billd91
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I don't know for certain what was going through his mind and what emotional reactions he was hoping to garner from the reader. I can make inferences though. Those are the inferences I make. I suppose you could make others, but I think mine are pretty well supported by the text.
As for your specific defense of whether he's just providing a detailed picture of the culture... that's not a very good defense. Because its not a real culture. Its something he made up to serve as a plot element. He's ultimately responsible for whether it serves the overall theme and tone of the book, or detracts from it.
Because it's not a real culture, I would figure he would need to do more work to really color it in, even without a deliberate attempt to specifically appeal to the reader's emotions or play to the theme.