Huw
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humble minion said:Easiest solution is to make him (her?) the anti-Sparrow. Aristocratic, prim, methodical, disciplined, and cultured. The name of his ship is a classical allusion. Rather than rum, he probably buys his crew a barrel of a different fine brandy each voyage, to educate them on the nuances of quality spirits. He has studied under seven different renowned fencing masters, and fights like an elegant, poised mincing machine. He invites his respected enemies over for port and cigars, and is impeccably polite to the ladies. You get the idea...
That's actually quite close. He's based mainly on captain Nemo, with a bit of Sinbad and Francis Drake. Definitely a port and cigars man. He's good with children, 'cause he's not entirely sure which are his own. Plenty of connections in high places, plenty of enemies too.
His background's not the problem. His mannerisms are what I've got problems working on. He's cocky and defiant, and that's when he starts sounding like Jack and my writing goes off course.