FINAL FANTASY....Myrkr Foe 5/20,new finished system attached

[Felikeries]

what in fact is real criricism is taken from the finished stystem that is set with the word doc,if you don't appreciate the type set the word program can change that

babbling about what i post after the enemies that have been posted about
none of this makes any sense is a problem in which you've failed to make a situational example with the game system that is there

every aspect is covered,character creation,skills etc,weapons,armour and various items and spells for the casting classes,with no real issue other than blabbery about that which isn't with no examples,from the actual 'charter' then i'm afraid this illusion about 'highschool' mentality is really you're own

perhaps the question i expected may just be answered as a 'theretofor'

the hipiffany,usurptions, extra for the hp entails the highest(other than d20) die that one has available (damage first,and if a set number rather than die is stated make the appropraite conversion) that one of this die is used for the level hp assertation

the other id adj the traite scores(just after the first class hp 'chart')which
entails that -hp is permanent and used as for each die rolled for that 1 rank,using the adj/mod is iether an actuall or daily use rank

 

[evileeyore]

what in fact is real criricism is taken from the finished stystem that is set with the word doc,if you don't appreciate the type set the word program can change that

You are right very little real criticism concerning your game structure or rules have been presented to you.

Unfortunately we can't decipher them. It isn't the font type, its your lack of proper English Grammar, Spelling, and Punctuation. Also the strange inclusion of new words, although in your defense, I have groked roughly half of them.

babbling about what i post after the enemies that have been posted about
none of this makes any sense is a problem in which you've failed to make a situational example with the game system that is there

Again, true. Repeating what others have gripped about (mainly grammar, spelling, and punctuation), instead of rules discussions distract from your threads thesis. However in their (the 'enemies') favor I argue that you really should try harder to post in English. Not just substitute English words using another grammar structure.

every aspect is covered,character creation,skills etc,weapons,armour and various items and spells for the casting classes,with no real issue other than blabbery about that which isn't with no examples,from the actual 'charter' then i'm afraid this illusion about 'highschool' mentality is really you're own

True, however what you keep missing is that it isn't the system they are having problems with, it is your mangling of the english syntax. They can't even comprehend the basics of your system because it isn't conforming to basic English Grammatical Structures.

perhaps the question i expected may just be answered as a 'theretofor'

Deep Philosophy.

uncovered your 2 paragraph end i leave,unuseful to arguement my end from

--Trying to speak in his native tongue--EvilE

Editted: Sorry mispelled a few things up there.

 

[Berandor]

Body referencing spelling issues no longer accepting. Many of most why do not read; know is in written. Kept checking against spells, so you not understood.

Pleasy comply?

 

[Felikeries]

there exists that mediun for all the great think tanks to accept
constructive criticism,and these replies to better relays for the RPG system aren't it....so just step away and let the individuals who took the opportunity
to take the 'file' in the first post and use or look through it make any
sort of questions etc be voiced


There exists a version II if this issue gets any interest it may be made available,it has a totally different system,but same idea for style generaly or so to say

 

[Fieari]

I'm going to try and say this in a way you may understand. Apologies to everyone else.

tHere exists a 'negativ' amunt of poeple what read actualy who wrote... the opportunity taken not by anyhow. any who look must needs read befro questions muster can be,surely you no this.intrest cannto be found least they can read what ritten was.this is what has been said.so must you understand.if any had read any would have been seen.since none been seen, it needs must 'therofor' be understod that none can 'exist'
voices of the nonexistant harder to hear than voices of the 'dead'

 

[Remathilis]

I get!

Befro I stair at docfile,i have question abowt 'storyconcept' that needs 'clearingup' so to say.

1.) Is this bassd on any form of of Final Fantasy videogame? If yes, then what one?

2.) How close is it to Dungon and Dragon game/system? please fill in,

3.) What is it yoo want lookers to criteeck? Is it system,balance,flavor or specifik part yoo want?

 

[Felikeries]

very funny,almost impactive

just make a reference to the 'file' and a segment specifically
such as Usurptions....Celestien spells... etc

the story which represents this is a different issue,and if you take the time to look at what's said it is sembled to a degree that makes it a style of presentation not a blathering rant,as for the chopped breaking at the right column i don't know why but when put from the word doc it was made that way,if anybody wants the word doc in the special font i can hyperlink it

 

[Azlan]

it's papyrus actually which sets the eerie tone for that type of action
the bold for it doesn't have the same effect so it's got the style but is fairly
minescule,and scince it's some magic any alter form creations some of the other fonts are too bland iether,no emotion,or computer looking

at issue the traite rollers are funny,and harsh,if you prefer a certain class,then it's no go for any bad luck,but in actuality the Usurptions,Talents and Skills,oh and Hipiffanys can do a good bit of help,the actual use for traites in combat is not vise versa,so the players are only deprived a bit

Speak #$%@ing english, you moron!

 

[slingbld]

Ok, The jokes aside.
I have to say I give up on this guy. He keeps referring us to the word document he included in the first post and says read it before making comments.

Ok, We keep telling him that the EXTREMELY poor grammar makes that next to imposible to do. We have asked that he post a cleaned up (I mean spell checked & slightly better organized) version of his document so that we could read through his system. He only comes back and says we are not getting the flavor text. I'm sorry but poor spelling & bad grammar are not flavor text.

Felikeries, Can you clean the document up??

That is all I'm asking. Clean the M&#$%#@ F@#$%& up and we might be able to understand.

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Is that clear enough??

Stop trying to deffend it & clean it the heck up!

After you clean it up, post it. When you post it. Make sure your post makes sense. (That means being mindfull of spelling & grammar in your posts).

Thank you,
Annoyed~

 

[Ravellion]

If this is intended to publish, I'd say you need an editor. A professional one. I charge only €0,04 per word because I haven't graduated uni yet.

Your way of putting it:
After the ruffian counter cultural years when the new Empires of Ghestei,Meiolu,Cruy,and Fiuelle
began their march into the history of the known material dimensions,that satisifed enough of the common physical and nurtitional needs of living beings;the accesses from alternate planes that had fallen through the cycles of demi- god and celestial prats that scorned the people,and made disasters in the natural connection of the magic bonds of their lands with those who spent their time there;began leaking their meta-psycic energies to these empires.The tales of misbeggoten strange beings,shrouded in magic scorn in the taverns.

My way of putting it:
After the Ruffian counter-cultural-years several new empires emerged. Going by the names of Ghestei, Meiolu, Cruy, and Fiuelle, these empires began to make themselves known in the known material dimensions that satisfied the physical and nutritional needs most living beings share. The planar acces points these empires used started to affect the people who lived near them. According to legend they started to develop into strange beings that were subject to scorn because of their magical energy.