely discovered her error prior to the start of the fundraiser. You don't need to change your post, but you have the option if you'd like to take it.
- I've assigned rooms, but there's always the option of changing your room (within limits) by checking with the desk manager.
- The two 6th floor double-occupancy rooms are adjacent to each other, but there is no adjoining door between them.
- If you'd like to take any actions prior to the fundraiser, let me know. My next post will actually describe your entrance at the start of the affair. I plan to add my next post Wednesday night, but I can adjust the timing of this depending on what your character does (or if you tell me that you need more time).
Job (the tortured one).
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