FFG Legendary Class contest submissions

Re: Re: Re: More requests from Khur and...

kingpaul said:

Really? I was under the impression it was now accepted practice. My English profs in college demanded it if we were referring to neutrals.
Without getting into the politics of universities and political correctness, accepted (or preffered, or encouraged) practice is not the same as correct. For example, it is common practice to use the word gender (the grammatical categories of “masculine,” “feminine,” and “neuter”) to refer to sexual identity. In English it's incorrect, nonetheless. (Although incorrect usage tends to mutate into correct usage over time.)

Strunk and White's The Elements of Style (pages 60-61) makes an eloquent case for the use of "he" instead of "they". I'm not a stickler on this point, though I do notice that some editors for d20 companies are. (One listed that using they or theirs, instead of he or his, as his pet peeve.)

If any of you feel strongly about this point, let me know. To me, taking offense at facts of language structure is a bit absurd, but I want everyone to be comfortable and happy as well.

:D

(EDIT) Some dictionaries (Webster's) list your suggestion as an alternative form (as does The Elements of Style while decrying it at the same time). Others clearly call this usage a problem (The American Heritage Dictionary of the English Language, Fourth Edition). The latter volume also states:
  • The use of the third-person plural pronoun they to refer to a singular noun or pronoun is attested as early as 1300, and many admired writers have used they, them, themselves, and their to refer to singular nouns such as one, a person, an individual, and each.
 
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The official FFG writer's guidelines say:

Singular subject/plural pronoun: A writer tends to do this when their attention is focused elsewhere. “Their” is a plural pronoun, so it should not be used to refer to a single subject. If you have one person, or he, or she as the subject of your sentence, “their” should not be used to refer to that person.


Not that any of you have to follow our guidelines. :)
 



Re: Current List

Khur said:
We have permission to use:

The Storm
Warrior of the Broken Wake
Blade of God
Ranged Huntsman
The Brawler
The One
Green Warden
Elf Lord
The King's Warden
The Maitre d'Escrime

Anyone else?

Who's editing theirs? My Green Warden v2.0 is done, methinks. Should we and can we post the new versions here somehow?

As for new submissions, perhaps we should wait for FFG's next contest? I don't know, and it's not just my call.

:D

You have permission to use Spirit of the Beast. I would need some more feedback than Khur gave on the original thread to rewrite it though.

Andy Christian
 

Re: Current List

Khur said:
We have permission to use:

The Storm
Warrior of the Broken Wake
Blade of God
Ranged Huntsman
The Brawler
The One
Green Warden
Elf Lord
The King's Warden
The Maitre d'Escrime

Anyone else?

Who's editing theirs? My Green Warden v2.0 is done, methinks. Should we and can we post the new versions here somehow?

As for new submissions, perhaps we should wait for FFG's next contest? I don't know, and it's not just my call.

:D

You have permission to use Spirit of the Beast. I would need some more feedback than Khur gave on the original thread to rewrite it though.

Andy Christian
 

The Kings Warden

here 'tis... The King's Warden v2.0...

a few changes have been made in line with some of the feedback I received...

thanks to everyone who has commented, by the way...

I am still happy to listen to (read) any further comments people have on this class or my other one (The Maitre d'Escrime)... I have people in my campaigns chomping at the bit to try them out so I'm keen to see what others think of them...

:D
 

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I just realized I forgot to add the tags for the abilities. Quick appendix then:

All special abilities for the Warrior of the Broken Wake are Extraordinary abilities, save for Spell Cutting and Sever Life, which are Supernatural. Sorry about that.
 

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