FFG Legendary Class contest submissions

[Khur]

LgCs and more

Anyone else got submissions for me ... I'm still reading the ones I got and will send them back to the writers with editing comments.

Anyone who wants to do artwork or anything like that, let me know. Let me see some samples too, if you can.

Thanks!

 

[kingpaul]

Re: LgCs and more

Khur,

How's the book coming?

 

[Khur]

Slowly

I have the following classes:

Warrior of the Broken Wake
Green Warden
Maitre d'Escrime
Neclord
Nimrod
Ranged Huntsman
King's Warden
Weapon of God

I've edited the Neclord and sent it back to its author for revisions and I've edited the Green Warden, whose name I may change to something like Guardian of The Green ("The Green" being an elven spiritual ideal related to the natural world, a la Charles De Lint.)

I'll be editing the others ASAP ... most of my editing is just rules reminders and recommendations, which I put into the document in red. I'll be sending everyone's back for a final revision.

Does anyone want to edit mine?

Shouldn't our netbook have an intro? What kind of intro text should we have?

Do we want additional submissions? Eight is a good number and I really wanted to highlight the stuff from the contest.

Thanks!

 

[kingpaul]

Re: Slowly

Does anyone want to edit mine?

Which one/s was/were your's again?

Shouldn't our netbook have an intro? What kind of intro text should we have?

It probably should. How 'bout seeing if Wil @ FFG would be willing to do one.

Do we want additional submissions? Eight is a good number and I really wanted to highlight the stuff from the contest.

We could, doesn't matter to me. I'll work up an example NPC (maxed out) for each of mine, with some background text as well. Should probably help out those reading the NB what the classes are about.

 

[kingpaul]

*bump*

 

[Ruavel]

NPC's

We could, doesn't matter to me. I'll work up an example NPC (maxed out) for each of mine, with some background text as well. Should probably help out those reading the NB what the classes are about.

is it worth all included submissions having an example NPC created to demonstrate the theme/spirit and power of the class...?

if so, I'll happily produce one each for the King's Warden and the Maitre d'Escrime...



btw - has anyone received copies of Path of the Sword as part of their prize yet...?

 

[RedCliff]

storm submission

Here's the Storm. Several abilities have undergone heavy revision, much based on feedback I received here.

If people are hungry for more classes, I could chuck in my other one, the Tender to the Essential Essence. This one wasn't particularly popular however, which is why I held it back initially. If it's needed, I could conceivably get it out much faster than I did this one.

And to answer an earlier question, no, I haven't received my book yet, but I believe d20Dwarf said they wouldn't be going out until after Gen Con, so I'm not unduly antsy yet (aside from the normal I WANT IT NOW syndrome that accompanies all cool products).

 

[kingpaul]

shameless bump

*bump*

 

[Shadeus]

Here's a revised Dwarven Forgemaster (which you can obviously add to the list of those in the book).

 

[Ruavel]

where are we at...?

has anyone heard anything from Khur about the status of the proposed Netbook and the editing process...?